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AlphaMan
12-20-2012, 06:26 PM
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A "gentle" CnC please.

Flashwire
12-20-2012, 07:28 PM
Figure:

* The overall kick is choppy due to the misplaced double frames. You could remove the double frame right after the attack to get some more force going. You could also apply a snapback in the kick to show force.

* There seems to be some sliding on the figure. Remember to keep your foot placement correctly as you can see the figure's back leg slides from it's original position.

* Right leg resized on when the figure was going down.

* There's no easing after the kick, he just stopped abruptly. However, you seemed to have eased the kick so you should've done the same for the ending stance.

* Head and torso moved like there was a snapback in the attack, but there wasn't.


General Comments:

* I like the anticipation at the start

* This is more of a personal preference than CC, but you could've added some arms in there so it doesn't seem unfinished.