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DragonFrost
01-28-2013, 08:09 PM
So, I'm bored a lot, and I find I read the stories on the forums to ease my boredom. I thought, why not make stories for Stick Empires? So here is the FIRST EVER Stick Empires Story Competition! Basically, write a story about stick empires (I'll think of a subject), and post it in this thread. I suppose I'll make another thread with all of the stories' titles and make a poll after the competition is done.

1. Must have (mostly) correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.
2. Must be related to the SUBJECT.
3. Must be posted before the deadline (posts after the deadline don't count).
4. Must be at least 150 words (I don't want to see a sentence as a story T.T and even so, 150 is easy, SO TRY TO WRITE MORE THAN THAT).
5. You may have more than 1 story entry.
6. Try not to copy someone else.

Why did medusa decide to make a chaos empire and attack order? You can write it in any form, third person, journal entries, first person, etc.
APRIL 1st! (April fool's joke :p)(this is the deadline, so you have a long time)
Well, everyone gets to read interesting stories. But for 1st place, Kingkickass has suggested: respect and a trophy made of text.
Anyone who has made a story, please post a link to the thread or post please! It will make it more organized.
Fr0st (2):
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=866272&viewfull=1#post866272
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Triss (5+info):
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?51015-The-Legendary-Warrior-Seartan-Trilogy
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FailingAtFailing (2):
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=865809&viewfull=1#post865809
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Aiman:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50638-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition-The-Story-Of-Order
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Kingkickass2012:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=866583&viewfull=1#post866583
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GizmoGamer2012:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=870722&viewfull=1#post870722
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WheresmyCheetos:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=873319&viewfull=1#post873319
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Luzoto:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=873404&viewfull=1#post873404
I'm excited to see your great stories! Good luck everyone! I'll write a story too. :D

Panki
01-28-2013, 08:15 PM
Yay! I'll try my best.

Is there any limit to how long the story has to be?

lntrepid
01-28-2013, 08:23 PM
Can it be deep, cliche, etc?

Cause then I can write a 2nd Person angsty novel.

DragonFrost
01-28-2013, 08:24 PM
Whatever you want, as long it stays on topic.

FailingAtFailing
01-28-2013, 08:28 PM
Can we have multiple entries?

EDIT: I'm putting my entries in this post! Since I plan on having multiple entries, they would be in multiple posts so they are compiled here for convenience! Also, I want my posts on page 1

Conversion

The rebels were doomed. They had been pushed into the western lands by Order and they had now seen a terrible army calling themselves Chaos. The leading Magikill Council knew they were fighting a losing war now. They were fighting two enemies at once.

A lower member in the Council named Ghilm decided to search for more spells for use in the war. He experimented with all kinds of magical words and dusted off old tomes. He brought rebel swordwrath to escort him as he searched through ruins in No Man’s Land.

He came across some giant skeletons in front of a temple adorned with a skull chiselled from marble. Two great pillars of stone rose before him. In between the pillars was a large gate made of steel. The gate was at least three times his height. The swordwrath attempted to push on the gate, but it did not move. Ghilm ordered them to step back. He casted an explosion spell.

The gate blew inwards, but the shockwave rumbled through the desert. The marble skull fell and trapped the group. They were stuck in the temple. Ghilm casted magical light spells for each member of the group. In each of their hands was a small ball that easily fit in each of their palms. It emitted a soft white light. With sight now in their possession they could see the interior of the temple.

On the ground was a large piece of stone made to look like a bone. It was broken in half. The most likely explanation was that it was acting as a door bar. It was possibly keeping giants out. The skeletons outside were most likely giants that starved as they waited for food to come out of the temple, which it eventually didn’t.

The temple had a simple layout. It was a single large open room. The floor was polished stone and was free of any debris. There was a pathway outlined with gold. The path led to a podium at the end of the room. The group walked towards the podium. As they got closer to it, a foul scent became more evident.

When they arrived at the podium, they found rotting corpses. These weren’t human corpses, they were Deads from the Chaos army. Deads have never been seen deceased from anything other than combat, so this was an intriguing discovery. However, something stranger was the existence of a human skeleton with a backpack near it. The backpack was full of tattered, unreadable books and empty food containers. The person must have starved to death.

On the podium itself was a book illuminated by a thin shaft of light, its source unknown. The book was in good condition. Ghilm opened it. It was full of spells, perhaps some of which could be useful to fighting Order and Chaos. The first spell was named “Rise” but it had no further description. Ghilm took the book and they walked back to the entrance.

