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-Hawk-
04-24-2008, 03:47 PM
Background inspired by TMan's 300.

I made this in like two hours : http://www.antiup.net/files/71414925684Tman%5C's%20300%20parody%20bg.swf

What do you think ?

New Generation
04-24-2008, 04:08 PM
Grass is bad. Sun is okay. The rays are okay too.

The tree should be covered in more shading, not just 3 colors, but like 5 or more colors, each getting darker, use the color tab, where you can move the arrow to make the color darker.

-Hawk-
04-24-2008, 04:16 PM
I used the color tab I'm not stupid you know ? lol

Thanks anyway.

Ahtex!
04-24-2008, 05:25 PM
actually looks pretty good :)

-Hawk-
04-25-2008, 02:04 AM
More comments please...

mraznbuddy
04-25-2008, 02:10 AM
I didn't like how the background looked chunky. It just killed it for me.
Try finding picture of real trees and refer off them, it'll give you a better understanding on how they look and how the branches extend.
Try fixing up the sketchy look, it doesn't really appeal to me.
They sky for me it was pretty decent, maybe don't use the blur for the sun ray.

I'd say keep on practicing and getting use to controlling your strokes.
Keep it up

-Hawk-
04-25-2008, 02:12 AM
"for me" appeared too many times....

NubbyGG
04-25-2008, 04:05 AM
The background was alright but the colours were to soft

mraznbuddy
04-25-2008, 09:54 PM
I'm just making sure that you know that it was my opinion and that it may interest others.
Another thing is that you may want to outline some objects with a darker tone of the original color. I couldn't see the grass in the front at first.

Apples
04-26-2008, 09:11 AM
Art section get?

Mesmay
04-26-2008, 03:21 PM
Art section get?

says the guy who sends his game to this section lol


Bg was ok, but i didnt like the way there was only 3-4 branches and they were all so thick.

Miccool
04-26-2008, 05:42 PM
colour choices for the bushes need work. Zoom in more the brush strokes look fat and ugly. clouds needs a more.. uhh.. "cloudy" look. Tree could be drawn better. But better than your last one..