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Wounded
04-29-2008, 08:10 PM
I practice alot with pivot , I just got back into it due to I took a long break, alittle rusty but I will get rid of it

Here is a animation I made, hopeing to finish it, making it longer than it already is PS: ignore when the second time it turns black, the three legs guy spins backwards on accident, and you will notice sometimes I rushed it making it look choppy.. But hope ya like it xD http://img205.imageshack.us/my.php?image=3legsfx2.gif

Edit: After countless attempts and tries to make a easing punch , learning by staring into a mirror , watching countless tutorials and two bottles of soda I decided to reattempt at making a easing punch from one side the next , heh looks pretty stupid so lets not stare at the legs xD i focused more on the power of the back and the arms , head. Tips yes? http://img525.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtest2ym2.gif


Heres the first punch easing test from the double punch: http://img501.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtestsmoothmt2.gif

ScatMan
04-29-2008, 08:36 PM
Wow. That was great. If we were still using ranks,I'd rank you Intermediate. But,we through those out the window. I give it a 15/10

Babapadaple
04-29-2008, 08:43 PM
Its good, only a little bit choppy.
Funny too... 9/10

Jet
04-29-2008, 11:52 PM
3/10.

Choppy, Stiiff and uneased.

Dragonkof
04-30-2008, 04:38 AM
Choppy, Stiiff, uneased and unfluid

Wounded
04-30-2008, 05:15 AM
Wow. That was great. If we were still using ranks,I'd rank you Intermediate. But,we through those out the window. I give it a 15/10


Its good, only a little bit choppy.
Funny too... 9/10


3/10.

Choppy, Stiiff and uneased.


Choppy, Stiiff, uneased and unfluid


Thanks for the reviews, ill try to work on making it more fluid like...

Automaton
04-30-2008, 05:43 AM
hey Darc and Jet, surely it wasnt that bad? i quite liked it. maybe even inter material. i think it was a little choppy, and maybe uneased, but it didnt look too bad to me. 7/10

Doomdooer
04-30-2008, 07:04 AM
hey Darc and Jet, surely it wasnt that bad? i quite liked it. maybe even inter material. i think it was a little choppy, and maybe uneased, but it didnt look too bad to me. 7/10

No, it was solidly in the range of beginner.



First of all, Wounded, welcome to the forums.
Now, about the animation. Yeah, it was pretty uneased and stiff. Also choppy in some parts.
However, what I enjoyed most was that you know what has to be fixed. You already realized that you needed to make your animations fluid and it sounds like you tried your best toward that end.
I congratulate you for that.

If you haven't already been told this, looking at some tutorials will help you a whole lot of money. www.darkdemon.org has a lot of great tutorials, especially Bahamut's Ultimate Tut.


Very good try for a beginner. Keep going and you'll get better.
Also, if you ever need any help, there are plenty of animators around who'll be perfectly willing to give you a hand.

Dragonkof
04-30-2008, 07:20 AM
No, it was solidly in the range of beginner.



First of all, Wounded, welcome to the forums.
Now, about the animation. Yeah, it was pretty uneased and stiff. Also choppy in some parts.
However, what I enjoyed most was that you know what has to be fixed. You already realized that you needed to make your animations fluid and it sounds like you tried your best toward that end.
I congratulate you for that.

Very good try for a beginner. Keep going and you'll get better.
Also, if you ever need any help, there are plenty of animators around who'll be perfectly willing to give you a hand.

1) After i mentioned it =D
2) Not all of us, but still plenty. Head for the good ones.
just kidding. Go for the animator you feel will help you the most.
*points at Doomdooer*

Wounded
04-30-2008, 01:58 PM
No, it was solidly in the range of beginner.



First of all, Wounded, welcome to the forums.
Now, about the animation. Yeah, it was pretty uneased and stiff. Also choppy in some parts.
However, what I enjoyed most was that you know what has to be fixed. You already realized that you needed to make your animations fluid and it sounds like you tried your best toward that end.
I congratulate you for that.

If you haven't already been told this, looking at some tutorials will help you a whole lot of money. www.darkdemon.org (http://www.darkdemon.org) has a lot of great tutorials, especially Bahamut's Ultimate Tut.


Very good try for a beginner. Keep going and you'll get better.
Also, if you ever need any help, there are plenty of animators around who'll be perfectly willing to give you a hand.

Thanks for telling me the site, i'll check it out.

Wounded
04-30-2008, 02:33 PM
There is a new animation, it is short , and I think I can do better but this is my first attempt at just a easing animation.

xxxskidxxx
06-07-2008, 05:12 PM
Omg, That was really good, No matter what the critics say. That was Beast. Outta a ten i give u a 4,000,000

ska/gunz/te
06-07-2008, 05:15 PM
nice video , lol too much smooth,

dam i need 20 post again -_-

Wounded
06-07-2008, 08:29 PM
Thanks for the reviews guys... theres only one problem.. That was a major




BUMP!


Lets try not to do that :Smile:


Anyway i decided to add more i guess since it is back.... -.=

Single punch: http://img501.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtestsmoothmt2.gif

xxxskidxxx
06-07-2008, 08:48 PM
Nice punch, it was smoother than heck yo.:heh:

xxxskidxxx
06-07-2008, 09:00 PM
Did u single frame or double?

Wounded
06-07-2008, 10:21 PM
Did u single frame or double?

By single or double , do you mean how long i held the punch streched out or ....

If so yes i held it there for abit.

addison57
06-08-2008, 06:35 PM
I loved the first one! The second one was alright.

1st:9/10
2nd:5/10

speeder290
06-08-2008, 09:18 PM
wow that was wierd 6/10

speeder290
06-08-2008, 09:19 PM
kinda weird but ill give you a 6/10

Spartan1105
06-12-2008, 06:34 PM
The 1st one's good :), smooth.

stickmaneatingicecream
06-13-2008, 10:57 PM
reallyed like them great job

Caz
06-14-2008, 01:43 AM
I like your piv's ther real good

Squeegy
06-14-2008, 01:47 AM
They're alright. Could use to be fixed up though.

bobobo
06-14-2008, 07:06 PM
really good i cant post mine yet =l

trauma
06-14-2008, 09:50 PM
med beg, stiff, no easing, and choppy. look at tuts like doom said.u have potential so just keep working.