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tsukubane
06-30-2012, 04:39 PM
http://www.fileize.com/view/e82cfa69-e22/

This is part of a RHG battle I'm in right now. I only have till the 4th of July heh to finish it. What could make this better? I think I need to redo the head a bit and re animate the kicks.

Drone
06-30-2012, 04:50 PM
ok, so first of all, I don't recommend doing your own sound effects, and the whole entire intro was tedious and boring to me, although I assume it was supposed to be humorous >.> your overall animation is a bit choppy, try putting in more in-between frames and maybe using a higher fps. Another thing I noticed is that parts of them would be left after they move, and I can't honestly think of a reason for that, but I would recommend using a different layer for each new "thing" in the animation, or at least erasing what doesn't belong. And why does the grey dude occasionally spawn more arms ._. I don't quite understand that..