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leo4life
05-04-2008, 10:05 PM
at first i made this to practice bgs, then i decided i might turn this into a series. this was originaly made to practice bg, since people didnt want me using black and white all the time. also, if anyone knows where i can find gun sound effects please link me.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/113244.htm

Etch
05-04-2008, 10:31 PM
Wobbly, and wasn't much.

leo4life
05-04-2008, 10:32 PM
just started like an hour ago, so yea...

Etch
05-04-2008, 10:47 PM
Well, no need for excuses, but i know it's going to come out sexy, so it doesn't matter. You improved super fast.

mraznbuddy
05-04-2008, 10:52 PM
hmm lol kinda narrow to have a crazy fight. It was kinda wobbly, keep on practicing and it'll go away soon.
btw his arm turns black at a frame when the vcam goes to the black sticks.

keep it up

leo4life
05-04-2008, 11:06 PM
graaa!!!! you wasnt suppose to notice that!!!, i hate you, =/

kinto
05-04-2008, 11:36 PM
Your previous animation was much less wobbly. Your trying too hard man. Just do it slowly. Don't lose your talent.

Ssjbryando
05-05-2008, 07:00 AM
I don't like the small size of the bg wall above thing, compared to the sticks heads. I don't really like how the sticks look, and everything is WOBBLY.

Try to look at onion frame its really not that hard. =3

fitzy
05-05-2008, 07:00 AM
looks good imo, agree about the wobbliness but it doesnt bother me at all.

zawmbee
05-05-2008, 07:10 AM
the only thing i hate, is the way they held their guns, forearm wise.

killeq
05-05-2008, 08:07 AM
Hmmm.. It was very wobly, not really smooth, had no sounds, and the V-Cam was tweened. Sorry, I can't say I like it, not at all..
Also, try putting actual detail on the guns.
And be creative with the gun effects. :)

iStick G
05-05-2008, 02:53 PM
It's rubbish, nothing really happens, no series.
Plus after the guy shouts "FIRE!" all the guys but on dissapear.

leo4life
05-05-2008, 04:45 PM
It's rubbish, nothing really happens, no series.
Plus after the guy shouts "FIRE!" all the guys but on dissapear.

lol... are you serious? did you even read the other comments, its not finished.
its a freaking preview...
i could say alot about your animations though.

Omega
05-05-2008, 05:06 PM
It's rubbish, nothing really happens, no series.
Plus after the guy shouts "FIRE!" all the guys but on dissapear.

Dumbass.



The animation is smooth. Easing is fair.
Just work on the wobbliness of everything. It could be your hand shaking too much; I don't know.

By all means, continue.

Ssjbryando
05-05-2008, 05:24 PM
Dumbass.



The animation is smooth. Easing is fair.
Just work on the wobbliness of everything. It could be your hand shaking too much; I don't know.

By all means, continue.

I knew it. Leo I told you to stay away from the round things that look like candy. >: [ Druggy!

jk. well good luck with it, you seem to be making alot of series. T_T but a little piece of advising. try to make color backgrounds, don't make those like shock, not that its bad. But its just, with color its much nicer, it boosts the animation so much and all. All your movies look kinda the same, nothing REALLY special anymore. not that its not or something.

Try making a parkour with trees or something. or w/e =P lol. well Cya!

leo4life
05-05-2008, 06:12 PM
I knew it. Leo I told you to stay away from the round things that look like candy. >: [ Druggy!

jk. well good luck with it, you seem to be making alot of series. T_T but a little piece of advising. try to make color backgrounds, don't make those like shock, not that its bad. But its just, with color its much nicer, it boosts the animation so much and all. All your movies look kinda the same, nothing REALLY special anymore. not that its not or something.

Try making a parkour with trees or something. or w/e =P lol. well Cya!

did you read/look at the first comment of this thread? lol.
note: i've only made 2 movies

@omega, i made this animation late at night, basically i forced my self to stay awake, so yea, my hands was a bit shacky

kinto
05-05-2008, 06:14 PM
Your dick was shaky. Asshole.
:D

Get msn now.

leo4life
05-05-2008, 06:44 PM
Hmmm.. It was very wobly, not really smooth, had no sounds, and the V-Cam was tweened. Sorry, I can't say I like it, not at all..
Also, try putting actual detail on the guns.
And be creative with the gun effects. :)

obviously the v-cam was tweened, what am i gona do, guide it frame by frame?

iStick G
05-05-2008, 06:48 PM
lol... are you serious? did you even read the other comments, its not finished.
its a freaking preview...
i could say alot about your animations though.

wow, you really can't take any critisism at all.

leo4life
05-05-2008, 08:46 PM
you didnt critisise anything, you didnt point out any errors in my animation, or what to do to improve.
you just gave me a bad complement.

mint
05-06-2008, 03:45 PM
Wobbly, I like how the backgrounds transitioned. Try to finish it soon. =)

Kalik911
05-07-2008, 08:18 PM
lol, did they guys disappear at the end of it? anyway, i used to use the brush and it didnt work out; not that its going too great now, but im enjoying it more. Good job, but it wasnt much yet