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Rosie
09-15-2012, 03:03 PM
http://www.fileize.com/view/469ebcb4-aa8/

Another un-rusting anim, idk if it's better than my last anim (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?42240-First-anim-in-about-2-months) or not.....is it?

Also, Cnc please.

Mr. Evil
09-15-2012, 03:08 PM
Yeah, you did better than last time.
All I can say is pay closer attention when placing arms, especially after the last attack, it's like she's touching her leg with her arm for a moment.
I'd suggest keeping the other limbs clear from the attacking limb, so that the attack is very clear.

Vincent - X
09-15-2012, 03:08 PM
honestly i have never seen you animate before but according to this, it isn't bad at all,
you really got most of the easing going on but its just that i find it a little confusing of what she did in the last moved at the end of the animation, but so far this is good :)

Rosie
09-15-2012, 03:12 PM
its just that i find it a little confusing of what she did in the last moved at the end of the animation, but so far this is good :)

I was going to continue into a series of punches, after getting the stick positioned, I thought that'd be enough for now, I tried to just have the stick slide into a standing position. lol

Unless you meant the last attack, it was supposed to be a high kick, but I didnt pay much attention to the arm positioning, like Cresent said, I'll be sure to keep a closer eye next time.

Thanks btw

Harleyg
09-15-2012, 03:14 PM
Nice but how dare you!!! get flash again and not speed battle mee ;o;

438i
09-15-2012, 03:15 PM
It looks but it looks the same then what you usually do.But still awsome.

Rosie
09-15-2012, 03:15 PM
Nice but how dare you!!! get flash again and not speed battle mee ;o;

Borrowing a friends for a few days :P

Mr. Evil
09-15-2012, 03:17 PM
It looks nice but it can use work.

What could use work?
How's she going to learn from mistakes that she doesn't know about?
Unless you actually point out what needs work, and maybe how to improve, this comment was pretty much pointless.

438i
09-15-2012, 03:18 PM
I actually liked it man calm down

Mr. Evil
09-15-2012, 03:20 PM
I actually liked it man calm down

I am being calm, I'm calmly telling you a fact.

Harleyg
09-15-2012, 03:20 PM
hehe il let you off ;)

438i
09-15-2012, 03:21 PM
Ok just my opinion no harm done right.

Shensurei
09-15-2012, 03:25 PM
Ok just my opinion no harm done right.
You aren't comprehending what he's saying, obviously.

Anyway, nice job Rosie you've def improved. Your fluidity and power need some work though, and it was a little stop-and-go, but you're definitely breaking your rust pretty fast.

Quik
09-15-2012, 03:43 PM
I noticed that some of your attack recoils were off so I made this to help out...

http://www.fileize.com/view/3ab5af83-4e6/

Yurp, cuz I be so nice...

438i
09-15-2012, 04:14 PM
I know what hes saying he wants me to have a reason and the reason is well i dont think shes improved but its still awsome I just beleive it looks the same then what she usually does

Rosie
09-15-2012, 04:17 PM
I noticed that some of your attack recoils were off so I made this to help out...

http://www.fileize.com/view/3ab5af83-4e6/

Yurp, cuz I be so nice...

Quik.
I. Fucking. Love. You. For. This.

Mikematic
09-15-2012, 06:28 PM
Can I just ask dafaq that was at the end?

Rosie
09-16-2012, 01:11 AM
Can I just ask dafaq that was at the end?


I was going to continue into a series of punches, after getting the stick positioned, I thought that'd be enough for now, I tried to just have the stick slide into a standing position. lol

Unless you meant the last attack, it was supposed to be a high kick, but I didnt pay much attention to the arm positioning, like Cresent said, I'll be sure to keep a closer eye next time.

*cough cough*

siberboy
09-16-2012, 01:44 AM
nice work Rosie,but seeing all thous weapons you created in the weapon shop,i thought you could do better.

Drone
09-16-2012, 01:57 AM
nice work Rosie,but seeing all thous weapons you created in the weapon shop,i thought you could do better.
"unrusting" animation

Rosie
09-16-2012, 01:58 AM
"unrusting" animation

Also, weapon making skill =/= animating skill.

Gumball
09-16-2012, 02:15 AM
The last one was better, due to this ones resizing of feet lol
But yeah, you've improved.

siberboy
09-16-2012, 02:17 AM
isn't it all about drawing skill.

Nanite
09-16-2012, 02:31 AM
isn't it all about drawing skill.

Actually, its not. When you're a really good animator, that doesn't mean you're a really good artist, hell, that doesn't even mean you're a decent artist until you've drawn something good that not only you think looks good.
same goes for art to anim too.

...Unless you have a unique skill that improves your animating skill when you improve art and vice-versa.
That would be a damn useful skill.

Also, Rosie, I actually can see your improvements, I don't know what you improved, but I can tell that you have improved.

balistiik
09-16-2012, 02:39 AM
nice work Rosie,but seeing all thous weapons you created in the weapon shop,i thought you could do better.

wait..wut .-.

you have indeed improved, though a lil force may be needed in there
good work :3

Gecko
09-16-2012, 02:52 AM
ArmorStick isn't the best of artist. But he's a heck of a animator!

And, Rosie - to me it looks alright. But doesn't look like it has any force in it.

Kanga-B
09-16-2012, 03:37 AM
:D pretty good, smoothed right, AWESOME!!! :DDD

nyneicon
09-17-2012, 07:12 PM
You should add more frames at the time of the spin to make it look a little more realistic other then that yeah you've really improved so when you get your computer back keep practicing.