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Michael the Janitor
04-26-2008, 03:59 AM
http://antiup.net/view.php?id=612003831holymoleyastickfight.swf
http://www.swfme.com/view/1142422
hahah I'm such a noob :(

crits and comments!

-Hawk-
04-26-2008, 05:56 AM
Wow, it's good. Xiao style ;)

.Aklemo.
04-26-2008, 07:13 AM
Good but the blood needs to be improved and the background wasn't quite understandable. Reflection was good but a little too much because of the slant angle you put. But it was good, your improving.

dawG
04-26-2008, 07:30 AM
Nice background, but the animation wasn't good.
The movements weren't right, and it should have more easing...

mraznbuddy
04-26-2008, 01:45 PM
the movements were good. try to emphasize the punches and kicks to make them more noticeable because to me the first punch looked like he just ran into the blue guy.
the background was nice, just thought the moon could use a little touch up.

keep it up.

iStick G
04-26-2008, 02:04 PM
Hey that's pretty cool. Good stuff!

Michael the Janitor
04-26-2008, 10:19 PM
thanks everyone for your replies :D

Clutch
04-27-2008, 08:24 AM
This might really help you so try it. Use line for 2-3 anims and get used to it and then make a short with line, it will help you with your shakiness.
But i do see a lot of potential.