View Full Version : Hi again!

05-11-2012, 11:17 PM

C&C Please. :)

05-12-2012, 03:48 AM
The last two kicks look a bit off. I'd say they're going more upwards than forwards. And when he stands up I think he puts his feet a touch too close to his hands. Other than that, really nice and bouncy. I really love the light grey trail thingy. That looks great.

Wait, what is that back arm doing when he jumps? It's like he's riding an invisible pony.

05-12-2012, 04:22 AM
My only gripe with it is at the end, his lower body seems far too static after the flip. The yellow dot just sort of stops.
Also, nice to see you post once and a while Zed.

05-12-2012, 08:29 AM
thanks for the comments guys!