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KyZ
12-04-2012, 05:29 AM
http://www.fileize.com/view/8ce38a95-064/ - 6 MONTHS AGO
http://www.fileize.com/view/dfaafe36-391/ - TODAY

So, what do you think? Have I improved? CnC?

techmaru
12-04-2012, 05:34 AM
Everything is great, but today is stiffness. redraw everything in the stickman.

KyZ
12-04-2012, 05:38 AM
I suppose he does look a bit stiff, but meh... I'm too lazy to redo it all.

techmaru
12-04-2012, 05:40 AM
I suppose he does look a bit stiff, but meh... I'm too lazy to redo it all.

Lol I think your tryout was great, had no stifness was smooth, but i hate the way you draw your stickmen lol. You should practice angles.

KyZ
12-04-2012, 05:42 AM
Everyone has a style, bro, this is just mine. If I wanted to change it that would take a lot of time and plus I'm just comfortable animating this way.

thepivotkid90
12-04-2012, 05:44 AM
I'm new

KyZ
12-04-2012, 05:48 AM
I'm new

If you're new then you should make a thread in the 'Introduce yourself' section of the forums.
http://forums.stickpage.com/forumdisplay.php?44-Introduce-Yourself

Neospelet
12-04-2012, 05:57 AM
Lol I think your tryout was great, had no stifness was smooth, but i hate the way you draw your stickmen lol. You should practice angles.
He's Practicing the basics.. NOW YOU WANT HIM TO DO ANGLES? It's like teaching a grade 1 calculus >.>...

Anyway :3 You improved with smoothness and you should add more frames ^.^

KyZ
12-04-2012, 06:00 AM
Thanks for the friendly CnC :3

techmaru
12-04-2012, 06:15 AM
He's Practicing the basics.. NOW YOU WANT HIM TO DO ANGLES? It's like teaching a grade 1 calculus >.>...

Anyway :3 You improved with smoothness and you should add more frames ^.^

When i first animated i went straight to angles and now im like almost perfect at it :D

KyZ
12-04-2012, 06:20 AM
Angles aren't my style... I don't animate angles and won't for a long time. I'm trying to perfect combos and movement before animating anything else. I'm not just going to dive into all of it at once, I'm taking my time. Also I asked for CnC not for you to be telling me how good you are at angles, You've left some CnC (as immature as it was) so you can leave the thread now.

Max Vador
12-04-2012, 07:46 AM
elastic man. watch your arm sizes when extending. getting better

KyZ
12-04-2012, 09:04 AM
Thanks dude, it's really great to see that people are seeing improvements.

acb
12-04-2012, 09:12 AM
Only a little...

Stickly
12-04-2012, 09:14 AM
lul i know I'm a pivot man but every now and then i get bored and go on the flash section.
anyway, good improvement :) I can see ur progress

Xrebellion
12-04-2012, 03:22 PM
When i first animated i went straight to angles and now im like almost perfect at it :D
Almost perfect? Anim or it never happened.

About the anim. You did improved but it seems a bit choppy for me.
Ease it more and less some double frames I guess.

jdogg
12-04-2012, 03:41 PM
no

Fp3
12-04-2012, 04:33 PM
The "today" anim looks really weird, the gravity in it felt too strong the combos were really slow and stiff and had no sense of force .

MadMirrors
12-04-2012, 04:38 PM
Six months ago you did poorly today your a five months better.

Sonicmanqaz
12-04-2012, 04:52 PM
Lol I think your tryout was great, had no stifness was smooth, but i hate the way you draw your stickmen lol. You should practice angles.

YEA WORK ON THOSE ANGLES. I think he's ready. Not really :3

Julermud
12-05-2012, 03:02 AM
It was okay. As said... A little stiff.... Also it was a bit choppy... But other than that, keep up the good work

KyZ
12-05-2012, 03:44 AM
Thanks Juler :D

Cid
12-06-2012, 02:38 PM
Much inprovement dude

Felucks
12-06-2012, 03:00 PM
I think you should practice more frequently to get a better idea of what you need to work on. Although you have two animations, they're so similar that there is almost no improvement. A good way to gain experience and improve is to animate for longer periods of time and try not to watch the animation more than just flipping through frames and looking at what makes sense and what can be eliminated.

Alien
12-06-2012, 03:03 PM
This is good, but you saying your lazy, isnt.

Nobody In Particular
12-06-2012, 11:08 PM
Didn't see a lot of difference between the two. One thing you need to work on is anticipation. (You need to brace yourself before any action, and every action has a reaction.)