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tornado
09-26-2012, 08:53 AM
Well first time on this part of stick page here is my animation http://www.fileize.com/view/5cf6e0c2-13d/ im still working hard on flash and other stuff also please cnc and one more thing on a scale from 1 to 10 what would you rate this animation?

JanRavnik
09-26-2012, 09:08 AM
3

ARandyBison
09-26-2012, 10:56 AM
There's not really much of a build up considering the amount of speed he carries in the jump, and he's really stiff. But, it's not choppy, so that's good.

tornado
09-26-2012, 11:01 AM
thanks for your replies and tips on being better

Salt
09-27-2012, 08:41 AM
if your using it as a small jump on top of something, i.e. hopskotch, then yeah very well done, but if it's just a regular jump to go up, then not so much, you need to ease more and have more realism, but still looks good.

Chimero
09-27-2012, 09:30 AM
By imagining how it'd look when you jump or actualy jump in front of a mirror, you'd get far by that. This works for everything, fighting, walking, running and so on. Pay close attention to your limbs' position and just do whatever seems right. Goodluck! <3

tornado
09-27-2012, 09:53 AM
thanks again for the advice about limbs and anticipation and all other stuff you guys posted.

Not sure if it means anything now but i made a improved one: http://www.fileize.com/view/af4b566e-3e4/ once again thanks

Nobody In Particular
09-27-2012, 10:36 AM
The head is kinda choppy, and you still need the reaction at the end (guy jumps, guy goes down, then back up). You figured out the anticipation at the start though, and the stick is well-constructed. :) I approve!

tornado
09-29-2012, 07:53 AM
thanks :)