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Irian
03-21-2012, 12:50 PM
http://www.fileize.com/view/dcd20c72-3e2/

Lol pen tool.

CrewKid
03-21-2012, 03:36 PM
Well the movements are good, but the sticks are extremely wobbly.
Also, you use way too much double framing, it makes the animation less consistent and
messes up the overall flow of the animation. I'm not saying dont dbf but do it less and animate more
keyframes instead. Feel me? Also, check the balance of sticks because the attacker after his kick was SLIGHTLY off balance.

Easing is there, force, momentum, good gravity, flow, I see it all. It's a really solid animation with some minor touch ups
that could MAJORLY improve the product.

Irian
03-21-2012, 04:04 PM
Well the movements are good, but the sticks are extremely wobbly.
Also, you use way too much double framing, it makes the animation less consistent and
messes up the overall flow of the animation. I'm not saying dont dbf but do it less and animate more
keyframes instead. Feel me? Also, check the balance of sticks because the attacker after his kick was SLIGHTLY off balance.

Easing is there, force, momentum, good gravity, flow, I see it all. It's a really solid animation with some minor touch ups
that could MAJORLY improve the product.

:eek: thanks a lot man. Haven't gotten constructive criticism in like, forever.