Soon, they saw some light coming from the blocked entrance. More and more of it came through. Its cause was soon evident. A fully-grown giant had lifted the skull out of the way. Behind it were many other giants about half its size. The swordwrath made an attempt to protect Ghilm, but most of them were slaughtered effortlessly as the leading giant took one swing of its club, which was a 20-foot tree.

“VENOMUM TOXONIUM!!!” was the sound heard after that as Ghilm poisoned them all. He wasn’t sure if the Magikill Minions still existed in the Limbo Realm, but he attempted to summon them, with no result. They really were gone. Ghilm casted a wall of electricity behind the leading giant. Those giants quickly had their heart stopped by the electrical shock, they dropped dead immediately. The lead giant, now angered grabbed one of his comrade’s bodies and used it as a weapon against Ghilm. The ground shook and blood came from the body of the giant as the sickening crunch of its bones breaking echoed through the desert.

Ghilm was running out of energy for spells, he only had enough for a few more. He ran behind one of the marble pillars and opened the book once more. Another spell was labelled “Requiem”, again with no further description other than the words that needed to be uttered for the spell.

Ghilm shouted to the skies, “Fatalitis Risonis!” and the corpses that were still in good shape rose to his bidding. Most of the swordwrath were mangled to the point of no return, but most of the dead giants were in one piece. They rose and looked towards Ghilm, awaiting an answer.

Ghilm whispered, “Defend me” and they complied. They tackled the lead giant to the ground and another jumped on its head with all of its weight. The lead giant’s head was flattened and blood sprayed out in a disc and pieces of brain shot out in directions. Ghilm was impressed at how effective these corpses could still be. He ordered them to carry him back to the Rebel camp in Westwind.

He arrived and told the Magikill council of this book and other potential spells in it that could be used to crush Order and Chaos.

The council members looked at each other before the leading Magikill said, “Ghilm, this book is the embodiment of Chaos. Simply the reviving spells on the first page scream Chaos. I fear the book itself may have a curse on it placed by the King of Chaos, whoever he might be. The revival of the dead is unnatural. Even the instantaneous healing of the Merics breaks nature. We are already treading into risky areas by ignoring the laws of the natural world and substituting them with our own. If you may, hand us the book and we will destroy it, and any curse on it”

A voice in Ghilm’s head told him, “Don’t listen, they are selfish and arrogant. They believe that since you are a lower member, you are useless. Use the book and prove you are not.”

Ghilm left the room. The council was not pleased. Ghilm walked towards the graveyards containing dead rebels. He used the Requiem spell and the dead rebels rose out of their graves. Ghilm would show the council that his word could be trusted. He brought his army of dead rebels and zombie giants to Chaos territory and began a massacre of miners, deads and Juggerknights while he rained destruction with his Magikill spells. A city in ruins was now reduced to a field full of death. Retreating Wingidons were heading west across the water. The giants hurled rubble at them. Some of them feebly attempted to fight back and shot a few volleys of arrows. They had no effect on the zombies who felt no pain.

However, one got Ghilm in the knee and took him down to the ground. He writhed in pain as he rolled on the ground. An undead meric pulled the arrow out of his knee. He slowly got up and noticed arrows in his zombie army. They were indifferent to the fact that arrows punctured their limbs. Ghilm had an idea.

He opened the book to the second page, where he found a spell called “Evolution”, he casted it. The words “Necrosisium Embodidium” echoed through the skies. Ghilm thought he uttered the spell wrong until a lightning bolt struck him and skin and muscle was torn from his bones. He screamed in pain as his internal organs melted out and his face burned off his skull. Magical energies flowed from the ground and wrapped around his bones to keep them together.

After the horrible ordeal, Ghilm found himself as an undead, however he was sentient with his own thoughts still. He now felt no pain and could use these powers to their fullest now because a simple arrow would not interrupt his spells anymore.

Ultimate power was now in his hands.


Prisoner
How long have I been here? Where have they taken me? I can’t see. I can only feel hunger and thirst. When was the last time food or drink was in my mouth? I am hanging from my hands. I have shackles on my feet. Did they take my clothes? These feel like burlap.

Ugh, I have to get my mind straight. I’m starting from the beginning.

