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John4
05-14-2008, 06:42 PM
Yeah, I'm back.
Dont know if anybody remembers me, I havent posted in a couple monthes, so I guess that's considered leaving. Anyway, I've got a new animation, and I'm really proud of it. I'm hoping i'm over beginner, but if not, please let me know. Alright, here it comes. =D
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f41/Kenth7/StickFight.gif
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f41/Kenth7/StickFight.gif
Hope you like it.
~John
PS. It's really slow on my computer, I'm not sure why. If anybody else has this problem, I'll post the piv. file if I need to. *shrugs*

power fuse0
05-14-2008, 07:03 PM
I dont remember you. But you joined in january. So i dont really expect you to know who I am either.
nice to meet you. Look at some tuts. and Animate tests before doing anything like you have jsut tryed.

John4
05-14-2008, 07:10 PM
Alright thanks. Am I higher then beginner, or... not?

Omega
05-14-2008, 07:18 PM
Alright thanks. Am I higher then beginner, or... not?

In my opinion, no. Sorry.


Er, it's really stiff.
Those blurs were pretty weird; I don't do Pivot so I don't know how you did those.
Bit choppy.
Could use more easing.

Keep practicing. And welcome back.

John4
05-14-2008, 07:29 PM
Heh, I dont care. Just means I'll be practicing more. Thanks for the advice.

Knightsy
05-15-2008, 10:51 AM
Try and aim for quality not quantity.

GhostFace
05-15-2008, 11:03 AM
Try and aim for quality not quantity.

Exactly what Mack said..
Your animation was medium beginner.
Work on fluid motion, not just random fights.

zawmbee
05-15-2008, 01:31 PM
lol wow welcome back how have the 4 months treated you XD
i agree with mack, the animation had awful movements which you tried to hide with blurs and various effects.
bad.