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Fractex
11-11-2012, 03:12 PM
Hi guys, I went to gymn and practice some animation c:

jk. it's my first animation longer than 10 secs. ( I call it gymn because saying "test" is kinda boring )
I'm very new on animation, so give me tons of suggestions, but don't go hard on me.
http://www.fileize.com/view/ae67fbbe-2d4/


If you want you can also support me on dA, I would be very grateful <3
http://fr4ctex.deviantart.com/#/d5kt0hv

Hugs from Fractex

MadMirrors
11-11-2012, 03:13 PM
I no replay,But it was still good

Scooty
11-11-2012, 03:14 PM
That punching bag looks like it popped like a water balloon, but other than that it was pretty good

Moderator
11-11-2012, 03:21 PM
hhhmmnn. GOOD!

Yukio
11-11-2012, 03:26 PM
kk i'm gonna be real with you this was good but wasn't smooth the punching bag was a water balloon the sword stab was super slow and the laser was good add more particles though they take time but make a difference in the end!

Fractex
11-11-2012, 03:29 PM
That punching bag looks like it popped like a water balloon, but other than that it was pretty good
Yeah, it wasn't very good as all, it's supposed to be that stuff that punch, in the gymn xD Idk the name

Yukio
11-11-2012, 03:31 PM
The little thing they put on a Small chain and punch and it bounces back and they punch again?

Fractex
11-11-2012, 03:31 PM
kk i'm gonna be real with you this was good but wasn't smooth the punching bag was a water balloon the sword stab was super slow and the laser was good add more particles though they take time but make a difference in the end!

Thank you for the suggestion. I did my best, but I will make it better next time, I dedicated my sweet whole weekend doing this smalliich animation.

Yukio
11-11-2012, 03:40 PM
Never think of your animation as bad just think of it as good and needs improvement! :D

Scooty
11-11-2012, 03:42 PM
Never think of your animation as bad just think of it as good and needs improvement! :D

Gee, thanks Dr. Phil

Fractex
11-11-2012, 04:10 PM
Thank you guys :)

Drone
11-11-2012, 04:24 PM
I lold when he tapped the dude on the head with the sword
I was going to give a lengthy post on what could be fixed, but it can be summed up like this:
for everything besides your effects, you're trying too hard.