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Automaton
05-03-2008, 03:47 PM
well i saw a collab about going into a pit, and said hey i may as well give it a try. dont expect anythng epic though. there is one short scene with no onionskin (where hes in the pit with the rope), which is why i hate when he jumps up to get out so much. its a little jerky, and the end might be a bit... slow? but apart from that its ok :p. here we go:

http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh199/jrockpunk1/thepitcollabentry.gif

oh and the bit with the black lines around him is meant to be him falling but meh, go blind for that bit please. also, high beginner? also again, C&C as always, but please dont mentionthe stiffness in the tunnel and the pushing off to break out.

Darc
05-03-2008, 04:20 PM
It was alright. Stop asking to be high beginner, it's annoying.
When he was falling down, you should have added blur lines, IMO, and made him move more. The rope only moved for like, 2 frames... not good. Some awkward movements. It's pretty smooth though, not your best =[.

Jet
05-04-2008, 01:48 AM
also, high beginner?

NO! YOU'VE ONLY JUST SCRAPED MED!
StOp AsKiNg!

leedon
05-04-2008, 01:57 AM
Rankings are gay.

sss
05-04-2008, 02:13 AM
the jump when he jumped out of that hole was WAYYYYYY TO WEAK

Upps
05-04-2008, 02:23 AM
the fall through the hole was stiff.

Automaton
05-04-2008, 06:19 AM
ok .

Naglfar
05-04-2008, 08:55 AM
I liked the running part best, besides that, the falling wasn't pretty good..
High beginner? Not quite.
Well better stop asking it really annoys people sometimes..*Looks up*..
Keep going.

GhostFace
05-04-2008, 11:38 AM
Rankings are gay.

Agreed, animate for fun, not for a level.
It was choppy, and lacked natural movements.

Automaton
05-04-2008, 02:07 PM
ok ok. im sorry i wont keep asking. its just its annoying practicing and not progressing. just tell me if i do get to that stage please. looking back on it now i quite hate it. definitaly not one of my best. thanks for all the comments, and yeah, its a bit...ermm... bad at eerything lol.