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Lian Avenant
10-17-2012, 10:35 AM
UnEarthal (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/543/unearthaldemo1.gif/)
^-Believe it or not... This was my 5th Pivot animation!


UnEarthal is very emotional and was tricked by the evil-stick by making him think he was sad.
The evil-stick then made an evil laugh!
UnEarthal was furious and killed the stick with one blow!



He was created when the first Blackhole opened... He emerged and landed on earth!



Powers:Able to create blackholes, teleportation and Telekenesis
Personality:Very emotional (Hurt his feelings and your Dead-Meat)
Weakneses:Time-Travelers

Zed
10-17-2012, 06:57 PM
I believe it.

To be fair, you do have potential. I especially like your walking. You have an understanding of how movement should be done. You're just missing the slightly less obvious aspects of animation, specifically easing and stiffness. There are plenty of places to learn about easing (here's one (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?28577-Easing-Everything-You-Need-To-Know)). Stiffness (or avoiding it) is moving every joint in every frame. Even if in reality you don't think you'd be moving, in an animation it always looks better to find some movement you can do rather than leaving a stick standing perfectly still.

Lian Avenant
10-18-2012, 06:27 AM
Thanks for the info on how to better my animations!

I had a little trouble with the walking...
First "I" walked and saw how i moved, then i tried to make the stick figure walk like i did.