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hueycoy
12-14-2012, 07:04 PM
http://www.fileize.com/view/08978e61-2e5/
Just practicing..

the pivoter
12-14-2012, 07:12 PM
I didn't really like the last reaction. It looked a bit overexaturated. I think that is odd, unless you were aiming for that. Other than that, I got nothing except stuff you have probably heard 3000 times already (the sticks look a little wobbly, ease a little more, make it smoother). I would say you especially need easing for the final pose of the grey stick, he seems to sort of lock in place. Also, the grey stick should have more of a reaction to the black sticks punch, unless he was a lot of strength. Finally, I am not sure if it is just lag on my side, but when the black stick hits the other sticks knee, there seems to be an unnecessary double frame/pause.

Keep on animating, it looks lovely so far.

这个id肯定没人用
12-14-2012, 07:12 PM
动画很流畅,力度也很足.不足之处在于动作不够创新,不够"coooooooooool".不过也比我强很多了.. 加油!!:D

P.S. My english is poor ... So I used Chinese ,you may ues the interpreter ...

hueycoy
12-14-2012, 07:23 PM
动画很流畅,力度也很足.不足之处在于动作不够创新,不够"coooooooooool".不过也比我强很 多了.. 加油!!:D

P.S. My english is poor ... So I used Chinese ,you may ues the interpreter ...
I translated it... why thank you.