I was mining for Order. It was a nice job. The location was dangerous though. I was mining in No Man’s Land. Although, I did choose to mine there. There was vast riches such as gold, silver, gems and underground ruins. I got paid twenty times what the average miner was paid. It helped how I barely had to share any of these riches. The only other people working there were two middle-aged men I barely knew. They smelt of alcohol and looked like they were drunk half the time. The supervisor was a Magikill that slept through half the day. I can’t blame him, he must be at least a hundred years old. His sleeping also let me smuggle some rough rubies or sapphires out of the mine.

Back home, I was living the good life. In my off time I bought and drank some excellent wines. I wore fancy clothes that made other miners, and even soldiers jealous. I had my own little palace. I had my own master bedroom with a king-sized bed and a rug that took up half the room. The kitchen was filled with spices and herbs that were the best ever.

One day, when I left work, I think I took a wrong turn. There was a skeleton under a dead tree. I’ve never seen skeletons, let alone bodies around the mine. I went near it.

It jumped up and cast some kind of spell on me. I started to walk towards it faster and I couldn’t remember anything after that. I then found myself here for the first time.

Ah yes, now I know what happened. It was a Marrowkai. I have heard of them. They are spell casters for Chaos. I heard about them. About a day before I saw that skeleton, I heard the Magikill mumbling about how Order hasn’t sent any more guards here and how Chaos was going to attack any second since we enslaved a giant and taught it to throw rocks.

The guard was a Juggerknight. The tales I heard about their cruelty are true. He only gave us food because some Marrowkai wanted us alive. Even then, he only gave us crumbs. He dropped them all over our faces, we had to lick them off our faces with our tongues. Every other day he would drip water on our foreheads, and it would trickle down our faces. It was the only water we got.

I don’t know how long I have been here. I had a diamond in my pants pocket. They took off my pants and I think I am wearing burlap. But I can’t see that well. There is dust floating in the darkness and the only light is from the doorway at the other end of the hall. Why am I the farthest from the door?

Wait, I hear bones rattling. It’s the Marrowkai. He’s approaching my cell. The Juggerknight is taking me off the wall! But, where are they taking me? Wait, what’s he doing with his axe? Wait, he’s going to hit me with it!



Where am I now? Am I dead? No wait, this is outside. I can see the sun! All my bindings are gone! I’m free. I can see Order over there. I have some strange staffs in my hands though. They’re about the length of my forearm. Wait, there’s some Chaos soldiers running past me. Am I a ghost then? Or am I in a dream?

I hit myself in the arm with one of the staffs. It hurt, so this is real-life! Why are Chaos soldiers ignoring me though? They must have something else they need to do. It looks like Order is going through Chaos lands.

Well, that must mean Order is putting a stop to Chaos. I must not be a high priority since I am a single person. I must help Order with these staffs or my fists.

I ran towards the swordwrath. They had just finished killing a Juggerknight. They saw me and I saw them. I was smiling for the first time in a long time. I could go home. I could escape! The swordwrath have a look of terror on their faces. Why are they running from me? I ran faster, determined to catch up.

Then, as I was about two or three paces away from them, I heard a hissing. I looked at the staffs. They weren’t staffs.

They were dynamite sticks.

DragonFrost
01-28-2013, 08:30 PM
Yes. I will add that to the RULES.

kingkickass2013
01-28-2013, 09:14 PM
i already have a story

but it will be hidden till its complete

jli
01-28-2013, 09:16 PM
I will bet you 500 ECoins that it doesn't have proper punctuation, grammar, etc. :D

kingkickass2013
01-28-2013, 09:20 PM
so, why don't you make a story captain grammar. i do believe everything lies within the actual story not its punctuation and grammar.

now if you shall excuse me i have a story to brainstorm even further and a thread I'm currently working on to finish

jli
01-28-2013, 09:24 PM
Well, I'm just saying. The requirements DO say that you need proper grammar/punctuation, and there really was no need to announce that you had a story ready.

And it's general grammar, thank you very much :D

_Ai_
01-28-2013, 10:55 PM
Well you can always edit, right?

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 12:16 AM
i got two things to ask ye jli

do you dislike me in some way i don't know of, because everything Ive ever posted, you always replied in some negative way
also that little smiley face is not making the sentence seem any happier in my eyes, its only adding to the fact that your insulting my grammar.

also a question for dragonfrost. must the topic instantly start at the beginning of the story or can it slowly build up to the main topic.

i also cannot wait to see all the other peoples stories and what they have to tell

jli
01-29-2013, 07:42 AM
Well, OK, here's the thing.
To be bluntly honest, your posts hurt my eyes. I don't know whether I'm not used to reading posts like yours, or my time on Reddit has brainwashed me, or I need some serious medical attention, but I find your posts exceptionally difficult to read compared to others.

