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demon30
05-11-2008, 07:30 PM
Ok so here's my animation Background except for the stickman (obviously). i put quite a lot of effort into it. here's the link.

Vampire movie.swf (http://antiup.net/view.php?id=71817404952vampire movie.swf)

Comment PLZ

P.S. It doesn't load instantly (well at least for me)

demon30
05-12-2008, 10:52 AM
Comment Please!!!!!

Rather Cheesy
05-12-2008, 12:49 PM
Its only been two hours, calm down... The Art section is slower than the flash section...
EDIT: Sorry, missread the AM and PM =P
And I already gave you my opinion on them in the PM ^_^

the_hero
05-12-2008, 01:20 PM
I wish the art section was more lively.

Anyway, It's unoriginal. Overdone the glow.
Not much to say on it.

Azher
05-12-2008, 02:47 PM
it in fact is a bit plain, but to be constructive, i'll give you ideas.
You should / could add :
-cracks /holes in the wall and the floor
-make the throne or whatever it is move visible
-weaken the red glow and be consequent with the ligh (there is ligh in the three windows, but only a part of the throne on the left is ligthened, as well as the right side being overlighted for no reason)
-Actualy give the left side of the picture different colors !

I hope it helped

zawmbee
05-12-2008, 03:22 PM
OMG THE BLUR KILLED MY EYES.
cut down on it a bit.
other than that, nicely done.

demon30
05-12-2008, 04:15 PM
^^ k less blur... About cracks and holes in the walls - Well it's supposed to be a Throne room of the main char so it's supposed to be kinda... umm... well like very clean and perfect but in vampire style cause he's a vampire and it was much more than 2 hours ^^. i waited like the whole today... well whatever. ok i'll remember that this section is not that lively. and yeh try this: Vampire animation.swf (http://antiup.net/view.php?id=2613414347vampire animation.swf)

Edit: Oh yeah and i forgot to say that I'm having trouble the main character's hair >.< i dunno what it should look like... What do you think is better - Like Dante's from DMC or like Alucard's from HELLSING? And put a link if you find something coool plz.

Edit: also the light from windows is supposed to be very weak it's kinda dark in the place... umm yeah. i thik i'm going to like brake the ceiling in the fight or something.

Edit(again >.<) and if you don't know what Alucard looks like here's a pic ^^
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/47/alucard1024aq7.png
http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u2/lestrange42/hellsing_alucard01s.jpg he's kinda crazy in the 1st pic.

Thanks A lot! ^^

joeyodaguy
05-12-2008, 04:31 PM
him? if so, alucard. EDIT: woops sorry, didnt see that pic. yeah him. same guy different hair, face, and clothes. Yeah, Alucard.
http://bishounen.info/alucard/alucard3.jpg

demon30
05-12-2008, 04:33 PM
Ah yes and i still don't get from which Anime or Game this alucard is?
and yes maybe him too.
Edit: no i just edited the post 20 times lol. sry and ... WOW THIS DUDE PWNS! wait how come he's blond here?
well whatever. they kinda have differen hair here and on my pics.

EDIT and umm can this dude also summon the 'DEMON' ? He's from hellsing right?

Ok whatever about that you don't have to answer ^^ i'll try this hair then.

demon30
05-13-2008, 06:42 PM
Any more comments? i want the room to look kinda between what i've made And this:
http://media.arstechnica.com/journals/thumbs.media/Tekken5DRPS3.JPG
And also the walls are supposed to be kinda like walls in Castle series. well that type of thing. i think i know what you mean.

I don't really know how to draw it >.< and the throne is still really hard to do.

I don't even know what else you can coment on... I think i'll do the background when i will fell like and for now it'll stay this way.