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dawG
04-22-2008, 01:12 PM
Hi guys, I just started this anim today! :b

Should I continue?

http://antiup.net/view.php?id=9614466635Gun%20pwns.swf

Btw fps: 14

Edit: http://antiup.net/view.php?id=40215553454Gun%20pwns.swf

Fps noaw: 12

SSOutPhase
04-22-2008, 01:26 PM
Looks nice. Not much to crit on. The brain comin out of his head didn't look right. It'd make more sense if his head was torn open first. Other than that, very nice. Continue.

Drifts
04-22-2008, 01:41 PM
I like it, very well done, as ssOutPhase said not much to critique because it's good already, but just for curiosity...what is left there to continue?

dawG
04-22-2008, 02:16 PM
Thx guys :D

Well Drifts your kinda right, I can't actually continue this..
lol

alive
04-22-2008, 02:50 PM
Imo you should ease the fall more.

kinto
04-22-2008, 02:52 PM
Reminds me of Unreal Tournament 4 when you shoot them their brain comes out of nowhere.

M1CKY
04-22-2008, 04:32 PM
lol kinto, dont liek the fall, but i suppose it depends on the intened style, it looks pretty bouncy, which i liek. Might not pass with others though.

Dudeman
04-22-2008, 05:10 PM
Imo you should ease the fall more.

What? The fall was way too slow already.

In my opinion, that was the worst part. He got shot, quickly felt recoil, and then slowly fell backwards. The speed change from fast to not so fast was the problem.

Some exit blood spray would be nice as well. Just off set it from the impact blood by 1 frame.

NubbyGG
04-24-2008, 05:00 AM
Yes I think u should continue coz it looks pretty sweet like the background
it looks pretty good nice work

dawG
04-24-2008, 01:02 PM
Thanks for the comments guys :D

I edited it take a look.

Ichimaruu
04-24-2008, 03:01 PM
Haha, I didn't realise what the brain was till i actually thought about it :P but i think you should keep it because it adds to the comedy :P