I was simply suggesting that you capitalize a few things to make it a lot easier on everyone to read. I never meant to be negative or discouraging in my posts, and if that is what you think then I apologize.

DragonFrost
01-29-2013, 11:05 AM
T.T guys don't argue on my thread.

The Magikills of Order have realized that after many years of unity, the different empires have rebelled again. To ascertain the peace of long ago, they decided to plot a secret plan that would bring the empires again. First, they disguised a Meric with a mask with snakes as the hair, which was enchanted to turn anyone who saw the Meric into stone. They decided to call the Meric, Medusa, after the gorgon in Greek mythology.
Then, they sent the “Medusa” to obtain power over many different empires outside the reign of Order. Medusa was aided by the power of the Magikills and her own powers, and she succeeded in gaining control of many different empires. She told them to disguise themselves so they looked “evil”. Since the Miners were unique to Order, the Magikills sent some of the Miners to Chaos, and Medusa helped Order by sending some giants over so they could be trained to throw rocks.
When Order became really chaotic, Medusa decided to attack. Order reunited to fight back, and they succeeded in defeating Chaos (although Chaos wasn’t trying hard). The Magikills have saved the day! Darn, although it is more than 150 words, I still feel it is quite short.
The Magikill noticed that they weren’t as respected as before, because the young people thought they were better than the "old timers" Magikill. So, the Magikill decided to show their power. What not many people knew about, was that the Magikill knew more than just elemental spells (as was seen in the First War), and that they were masters of the Dark Arts.
They mind controlled a poor Meric, and turned her into a gorgon, and named her Medusa. They told her to capture as many different Empires as she could, and with her power, she slowly succeeded in taking control of many Empires.
First, she decided to attack the Bomber Empire, and sense they were reluctant to suicide so many bombers for 1 person, they decided to surrender to Medusa. Unfortunately for them, the Magikills used Medusa to mind control them, and told them to attack the crawlers. The crawlers, seeing how many of their kind had died to bombers, surrendered, and were mind controlled. In this way, Medusa slowly captured many different empires. Some were not real Empires, but mutants that Medusa sent to the Magikills to mutate. For example, the Juggerknights were brainwashed Speartons that had their armor changed. The Eclipsors were Archidons mutated with interesting animals called “bats”. The Marrowkai were Magikill volunteers. Of course, they were all brainwashed too.
Also, Medusa needed some Miners to mine gold for them, so the Magikill caught some and sent them to Medusa. When the Magikill saw that Medusa had captured the tough Giants, they told Medusa to send some to Order, under the pretense that the Magikills had been responsible for the capture (which helped Order to think of Magikills as more powerful). The Magikills’ skill had prevented Order from realizing the threat yet, and finally, when Chaos attacked, the Magikill used their powers to destroy Chaos. Fortunately for them, Order never realized that the Magikill were responsible for the birth of Chaos.
I like my second one better :D
SHAME ON ME I FAILED AT PERSPECTIVE :/

ShadowyWhisper
01-29-2013, 01:33 PM
My story:

Medusa was mad that her name started with Medusa. So she bought a Crawler to help change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Juggerknight to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Marrowkai to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Giant to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought an Eclispsor to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Dead to change her name. But it didn't.

So she bought a Bomber to change her name. It exploded and her name became...

DEMUAS

And she decided to attack Order because they started to make fun of her name.

VOTE 1 -5 stars.

jerrytt
01-29-2013, 02:10 PM
^ No... Just No....

FailingAtFailing
01-29-2013, 03:57 PM
My story:

Medusa was mad that her name started with Medusa. So she bought a Crawler to help change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Juggerknight to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Marrowkai to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Giant to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought an Eclispsor to change her name. But it didn't. So she bought a Dead to change her name. But it didn't.

So she bought a Bomber to change her name. It exploded and her name became...

DEMUAS

And she decided to attack Order because they started to make fun of her name.

VOTE 1 -5 stars.

I have high doubts that is even 150 words and it is bad anyway. Looks like some story for 3-year olds.

