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THE RISER
12-09-2012, 08:42 AM
the sticks are stil crap ! but i managed to make good smoke :
http://www.fileize.com/view/ba68d8c6-7b3/
what do you guys think ?

flamr
12-09-2012, 08:46 AM
That smoke isn't really realistic but I think you didn't intend for it to be.
If you want Cnc on the sticks... it is not smooth because in almost all of them, only one body part moves at a time.
Hope that helped:D

THE RISER
12-09-2012, 08:57 AM
Hope that helped:D

it did...ill try to move body parts at the same time...thank you !

CrewKid
12-09-2012, 03:53 PM
EVERY frame needs to have EVERY body part moving. Thats how natural movement is.

MadMirrors
12-09-2012, 05:05 PM
They look lazyly made.

Pivot
12-09-2012, 09:59 PM
You still need to practice quite a bit. It looks like you're using a mouse, and I'd suggest getting a tablet if you are. Easing, physics, more realism, and some other stuff, and you'll be good.


to see what I'm talking about, go look at peoples animations, and try and mimic that. That's what I've done. (And paying attention to Stone's Livestream)

Salt
12-09-2012, 11:46 PM
That smoke isn't really realistic but I think you didn't intend for it to be.
If you want Cnc on the sticks... it is not smooth because in almost all of them, only one body part moves at a time.
Hope that helped:D
Why the fucking orange.

Xrebellion
12-10-2012, 04:35 AM
You still need to practice quite a bit. It looks like you're using a mouse, and I'd suggest getting a tablet if you are. Easing, physics, more realism, and some other stuff, and you'll be good.


to see what I'm talking about, go look at peoples animations, and try and mimic that. That's what I've done. (And paying attention to Stone's Livestream)

Suggesting him to get a tablet? Seriously??
One can stay with a mouse and still be better than some tablet users.

About the sprites or animations.
Like what flamr said, the sticks are choppy and every part should move.
Work on their poses too.
The smoke doesn't really look like one.

Pivot
12-10-2012, 06:11 AM
I'm saying it might help. I'm not telling him "Tablet or gtfo" He can stay with mouse. It was merely a suggestion.

Shensurei
12-10-2012, 07:05 AM
I dont even understand what any of these sprites are supposed to be.