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Sparco
04-23-2008, 06:01 PM
yeah I'm finally getting to know max a bit better. so my next step is to fiddle with lightning and such. here's a little table scene.

http://i32.tinypic.com/dbjp8o.jpg

Doomdooer
04-23-2008, 06:12 PM
hmm, not bad.
I think the tablecloth needs more depth to the texturing, and I dislike the wood texture of the floor and chair. They look to pale and bland.
Also, the floor needs a shine, since wood floors are coated with a shiny substance to prevent water absorbtion.

The toast and plate look great.
The top of the glass looks odd. Possibly due to the wierd top edge and black coloring.
The walls look good.

LakE
04-23-2008, 06:41 PM
I like it, especially the shadow of the glass, The bread, and the plate.
The floor looks as if it rises. Not too keen on the window, either.

Really good job though. Keep it up.

Vervanda
04-23-2008, 06:42 PM
from the looks of it there are no windows above post.

LakE
04-23-2008, 06:45 PM
I meant the missing block in the wall, sorry.
Ruins the whole thing, in my opinion.

"Above post"? That's cold...

Vervanda
04-23-2008, 06:46 PM
sos my heart and soul

iStick G
04-23-2008, 06:56 PM
Dude, you drew that?! That's awsome! It's so realistic! I thought it was a photo at first!

Vervanda
04-23-2008, 07:11 PM
he didnt draw it, he modeled it. and rendered it.

the afro ninja
04-23-2008, 08:08 PM
Dude, you drew that?! That's awsome! It's so realistic! I thought it was a photo at first!

God ****ing new shit.

The glass and toast were perfect. Walls look warped though and like said earlier, wood texture needs work.

Demonix
04-23-2008, 09:15 PM
I think it looks great and the bread looks awesome but it does look kinda soggy

Sparco
04-24-2008, 01:42 AM
thanks for the feedback guys, ill try to fix some small errors here and there and maybe add some stuff :)

Dragonkof
04-25-2008, 05:59 AM
i thought it was a photo at first, then i saw the walls, and the ground.


=D

the bread makes me hungry >=(

SRC
04-25-2008, 09:32 AM
cool. but i think the floor should be fixed :)

monk
05-04-2008, 08:09 PM
the part of the floor with the light on it is the only problem i have with this picture. In my eyes its B-E-A-utiful mate. :>