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Automaton
05-02-2008, 10:10 AM
i think this is my best so far, as its my longest, ive tried to add more props and effects, and tried to make it more cinematic. i dont know whether the colours in the gif will look alright though :S :

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh199/jrockpunk1/missedshot-BESTANIM.gif

the only thing i can criticise is the kick. ive only just started using them, so far ive only been using punches. i guess id better practice my moves. whaddya guys think? am i high beginner yet? (only asking cuz ive been trying for weeks literally).

Babapadaple
05-02-2008, 10:15 AM
Nice, it's a lot better then that wall flip one you had before!

Automaton
05-02-2008, 10:24 AM
cheers mate. the only other things i can criticeise is the easing and the jerkyness. im guna go edit it

Babapadaple
05-02-2008, 10:27 AM
To tell you the truth I think that the kick is fine.

Automaton
05-02-2008, 10:37 AM
thanks. ive updated it, and made it a little smoother. i thought te kick was fine, but he landed too quick and lifted his arm up straight away

Babapadaple
05-02-2008, 10:41 AM
Nice, it even better now.
btw check out my animation on my post on the begginer thread.

Automaton
05-02-2008, 10:43 AM
i have :p .

Darc
05-02-2008, 08:41 PM
Gah, this is so good, but this isn't quite high beginner yet. It is great, the only thing that is coming between high beginner is your easing and spacing, which was good, but wasn't used very well in the vital part of the animation. Work on that, and you're out of the beginner's thread. Frustrating, I know, I've been through it =[

stickmaycry
05-02-2008, 09:42 PM
=] very nice and creative!Try and observe mine.I got better thanks to PowerFuse.Then try seeing this but sorry if you didn't want me to post.=[

my best animation ever yet!

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/9253/mybestanimhi6.gif (http://imageshack.us)
By stickmaycry (http://profile.imageshack.us/user/stickmaycry)

=]Hopefully you apologize me for a bit parts..messed up lol =]

bowstick
05-02-2008, 11:05 PM
heyy stickmaycry...
try not posting your stuff in other peoples thread...
its kinda just good practice

mk?

Nukem
05-03-2008, 12:36 AM
Nice easing and smoothness, but too much spacing.

Jet
05-03-2008, 01:12 AM
too many stops. it should all flow as one animations.
however, the kick was nice.

Automaton
05-03-2008, 04:55 AM
cheers everyone! yeah this one i pretty much worked on cinematics. ive made another thread with all my kick and punch tests etc. i just need to work on easing and spacing? like PMDX said. what IS spacing anyway?