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Jet
04-24-2008, 01:49 AM
http://pivothost.org/public/pbserver1/1209110786.gif

Yup.
Mah new one.
Tried an explosion...did it work?
.
yeah its kinda half-assed but it was fun to animate, especially with bolts midget.
<3 enjoi!

p-man
04-24-2008, 01:58 AM
it was pretty good the movements were a little bit off but overall it was a good anim
that smoke/ dust effect when he moved his foot was killer loved it did u make the sticks or did some1 else

Jet
04-24-2008, 02:08 AM
sorry, yeah, forgot to credit droidz.com.
Thanks.
can someone please tell me wwhat they thought of the explosion?

p-man
04-24-2008, 02:10 AM
o sorry i knew i was forgeting something
the explosion was good but i think you could of slowed it down a bit, it looks like it grew to fast, fix it and it will look much better imo

Jet
04-24-2008, 02:12 AM
okay thanks.
Sooomebody else gonna post?

Dragonkof
04-24-2008, 04:14 AM
i dont like your sticks movements, they seemed, choppy and uneased.



Stiff at times.

try Jons Transparency stick when the buildings are engulfed in the explosion

Jet
04-24-2008, 04:53 AM
lol i know i grew lazy.
what can i say? im only med/high begginer ='(

Dragonkof
04-24-2008, 04:58 AM
meh, YOU SHOULD BE BETTAR.

your jet, and according to some nub ages ago.

they called you the Legendary Jet.

WHY THE **** ISNT IT THE LEGENDARY DRAGONKOF

Jet
04-24-2008, 05:15 AM
HA!
lol.
im liek, just out of noobville and already im a ledgend upon noobs.
your not.
HA!
lol.
I think, maybe, its cause your like...i dunno...to random?
heh...
im so awesome...

Excuse me while i go and reflect on my pure awesomeness...

sss
04-24-2008, 06:02 AM
HA!
lol.
im liek, just out of noobville and already im a ledgend upon noobs.
your not.
HA!
lol.
I think, maybe, its cause your like...i dunno...to random?
heh...
im so awesome...

Excuse me while i go and reflect on my pure awesomeness...


selfish little boy

Jet
04-24-2008, 06:03 AM
i know XD
your avatar is making meh horneh...
like.

sss
04-24-2008, 06:06 AM
Stop right there parter ! you can poke someones eye with that boner of yours !

Jet
04-24-2008, 06:08 AM
i lul'd. quite hard, actually.
but am not gonna sig it cause mah sig ownes already.
As does my avatar.

dawG
04-24-2008, 03:51 PM
selfish little boy

SSS you just don't get anything...

Well i liked it, and the movements weren't bad.

Keep it up <3

Dude_Man
04-24-2008, 04:31 PM
The movements were pretty choppy.But it was good.The explosion went a bit to fast to tell what was going on, but overall pretty good.

Darc
04-24-2008, 04:44 PM
Not too bad. I like the idea and your attempt at the explosion. The movements were a little awkward at times, but not too stiff. Everyone covered the explosion, make it build up slower, and use transparency on buildings. You could do a little work on the running too, and pretty smooth. I like-ed it :D

Lone Wolf
04-24-2008, 05:49 PM
To be honest, that animation didn't seem like you put any effort into it. You skipped movements, and what movements that were there were choopy uneased, and jerky. The landings seemed to just stop instantly, with no easing. Overall, I didn't really like it.

sss
04-25-2008, 05:38 AM
SSS you just don't get anything...


No,you dont get it

Frodomoj
04-25-2008, 12:07 PM
That animation was mostly absolutely horrible, especially the explosion.

GO GO GO ATOKNIIRO FOR THE SMOKE EFFECT
AtokNiiro owns, seriously. He does.

Jet
04-26-2008, 09:01 AM
Thanks Guys.
Frodo, i would like constructive comments please. I appreciate your opinion but you could try to be more helpful.

Wounded
04-26-2008, 05:06 PM
it was pretty good the movements were a little bit off but overall it was a good anim
that smoke/ dust effect when he moved his foot was killer loved it did u make the sticks or did some1 else

I say the same.

sss
04-27-2008, 01:29 AM
I say the same.

stupid .

Jet
04-27-2008, 05:44 AM
awwh, thanks hunny.
<3

Elblem
04-27-2008, 01:35 PM
Was stiff, uneased, and had bad physics. Work on those.