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XMugenX
03-26-2012, 12:29 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view/680786
Just a small 3 hit combo. Nothing too fancy. C&C would be greatly appreciated. This Is my first post here on stickpage, so If I did something wrong please tell me. Thank you.

supranova
03-26-2012, 02:50 PM
Hello Mugen, welcome to stickpage!

Not to shabby especially for a first post! The first punch was not too bad, but the transition from the uppercut to the mid air kick could use some work. Have the stick crouch down more when preparing for the uppercut, bending his knees, then straighten them quickly to have him jump at the same time as the punch. This quick transition will have him moving upwards quickly, and cause him to leap up to kick instead of float up.

Keep at it!

toramaki
03-26-2012, 06:46 PM
probably better than what I can do. I would just work on the easing for the jump. overall pretty dope.

lilg742ster
03-26-2012, 10:05 PM
Good but could be better

Travis
03-27-2012, 03:17 PM
the animation itself is choppy and stiff... there is no smooth movements in your attacks and every attack lacks easing.

using more frames and adding anticipation will help greatly

XMugenX
03-27-2012, 03:56 PM
Thank you all for you'r comments, I'll take them all into consideration.

Patt The ODST
03-27-2012, 03:57 PM
May we ask if you have an idea for an RHG yet?

XMugenX
03-27-2012, 04:00 PM
I have some ideas, but I'm not to focused on that yet. I haven't made a single lengthy animation and based on the C&C this little animation Itself needs some work.

Patt The ODST
03-27-2012, 04:07 PM
nice- focussing on basics before rhg-I made some ideas for rhgs for my friends but i don't think they willl use them- please come to me to start your rhg if you would- I also make great art for them.
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XMugenX
03-27-2012, 04:15 PM
Thank you, I'll keep you in mind.

Patt The ODST
03-27-2012, 04:18 PM
please do- lazy ass friends almost wasted Haze and Pheonix- which are freaking awesome RHGs