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Cedric
02-29-2012, 05:19 AM
Came out pretty well in my opinion:

http://shynzo-nai.deviantart.com/art/Fightz-287815261

jadriel0117
02-29-2012, 05:29 AM
Can u post fileize or truploader? Don't work

Cedric
02-29-2012, 05:34 AM
http://www.fileize.com/view/1a8a1730-5a5/

jadriel0117
02-29-2012, 05:52 AM
Yep! Tnx

jadriel0117
02-29-2012, 05:56 AM
Ok,
First, I like the smoothness.
I like the reflection thing and
the quality.
Only one thing needs to improve is the blood.
More realistic of Blood would be more cool.

Overall: nice
score:9/10

Tentionmaru
02-29-2012, 08:12 AM
the movements look too limp for my tastes, but I like your sense of force here.

Kitsune
02-29-2012, 08:36 AM
The second kick the red bodied figure does is really hidden and obscured. I don't think that pose is working very well for describing a kick as clearly as possible, but I did get the picture the first time i saw it.
Also the reflection effect looks kinda fake. You see the fluctuations of opacity in the reflection? THat's because the reflection is still a line. You need to go into whatever movie clip or whatever you used to make the reflection effect, select all of the lines, go to modify>shape>convert lines to fills and the effect should look better. This should take you like 3 minutes at most if you use the edit multiple frames tool (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?2760-Flash-Editing-Multiple-Frames)

But other than that I agree with Tention. A little limp.



More realistic of Blood would be more cool.

Famous last words of half of stickpage animators.

Cedric
02-29-2012, 08:57 AM
edit multiple frames tool (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?2760-Flash-Editing-Multiple-Frames)

Woah, didn't know this, it's gonna be helpful.
Thanks mate!

Also, waaah, Tentionmaru on my topic!

Thank you all