DragonFrost
01-29-2013, 04:45 PM
Not counting "My Story:" and "VOTE 1-5 stars.", that story is 113 words.

ShadowyWhisper
01-29-2013, 04:52 PM
I can't believe that you guys are taking this seriously. I mean really... my 4 year old cousin wrote it when I showed him the game. He said it was scary and started crying and wrote this story as a result...

DragonFrost
01-29-2013, 05:12 PM
.... Please refrain from USELESS POSTS or STORIES, or else I hope that you die a very painful death.

Panki
01-29-2013, 05:41 PM
I can't believe that you guys are taking this seriously. I mean really... my 4 year old cousin wrote it when I showed him the game. He said it was scary and started crying and wrote this story as a result...

Post it in some other thread. You should know this is serious because this competition has rules.

ShadowyWhisper
01-29-2013, 06:12 PM
... All right I'll make another story to make up for it.

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 07:10 PM
The beginning of Inamorata's constant wars: by kingkickass2013 (this is just a rough draft and a peek at what the story is, if you like it i shall continue this story, but if you don't i shall try again)

PART 1:

When Order fought off the Rebellion army they had not known one of their Merics were taken, her name was Medusa. their were two rebellions the one that took the Meric called themselves, Chaos, at this time chaos had no leader. so they cursed the meric and casted dark magic upon her. which then snakes grew out of her head and her mere sight turned the good at heart into stone.


Journal log 1, my name is Gregory the third and i will be writing these journal logs often, yesterday i saw a strange looking woman walk by, she didn't talk or look at anybody and wore very suspicious robes and a hood and continued on to the miners workplace. i sense a dark evil may be coming upon our prosperous kingdom, but could the rebellion army we defeated many years ago be back? doesn't matter, i will soon be joining the ranks of the swordwrath instead of a lowly citizen, i hope i get a helmet just like the poster said i would.

TO BE CONTINUED.

what did you think, my story will break off into two parts, the journal log of Gregory the third and the history of the rise of chaos

Panki
01-29-2013, 07:19 PM
Work on capitalization a little bit. And also, If you're referring to the war in Stick War 1, there were no merics back then. But if you're referring to the one between Order vs Magikill/Merics, then ignore what I said.

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 07:26 PM
im refering just a bit to the game, in the times of olden when order was fighting the rebellion army, not only did the magikills spawn demons to assist them, they had small encampments in which they taught females to heal, BUT they werent fully ready to be out into combat like they are today. so when they were overrun by order the merics tried to flee but one was captured by chaos, the rest were sent back to orders kingdom and they continued learning how to heal and cure units

so im referring to the war back in stick wars 1 with a small twist in it

so panki have you got your story down

and shadowy whisper, don't worry i'm sure after a couple nightmares your 4 year old cousin will be just fine, keep working on a story

FailingAtFailing
01-29-2013, 07:27 PM
The beginning of Inamorata's constant wars: by kingkickass2013 (this is just a rough draft and a peek at what the story is, if you like it i shall continue this story, but if you don't i shall try again)

PART 1:

When Order fought off the Rebellion army they had not known one of their Merics were taken, her name was Medusa. their where two rebellions the one that took the Meric called themselves, Chaos, at this time chaos had no leader. so they cursed the meric and casted dark magic upon her. which then snakes grew out of her head and her mere sight turned the good at heart into stone.


Journal log 1, my name is Gregory the third and i will be writing these journal logs often, yesterday i saw a strange looking woman walk by, she didn't talk or look at anybody and wore very suspicious robes and a hood and continued on to the miners workplace. i sense a dark evil may be coming upon our prosperous kingdom, but could the rebellion army we defeated many years ago be back? doesn't matter, i will soon be joining the ranks of the swordwrath instead of a lowly citizen, i hope i get a helmet just like the poster said i would.

TO BE CONTINUED.

what did you think, my story will break off into two parts, the journal log of Gregory the third and the history of the rise of chaos

MY EYES!!!!! The grammar!!!!

You do know good English is a rule, right?

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 07:32 PM
-_- do you like the story? the person running this contest isn't looking for stories to grade on grammar.

ShadowyWhisper
01-29-2013, 07:36 PM
Yes, it's a very good story indeed. Perhaps you should maybe, I don't know, do the same thing with all the Order characters? I'm not very creative, mind you.

FailingAtFailing
01-29-2013, 07:37 PM
-_- do you like the story? the person running this contest isn't looking for stories to grade on grammar.

