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Foscex
05-23-2012, 09:54 AM
hey guys, i wanted to make a kind of spin shot test, i turned out pretty bad,
can you guys cnc me on how to inprove this???
i wanted to make a serieus project using this move
so plz halp meh!

http://www.fileize.com/view/fafb76f9-e46/

thanks

Xyper
05-23-2012, 10:05 AM
It doesn't look like a spin at all, but fear not it is still an awesome angle practice. One thing I would like you to try is delete the frame where he extends his arm right before pointing the gun at the screen, that way it will look really nice.
Right now it does look kinda weird because you failed to make the spin effect, and don't feel bad about that btw that effect is super hard to do, I couldn't do it if my life depended on it.
If you really wanna make it like a spin you need more frames of the actual movement. And you can put little guidelines like you would behind a sword when moving fast ya know? The guidelines will make it really clear, and you can just add more frames, the most helpful tool you have is the eyes, make one eye pop first then the other (you know what I'm talking about)

kemical
05-23-2012, 03:03 PM
does this look ok? I rushed it in like 7mins http://www.fileize.com/view/4c43eb30-c63/ maybe it could help

Zoebe
05-23-2012, 04:11 PM
Maybe if you made the longer leg shink more during the turn?

Meatpies
05-23-2012, 06:42 PM
THAT IS COOL MAN!!!111 the poses are a bit odd though :):):)

Foscex
05-24-2012, 06:15 AM
thanks guys,
kemical,
nice man, and thanks, it helped me kinda

XaioShadow
05-24-2012, 06:17 AM
i like the cracked screen effect :D