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danick
12-11-2012, 07:33 PM
here is my best animation yet... me and zee are planning to start a mafia based animation series and here's what i have yet for the first episode

http://www.fileize.com/view/4924a4ec-4b0/

CnC please.. I really want to get better so i need CnC and stuff

Stickly
12-11-2012, 08:30 PM
the gun shots at the start were very good.
the movements were stiff though in various parts and it was kind of choppy.
I would advise to try and remake the close up characters at the end and try to make them more smooth and easy to follow.
I couldnt really tell what was happening and i hope you can explain :).

overall good job and I hope to see more.

Xrebellion
12-12-2012, 06:21 AM
the gun shots at the start were very good.
the movements were stiff though in various parts and it was kind of choppy.
I would advise to try and remake the close up characters at the end and try to make them more smooth and easy to follow.
I couldnt really tell what was happening and i hope you can explain :).

overall good job and I hope to see more. I am a harsh CnC guy X)
You call that harsh? =_=


Anyways, my cnc.
Overall anims was choppy. Add more frames and ease it.
The guy shooting only has 2 frames...
Your moves are so unnatural.
Work on the pose on the fighting part, especially for the guy with the sword.
Lastly the drawings of the stick in the end is bad.
Go watch some tutorials for basics bro.

acb
12-12-2012, 09:07 AM
Also, if you have the money, go buy a pen tablet and practice the hell out of it.

Xrebellion
12-12-2012, 02:31 PM
Also, if you have the money, go buy a pen tablet and practice the hell out of it.

Not all would find a tablet that useful.
I suggest that he should just stay with a mouse first and see if he improves.

Stickly
12-12-2012, 06:06 PM
You call that harsh? =_=


Anyways, my cnc.
Overall anims was choppy. Add more frames and ease it.
The guy shooting only has 2 frames...
Your moves are so unnatural.
Work on the pose on the fighting part, especially for the guy with the sword.
Lastly the drawings of the stick in the end is bad.
Go watch some tutorials for basics bro.

fixed it for u ;)

danick
12-13-2012, 05:12 PM
I already have a pen and tablet.. when you mean unnatural what dio you mean???
and I know drawings were bad :P
finally how many frames should the gunshot have