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TrulyEpic
07-26-2012, 03:09 PM
Here is a battle animation i animated, but the other opponent forfeited so i won by default. however i want a constructive criticism on the animation so i can improve where i need to. http://www.fluidanims.com/portal2/view/5453/
this second link was my first battle http://www.fluidanims.com/portal2/view/5416/. i would also like to know if i have improved since the first battle. the first link is my second battle. what areas should i focus my efforts to improving and is there a significant difference between the two? but most importantly i just want constructive criticism on the animations.
thanks in advance; btw; is this the right thread to post this?

Xero
07-26-2012, 03:27 PM
Nope.avi
http://forums.stickpage.com/forumdisplay.php?13-Flash
there.

TrulyEpic
07-26-2012, 05:17 PM
Nope.avi
http://forums.stickpage.com/forumdisplay.php?13-Flash
there.
is it possible to delete the post? if yes, how?