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Rmiaomiao
08-21-2012, 06:07 PM
http://www.fileize.com/view/8ba0791b-006/
My English is not good, so my grammar errors do not mind.
This is my first full animation, and I want to use it to test my level
This animation has many faults, the end of some scribbled
I hope you can help me point out more disadvantages to help me progress. Thank you.

Skyshark
08-21-2012, 06:44 PM
Damn son, you've got talent. The animation is pretty smooth, good angles...as far as criticism is concerned, I felt that the animation was a bit slow at parts, but honestly it was pretty solid. Good work.

Bisquick
08-21-2012, 06:47 PM
Whooaaa, extremely nice. Very extremely nice.

protospex
08-21-2012, 07:11 PM
nice..hehehe

Gecko
08-22-2012, 02:26 AM
Very smooth and nice. Impressive angles - keep it up! The only thing that bothered me enough to post it was the sound quality, you should change your publish settings to something higher. Like from "fast" to "best" and from "16kbps" to "64kbps". If you don't understand, here's a tutorial (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?1388-FLASH-How-to-get-the-best-sound-quality-in-your-animations-Jawz) on how to improve your sound quality.

Sadko
08-22-2012, 02:30 AM
amazing.

Rmiaomiao
08-23-2012, 06:51 AM
Thanks for your advice and the tutorial ~:)

danick
08-23-2012, 06:57 AM
hey dude plain awesome I loved it

Sonicmanqaz
08-23-2012, 12:21 PM
:O.....you...my friend.....have talent...

GMR
08-23-2012, 04:05 PM
Wow...just...wow. That was amazing.

Timothy
08-24-2012, 03:16 AM
That was..............................
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU MAMEN!! I REALLY-REALLY-REALLY LOVE YOU MAMEN!!!!!!!!