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leo4life
05-05-2008, 07:58 PM
well, i wanted to do a 1 vs 100 animation and stuff, also this was to help stop my wobbleness, basically, its another practice clip,
should i finish this?, probably make it a movie
http://www.swfupload.com/view/115781.htm
also... im getting tired of xaio xaio sf, if anyone can link me to some better ones, that would be nice.
EDITED!!: http://www.swfupload.com/view/112237.htm
EDITED AGAIN!!:http://showcase.sfdt.com/viewmovie.php?t=58222 5-7-08

Etch
05-05-2008, 08:19 PM
Still wobbly, yet so damn smooth.

Omega
05-05-2008, 08:20 PM
Hey, you're improving.
Very smooth, especially when the stickfigure was being swung around.
Easing could have been more evident though.
Still a bit wobbly.
Bad use of the blur; don't blur both x and y.

It's alright. Keep on practicing.

leo4life
05-05-2008, 08:23 PM
awwww.. =/. no fair
should i finish it?

Omega
05-05-2008, 08:26 PM
If it's just the wobbliness you're worried about, just keep on practicing. Also, you don't have to zoom in that much with the v-cam. Zoom out a bit so that the stickfigures are smaller and that their wobbliness is less evident to the audience.

Yes, it's sort of like cheating, but I guess it's alright until you get better.

SSOutPhase
05-05-2008, 08:26 PM
Kinda hard to see some of the movements and the sound effects were WAY off. I like it though.

I'd give you some more sounds but my MSN is actin up...D:

leo4life
05-05-2008, 08:30 PM
say it aint so! D=. what sounds was off?

the afro ninja
05-05-2008, 08:32 PM
Very Smooth! I counted and there was only 6 black stick figures. >:C
Yeah, zoom out the v-cam and finish it. It looks good.

mraznbuddy
05-05-2008, 08:41 PM
i dont think the vcam was really necessary for a background that size :|

i liked the moves, keep on practicing cuz its still kinda wobbly.

lol and if u notice, two stick merges into one near the end

leo4life
05-05-2008, 08:43 PM
damn mraznbuddy, how do you do it. o.o.. you always locate the errors, =o

Lixu
05-06-2008, 01:02 AM
fbf.

nice and smooth, i really liked the swing with the stick, i tried it sometimes but never worked out good.

mraznbuddy
05-06-2008, 01:06 AM
damn mraznbuddy, how do you do it. o.o.. you always locate the errors, =o

:D lol im just here to help

and noticing the merging sticks were completely random :P

Houdini
05-06-2008, 02:29 AM
so this is cool as and its really smooth :) good work

New Generation
05-06-2008, 12:36 PM
Averagely smooth, fluidness was not bad. Blood would have been nice in there. Good movements but still as other said, wobbly. Use the onion skinning more accurately, and maybe zoom in more and take a bigger size brush and Animate,maybe it won't be so wobbly this time. There's things there for a lot of reasons.

iStick G
05-06-2008, 12:45 PM
WOW, now that's a good animation!
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Although, I only counted 6 bad guys. Just me probably lol.

Ssjbryando
05-06-2008, 12:55 PM
Like I said before its pretty good. are 2 sticks fusioning? Looks like it T_T
Its pretty smooth tho.

MoDFoX
05-06-2008, 02:27 PM
That was 6 black figures, but still it was nice and smooth.
Good work.

mint
05-06-2008, 02:48 PM
:D lol im just here to help

and noticing the merging sticks were completely random :P

And because he's asian =D

Covalence
05-06-2008, 04:02 PM
Yeah, you've improved since the first day you came on to these forums.

The animation was good, smooth, fluid, but a little wobbly. Try doing another running animation like you did with easytoon, that could help with wobblyness.

leo4life
05-06-2008, 04:42 PM
i already did, its called "practice" look for that thread, btw, EDITED!!!! i added more stuff. http://www.swfupload.com/view/112237.htm

kinto
05-06-2008, 08:07 PM
Better.....just work on not using a v-cam that close. You really don't need it.

Sparco
05-07-2008, 12:40 PM
the spin around was pretty intense

iStick G
05-07-2008, 12:58 PM
i already did, its called "practice" look for that thread, btw, EDITED!!!! i added more stuff. http://www.swfupload.com/view/112237.htm

You made a cool animation even cooler! Nice upgrade!

mint
05-07-2008, 03:07 PM
i already did, its called "practice" look for that thread, btw, EDITED!!!! i added more stuff. http://www.swfupload.com/view/112237.htm

The updated frames are too forced. Movements are still wobbly but sweet, I like the idea of it. (You fixed the two sticks merging into one =3)

leo4life
05-07-2008, 03:41 PM
last time editing, i wont be finishing this animation, cause im working on my "hitman" animation
http://showcase.sfdt.com/viewmovie.php?t=58222

iStick G
05-07-2008, 04:15 PM
Aah, even cooler, but the groaning noises of being hit get a little too much at the end. Plus, if this is your last edit, you really should've finished off the last guy and just had your main guy stand there for a couple of seconds, just to give it a decent finish. I still really, really loved it though.

suliro
05-08-2008, 07:29 AM
I counted 11
mint anim just how do yo yous that V-cam??

Justavoius
05-08-2008, 06:51 PM
dat s*** was tight