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Kinru
04-14-2012, 06:43 PM
http://www.truploader.com/view/565577

So that's my second animation ever. Was probably trying to practice too many things at once (slowmo, camera rotation, swords, some effects, etc). What I'm finding the most difficult to do is get the figures to have realistic motion. I've never drawn anything in my life really so I guess it just takes practice.

I also have a lot of trouble with perspective, but have been told that that is extremely difficult in general, let alone for beginners.

Constructive criticism wanted! Would love to hear some input on how to make it look better. I was thinking for my next try I would just do a simple fight. No effects or fancy anything, just a hand to hand battle to try and practice at realistic motion.

Thanks.