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Yun
09-16-2012, 03:59 PM
http://www.fileize.com/view/d5ac40ab-9be/

Well I'm making a Grafight Tribute. Gonna be about the same length, but only about 1 minute 30 seconds. That's as high as I can get with this one. CNC much appreciated.

Xero
09-16-2012, 04:04 PM
my advice
http://www.fileize.com/files/6d0d5a96/0a8/Tweenalltheobjects2.jpg

stickflashanimator
09-16-2012, 04:04 PM
epic stuff, face looks not so scary and dynamic like but still smooth... lil shaky lol but :D

balistiik
09-16-2012, 04:11 PM
my advice
http://www.fileize.com/files/6d0d5a96/0a8/Tweenalltheobjects2.jpg
^this
Pretty good yun though I kinda don't feel the grafight feel, really good

Yun
09-16-2012, 04:12 PM
my advice
http://www.fileize.com/files/6d0d5a96/0a8/Tweenalltheobjects2.jpg

HAHA! Not this one. Grafight 5 wasn't tweened. xP

danick
09-16-2012, 04:13 PM
well lot's of parts where, you would be surprised:P

but yeah how many collabs and tributes are you doing exactly right now?

and, it was smooth but the weird face guy didn't ressemble the real one enough i would say :(

Yun
09-16-2012, 05:17 PM
well lot's of parts where, you would be surprised:P

but yeah how many collabs and tributes are you doing exactly right now?

and, it was smooth but the weird face guy didn't ressemble the real one enough i would say :(

You know making the scary guy's face is incredibly hard, so I made a sketch. Don't worry. And so far I'm packed with projects, but that's the only thing I can do that can kill time instead of games or stuff.

A13x@nd3r
09-16-2012, 05:18 PM
Yun plz keep to the original way terk made it so it feels more like part of the actual anim. I mean the mouth of the stick figure with the wings ew try making it more as in the original anim.

Obsidium
09-16-2012, 05:29 PM
Yun plz keep to the original way terk made it so it feels more like part of the actual anim. I mean the mouth of the stick figure with the wings ew try making it more as in the original anim.
He tried his best dude, it doesn't have to be perfect :I. Anywho, Very nice yun.

Tocksique
09-16-2012, 05:38 PM
HAHA! Not this one. Grafight 5 wasn't tweened. xP
It sure as hell wasn't, but it was a lot smoother and the angles were nicer(btw, you're getting really good so i gotta give harsh CNC if you wanna make this look nice) You gotta add some nice angles and the red guy's roll in the beginning wasn't smooth :/ Also, the black sticks turn was choppy and during that turn the angle with the monster dude and the red guy was a weird perspective. I say, look at some fight scenes or watch a few action movies and look at the perspectives. That's what i do to improve my angles, try to make it realistic but at the same time, NOT realistic if you catch my drift.
Example(really bad and unfinished but you get what i mean): http://www.fileize.com/view/217c2fa8-31e/
Notice the feel(i guess you can say) of it? Yeah, you should have something like that in yours. Watch Grafight 5 again and look at those nasty angles. You get the feel of them right? I don't know if you understand where i'm getting at, but bear with me cuz i suck at explaining. Anyways, seems pretty good as of now, but that's pretty much it. Add some nasty angles and make it look SEXY! Especially for an animation like Grafight. Good luck with this bruh! Kthnxbye.

n8ster
09-16-2012, 06:45 PM
Little bit on the shaky side. But you can fix that :) And I agree with Tocksique. Angles. Angles. ANGLES. Keep it real, but make it fancy ;D Looking forward to this animation! Good luck, and happy animating!

-n8

Yun
09-16-2012, 06:45 PM
I do get what you mean, but remember : This is in the progress of sketching. I'm gonna be polishing everything at the end by fixing effects, the blue guy's face, and angles. I am trying my best with perspective and tweens, but remember : I'm using brush to keep the Grafight style at constant. Tweening or getting the turning perspective right is gonna be hard without tweens.

Julermud
09-17-2012, 03:38 AM
well it's a tribute so it doesn't have to be perfect :D even though it's very good yun!

so far so good :) cant wait to see the full animation

kaizen
09-18-2012, 10:20 AM
nice one dude

Harleyg
09-18-2012, 10:49 AM
If you finish this, il make love to you.

Mranimator15
09-19-2012, 09:48 AM
good start but the part with the run looked slow. thats all.