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neckromorph
09-28-2012, 06:42 AM
i battle with shadow, some how he did reply to my massage so i think it kind of waste of think so i post it in here soo you guy can what this http://www.fileize.com/view/103404aa-e20/
and some ine plz tell me how to turn the BBCODE on

THE RISER
09-28-2012, 07:00 AM
really nice man...REALLY NICE !!!

neckromorph
09-28-2012, 07:05 AM
tks well, it kind of waste of time :/

Pox
09-28-2012, 04:27 PM
I like it but try to shorten your dialogue

Razor-Sharp
09-29-2012, 12:31 AM
U improved man!!! keep it up!!! :D

Solo
09-29-2012, 12:48 AM
I really enjoyed it, nice animating. It seemed a bit sluggish though. Perhaps increase the FPS?

RF.Kira
09-29-2012, 03:37 AM
Dayum, learn english dude :) but your improving :)

neckromorph
09-29-2012, 03:51 AM
U improved man!!! keep it up!!! :D
it a month ago dude


thank guy

Mr. Evil
09-30-2012, 12:04 PM
It was Ok, my only issue was that it was too long, it went to the point of dragging on, I begun to think "Is it over yet?" at a certain point. But you're improving, can't lie there.

Try to add less text, don't try to have a story behind it unless it can be easily showed by animation, with long conversations of text with motionless stick figures, gets kinda boring.