View Full Version : Weekly 1 and Run Loop

10-02-2012, 09:40 AM
Hello peeapple :]
my name is Rythm, here's two of my most recent anims, CC please :3
http://www.fileize.com/view/221423cc-357/ [Nirvana weekly 1, 25 hits combo]
http://www.fileize.com/view/cda8f418-793/ [Run loop]
I was just trying to animate a running without doubleframes, and I was wondering if it looks like a run.
CC please :]

10-02-2012, 10:26 AM
I myself am not such a good animator :/ but I can still advice you...

Weekly looked nice, good luck with future weeklies.

The run loop looked more like some guy trying to fly around the background, I suggest you make him do 3 steps with his body in slightly diffirent positions instead of 1 step before looping, this looks more realistic, and slow it down a little bit and it should be fine...

10-02-2012, 11:31 PM
If you look at the run for awhile, it doesn't really look like he's doing anything, so yeah

10-03-2012, 06:10 AM
Please double frame.It looks very fast

10-03-2012, 06:19 AM
Very fluid, ill give you CC.
Well the run is hard to understand so instead of DFing you could just redraw the frames it looks better trust me.
The weekly was perfect, i cant find a flaw xD

10-04-2012, 03:18 AM
Well if you are not DB'ing.. you should make one or two more frames to the transition of the legs,
I can see only one frame that the front leg is going to the back, and the back going to the front, so yeah, make more.

The weekly is awesome, loved the combo.
Overall, I saw your past animations, you'r a fantastic animator!