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Colonel-EX
12-22-2012, 09:14 PM
i just cant do angles check this out -.- dont know how to start with that and this is my practice still unfinished...

http://www.fileize.com/view/d7ee0289-fab/

Zaie
12-22-2012, 09:38 PM
it's cuz you're mixing REALLY rough freehands with straight lines.. it doesnt go well.

Shensurei
12-22-2012, 09:48 PM
it's cuz you're mixing REALLY rough freehands with straight lines.. it doesnt go well.
I'm not even sure where you're getting the "lines", but okay.

The angles were very short and unclear, and they didnt look like angles very much. Just zooms.
I think someone with more experience with static art could help you more with angles. Talk to Xero or Quik. They might be able to help you some.

Amf
12-22-2012, 09:54 PM
Put more easing into the walking and whatever the yellow guy was doing. Also, the scene of the yellow guy with green guys hand on his face was really fast, as well as the other one. you might also want to either show the green guys hand grabbing the yellow guy and him getting kind of forced back, or show him getting pushed back a little bit in the first angle.

Zaie
12-22-2012, 10:00 PM
senshuri ;_; why must you allways throw me under the bus.. the lines as in like the perfect circle head versus the choppy 75 freehand arm.

Amf
12-22-2012, 10:03 PM
how straight lines are don't affect the animation, it just changes how smooth or pretty they look :/
anyways go back to cnc n stuff, i got slightly off topic

Zaie
12-22-2012, 10:04 PM
i know.. i just have ocd and i analyze things.. ALOT like.. A LOOTTTT and things look weird to me.

Zero
12-22-2012, 10:33 PM
Make. Them. MOVE!

Colonel-EX
12-22-2012, 10:39 PM
yea guys i really need someone to help me out on angles i dont really get those in animation xD

Xrebellion
12-23-2012, 03:53 AM
lol what zero said, you should make them move even in angles.
That's just some basic angles tho. Also it's too fast.
It lacks action, make better poses.