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siberboy
06-18-2012, 08:50 PM
this is my first animation in stickpage x demo (http://www.fileize.com/view/0c46877b-1d0/)
so pleze comment:)

Hyun
06-18-2012, 11:20 PM
this is pretty awesome man. You have a good sense of story telling. The 2d fighting still needs practice and work. Make sure to clearly define the joints of the stickfigures' legs cus they seem kinda bendy while fighting. With sounds and some more practice you'll be set

siberboy
06-18-2012, 11:40 PM
i'll work on it:)

˛˛Damilox˛˛
06-19-2012, 12:08 AM
hey great work, but as hyun said, work on the basic stuff first, you have really good ideas, but wat good are the ideas if you cant animate them properly ;) .

Syrius
06-19-2012, 02:03 AM
Mother of god, this is like.. epic. This is a perfect movie, the sceneries is nice as hell. The story is sick and the bg, SO GOOD.
You would've gone well in the film competition. I'd luv to see more animations in this kind of style from you.

As for the actual stick fights and movements, could've done better, the fights were cool and I liked the slow motion parts with the ripping the arms off etc. Kinda slow, and lacked some stuff. Physics were weird, wobbles, blood effects were decent etc etc.

En
06-19-2012, 02:20 AM
Mother of god, this is like.. epic. This is a perfect movie, the sceneries is nice as hell. The story is sick and the bg, SO GOOD.
You would've gone well in the film competition. I'd luv to see more animations in this kind of style from you.

As for the actual stick fights and movements, could've done better, the fights were cool and I liked the slow motion parts with the ripping the arms off etc. Kinda slow, and lacked some stuff. Physics were weird, wobbles, blood effects were decent etc etc.
http://www.mzzt.net/tf2/crit/450207/snipe/FE0315/You%20have%20been%20assassinated./default/%A0.png