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Bazamm
05-30-2012, 08:05 PM
Howdy folks, this is my first time posting on the stickpage forums. Decided to have another shot at animating after 2 years, hope you enjoy!

http://www.fileize.com/view/7f9f538f-e9e/

Any and all feedback is appreciated.

Edit: My bad, swapped it to Fileize. Well aren't you friendly?

HyMaster
05-30-2012, 08:15 PM
Introduce yourself first before posting topics like this.And also,Don't upload animations on FA anymore.Upload it on fileize or truploader

DarkTime21
05-30-2012, 08:17 PM
In my opinion, the Red stick sould have had fire and the blue one with water because it makes more sense

Bazamm
05-30-2012, 08:30 PM
Yeah I hadn't really planned it out, I kind of made it up as I went along. Anybody got any advice for keeping the sticks smooth? I've got a bit of a problem with wobbliness.

therevenant
05-31-2012, 01:53 AM
i can see a BIG resizing here!
(use guideline if it's not already done)

Bazamm
06-01-2012, 07:50 AM
Yeah, I think I can work on that. At one point I accidently swapped brush sizes! By guidelines do you mean background likes to show the height of legs/body?

Fp3
06-01-2012, 09:03 AM
The particles could use some work.

Bazamm
06-02-2012, 02:41 AM
In what way? Please be specific, I want to improve as much as possible.