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leedon
04-23-2008, 08:21 PM
This is probably my best work yet. It sucks, but still.... good for me.

width=550 height=400
http://antiup.net/files/82619785628red%20vs%20black.swf

kinto
04-23-2008, 08:30 PM
Seems sort of wobbly but it looks good overall.

Kitsune
04-23-2008, 08:35 PM
You need some sounds up in thayr.

leedon
04-23-2008, 08:40 PM
I know. And a little v-cam too, but Ima was hella exited to show you. Sorry.

Etch
04-23-2008, 08:42 PM
Yeah, i didn't like run too much, on both the sticks, it was ok though.

leedon
04-23-2008, 09:18 PM
Ok.... any Constructive Crit?

kinto
04-23-2008, 09:19 PM
Try and draw the sticks a bit more consistently, also, don't make the outline that thick on the blobs. The run also needs work at the end.

leedon
04-23-2008, 09:52 PM
I like the red glow and the explosion. And the splash at the base of said explosion, tho. So no....

Lf2Master
04-23-2008, 10:31 PM
Dude that beam effect was so tight. You have nice particle effects.

For now focus on getting the movements of the people down.

mraznbuddy
04-23-2008, 11:23 PM
woah fat particles CAN be attractive O_o
I'm not sure if you over used filters, or used just enough. The only filter I disliked were the blur on the sticks (they weren't too bad).
and for the running, have the stick's leg extend when going forward and have them show the push off from the ground.

Jet
04-23-2008, 11:56 PM
particle physics were the sex.

Ssjbryando
04-24-2008, 03:49 AM
lol O_o I don't really like the big blobs, at first I thought it was gonna dissolve but it just splashes onto the ground and stays there XD Its ok, a bit wobby, try using Pencil, and youll see the stick become less wobby. MUAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA

but yeah its ok, try drawing the stick more carefully.

Raffi
04-24-2008, 04:23 AM
Awesome. I didn;t like the way the sticks were drawn though.

NubbyGG
04-24-2008, 04:27 AM
That wassnt to bad the particle effects were pretty good nice work

Dragonkof
04-24-2008, 04:27 AM
I didnt like how the effects stayed on the ground, and didnt particilyze


NubbyGG, stop using your ninja powers to post infront of me.