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AlphaCentaurus
04-27-2010, 05:59 PM
OK. So, I got Flash around Christmas. The first day, I went into a frenzy, without knowing what the heck I was supposed to be doing ;) Of course, I did frame by frame. ;p Now, some months later, I've been working on and off (emphasis on off), and have decided to post what I have so far. I decided to go big, and somewhat mimic style of combat I saw from the real animations on StickPage. You might notice the art at the beginning was supremely unprofessional. But, hey. You can actively see the quality increase after that grenade bit ;) that was after a couple months of inactivity. I also plan to have a real title... that's why there is that big pause at the start. Here's what I plan the music to be:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/157014

Story: The general has hidden inside a abandoned warehouse where he has been testing on a new gas, which once perfected, will change the method of war completely. The hero has broken into the warehouse and must fight past loads of guards to get to the general.

http://www.truploader.com/view/847847

This is not finished. Far from it. I encourage criticism, advice, and comments.

Vendetta
04-27-2010, 07:29 PM
Very uneased, and I got the impression that it was done kind of lazily. Redraw almost ever frame, don't just drag them around

keep practicing though! I liked the explosion

bubbles
04-28-2010, 10:29 AM
Remember that stickmen shouldn't have necks.

Kieran.
04-28-2010, 10:38 AM
You and the animation have talent. You just need brushing up on the basics.

Look around in our "Flash Tutorials" section.
Look here http://www.youtube.com/user/FlyingPanda1990
Look at stonesbucket.com