View Full Version : A watchable short fight. [LD]

04-23-2008, 08:21 PM
This is probably my best work yet. It sucks, but still.... good for me.

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04-23-2008, 08:30 PM
Seems sort of wobbly but it looks good overall.

04-23-2008, 08:35 PM
You need some sounds up in thayr.

04-23-2008, 08:40 PM
I know. And a little v-cam too, but Ima was hella exited to show you. Sorry.

04-23-2008, 08:42 PM
Yeah, i didn't like run too much, on both the sticks, it was ok though.

04-23-2008, 09:18 PM
Ok.... any Constructive Crit?

04-23-2008, 09:19 PM
Try and draw the sticks a bit more consistently, also, don't make the outline that thick on the blobs. The run also needs work at the end.

04-23-2008, 09:52 PM
I like the red glow and the explosion. And the splash at the base of said explosion, tho. So no....

04-23-2008, 10:31 PM
Dude that beam effect was so tight. You have nice particle effects.

For now focus on getting the movements of the people down.

04-23-2008, 11:23 PM
woah fat particles CAN be attractive O_o
I'm not sure if you over used filters, or used just enough. The only filter I disliked were the blur on the sticks (they weren't too bad).
and for the running, have the stick's leg extend when going forward and have them show the push off from the ground.

04-23-2008, 11:56 PM
particle physics were the sex.

04-24-2008, 03:49 AM
lol O_o I don't really like the big blobs, at first I thought it was gonna dissolve but it just splashes onto the ground and stays there XD Its ok, a bit wobby, try using Pencil, and youll see the stick become less wobby. MUAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA

but yeah its ok, try drawing the stick more carefully.

04-24-2008, 04:23 AM
Awesome. I didn;t like the way the sticks were drawn though.

04-24-2008, 04:27 AM
That wassnt to bad the particle effects were pretty good nice work

04-24-2008, 04:27 AM
I didnt like how the effects stayed on the ground, and didnt particilyze

NubbyGG, stop using your ninja powers to post infront of me.