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Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
05-14-2008, 12:00 AM
I'm starting my comic... got about 32 pages roughly drawn... and I just started inking a little.

Here is my one, inked, frame.

Also, I'm having a debate with myself because of the content of the series. For one it's very, very violent to boot, and the language is pretty strong.

Should I release an edited version to start and later come out with the unedited one? You'll see why soon >.>

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v60/Fr0zEnPh0eNiX/Ink20copy.jpg

Bonus: not inked:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v60/Fr0zEnPh0eNiX/01-11.jpg

Jeremy
05-14-2008, 03:11 AM
FUCKING FINALLY.

How long has it been since you said you were going to start?...ffs.

I like how clean the inked version looks. Cant say much from the story for two pages. Keep going, yo.

the_hero
05-14-2008, 07:09 AM
Looks epic inked.
I don't think you should edit them, makes it seem more mature and worth reading.

I look forward to it.

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
05-14-2008, 09:04 AM
Aye, glad for the support guys. Maybe I'll put some more stuff up or ink more this evening...

fitzy
05-14-2008, 09:36 AM
really looks great. i'd say unedited makes it better. but its up to you. should be awesome when finished though :) and even better when one day you animate it! which you better do! :p

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
05-14-2008, 09:56 AM
really looks great. i'd say unedited makes it better. but its up to you. should be awesome when finished though :) and even better when one day you animate it! which you better do! :p

I'm probably going to release two versions.. because.. well... you'll understand when you see it >.>

Within the pages so far someone gets ripped in half, a dude gets his arm ripped off and beaten with it, a guy gets his neck snapped and is choking to death when cyrus decides to blow him up... ect

fitzy
05-14-2008, 10:01 AM
sounds schmexy :D

when will we be able to get a taste of the full thing?

Bongoe
05-14-2008, 11:20 AM
I like the art, but the story seems like a pretty generic fighting anime.

Anyway, I can't say much because I always get sucked into those sort of things.

BTW edited first imo.

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
05-14-2008, 12:14 PM
I like the art, but the story seems like a pretty generic fighting anime.

Anyway, I can't say much because I always get sucked into those sort of things.

BTW edited first imo.

uhhh.. I don't see how you can say that with only two pages >.>

Fr0zEnPh0eNiX
05-14-2008, 11:10 PM
Double post for great JUSTICE!

Here is a little example of violence...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v60/Fr0zEnPh0eNiX/01-07.jpg

LN3uq
05-14-2008, 11:36 PM
Only the second image loaded at first, and I was a little worried about the quality of the art, but the inked frame looks great, I hope you can keep up that look throughout the whole comic.

the afro ninja
05-14-2008, 11:50 PM
Sweet art! The dismembered arm is cool looking.

ravemaster112
05-19-2008, 03:59 PM
very cool i want to create a comic i know how to draw manga but i just cant be assed

ravemaster112
06-07-2008, 11:23 AM
are you gonna let out the whole comic?