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bull3tspitt3r
05-11-2008, 07:02 AM
Yeah, I started last night, the green dude has rabies.

http://www.*************/open/1210503767

C&c please.

New Generation
05-11-2008, 12:38 PM
They are too wobbly. And they punch kind of weirdly. The v-cam is not used properly, :/

Use the onion skinning more wisely, and don't rush it.

killball
05-11-2008, 12:47 PM
Awesoooooooooome! This Is The Awesooooooooooooooome Fight With Background Are Facts Of Frames Layers And Other!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????

Ssjbryando
05-11-2008, 01:00 PM
Awesoooooooooome! This Is The Awesooooooooooooooome Fight With Background Are Facts Of Frames Layers And Other!!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????

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ontopic: its a bit wobbly, and the sounds sound to random =p it has like a delay. but its not bad, I think I don't know, its random. Or something. but its not bad =3

bull3tspitt3r
05-11-2008, 02:42 PM
This is rusty btw, lol.

If I hadn't stopped animating for a month it'd be better.

More c&c though.

EDIT: More rusting.
http://www.*************/open/1210533005

Cicada
05-11-2008, 04:18 PM
I love how you ask for C&C and when someone does give you it, you dismiss it as rusting.

Maybe it isn't rust, and you just suck.

Ssjbryando
05-11-2008, 04:27 PM
I love how you ask for C&C and when someone does give you it, you dismiss it as rusting.

Maybe it isn't rust, and you just suck.

Harse D: D:

one thing, is when he lands, and that BIG pile of blood appears, and his head goes up, blood should be dropping from his head. the whole time. Unless he has like split second MEGA heal abilities >_> His legs also shaked a couple of times, I just find it a bit weird, but I don't know what it is =\ the movements.

Opted
05-11-2008, 04:38 PM
"Text" was unnecessary it looked like an afterthought and didn't flow well
with the animation. Especially since it went by rather fast.

There also seemed to be awkward pauses during the first kick and when
the green guy dashes at him. (probably just my computer though)

The choreography is alright, nothing special, but nothing real bad.

I thought the vcam was a bit distracting.
It'd be better if you moved it along during progression and hard attacks rather then just for the sake of vcam.

Anyways it wasn't bad, but you need to work on some small details.
(vcam, text, and those shaky eyes)

Just keep animating. :U

TWiSTeD.LoGiK
05-12-2008, 12:07 AM
Better than what i can do but i might post some of my stuff later for constructive critiscism. :D

mraznbuddy
05-12-2008, 12:22 AM
too much use of the vcam in the first one. don't zoom in and make it shake so much, it makes everything hard to follow. (i would know)

and the second one was alright, little jerky at some parts and a little stiff i guess.

keep it up

bull3tspitt3r
05-12-2008, 01:35 AM
OK, I'll keep trying, and nice signature btw, lol.