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Sonicmanqaz
03-25-2012, 01:05 PM
This is a combo i made in about 15 minutes
http://www.truploader.com/view/752674

This is me making it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8W7M4eQHOU

As always CnC appreciated. I know there is some wobbling. So i guess just try to critique around it.
Please and Thank you

MadMirrors
03-25-2012, 04:18 PM
Work a little harder on the kicks it look like you got a little lazy there.

raynmetal
03-25-2012, 10:25 PM
Both the punch and the kick could have done with a lot more power, ie you could have had a few frames of the guy charging up his punch, and just one frame for the punch.
Also, most people sort of punch in a bend-elbow then extend-elbow manner, not the circular movements you've put down.
Make it a point to draw the body on every frame, or at least as many as possible, because your animation seemed very stiff.
Another thing, try to keep physics in mind while animating. For the last kick, it seems as if the stickman was leaning so far that he should have ideally fallen.


Please, have a look at as many tutorials as possible, they'll really help.
Good luck :D