Actually, grammar is a rule.... Also, Chaos was around long before Stick Wars 2. They were dominating the northern parts of Inamorta and taking over nations. Hence how the Dark Knights are in their army. The Dark Knights are normal people if you look closely, unlike the other people in Chaos. That's 'cause they were taken over by Chaos. Same with their Miners. They kinda needed a leader to rule their conquerings up north. So the story doesn't really fit with the Continuity you could say. As a person who likes consistency in a story, that bugs me a decent bit.

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 07:39 PM
great glad to see your not one of the people who only look at stories for grammar

but failing at failing the story states that the chaos army was with in along side the rebellion army back at stick wars 1, anyway more of the history on what i believe happened will unravel as the story moves on, who knows maybe the historical parts i write are a bit more interesting (of course i will try to stay as close to history as possible, i went in this story war without doing research)

also the rules didnt say we had to write the history of this game perfect, so if you don't like the history of the game, write it again

ShadowyWhisper
01-29-2013, 07:41 PM
Well, story should be based on it's content. Also, for simple purposes, we shouldn't get into vocabulary and format and strict context, you know?

FailingAtFailing
01-29-2013, 07:49 PM
great glad to see your not one of the people who only look at stories for grammar

but failing at failing the story states that the chaos army was with in along side the rebellion army back at stick wars 1, anyway more of the history on what i believe happened will unravel as the story moves on, who knows maybe the historical parts i write are a bit more interesting (of course i will try to stay as close to history as possible, i went in this story war without doing research)

But in Stick Wars 1, there were no Merics. The Merics appeared in Stick Wars 2 when the Magikill decided healers would be useful, so they trained women in healing arts. Also, Stick Wars 1 wasn't really a rebellion. It was more like Order going "The best defense is a good offense" and they decided to attack everyone else.

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 07:53 PM
i already went through with this now go bother a different persons story or better yet make your own

besides it just a rough draft, a quick sneak peek on whats going to be shown in the story

FailingAtFailing
01-29-2013, 07:55 PM
i already went through with this now go bother a different persons story or better yet make your own

I am, I have an idea for 2 stories. One details the life of a POW during Stick Wars 2. The other details a magikill delving into darker arts and becoming a Marrowkai and defecting to Chaos. The Magikill one is the one I am working on.

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 07:58 PM
wow the magikill one sounds quite epic, but i have one question, whats a POW in stick wars 2. does it mean PERSON OF WAR or am i way off with that

ShadowyWhisper
01-29-2013, 08:15 PM
No offense, but that's kind of Kicking's idea of Order character switching sides.

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 08:33 PM
eh the meric getting kidnapped and changed into an evil hag was my idea but the magikill going into marrowkai is free game

anyway i just finished part two, it takes place in stick wars 2 when the rise of a more sneaky opponent attacks order

Panki
01-29-2013, 08:40 PM
What does the magikill say when it's casting spells?

kingkickass2013
01-29-2013, 09:06 PM
well heres the three spells it has

blast: Iluminate
poison spray: venomon toxsoniare
electric wall: navitas electosus

i tried my best on spelling out words that you cannot see


i completed the first 3 parts of the story, you can check them out, if i get a reply to continue the story i will delete its thread and continue typing in the story

DragonFrost
01-30-2013, 07:25 AM
>.> guys damnit you all have similar ideas to me :( but that's ok. And yes, your story doesn't have to follow EXACTLy the game story, there can be interesting twists and stuff.

FailingAtFailing
01-30-2013, 02:18 PM
wow the magikill one sounds quite epic, but i have one question, whats a POW in stick wars 2. does it mean PERSON OF WAR or am i way off with that

POW = Prisoner of War, Chaos takes Prisoners, I mean look at their miners, they're prisoners.

Giz
01-30-2013, 03:03 PM
The Story of Queen Medusa and the Chaos Empire:
"HA! Stupid Empire..." Said queen Medusa. Queen Medusa was sitting back on her throne with two of her best Juggerknights by her side, laughing at Orders struggle to unite all of their past allies. "Foolishness must be a virtue for them. They seem to value it with all their life!" "Yes. Indeed" said the 2 Juggerknights. "QUEEN MEDUSA!! QUEEN MEDUSA!! COME QUICK!!" Said a voice. It was non other than the marrowkai, the Queens right hand man. "One of the giants has escaped!" The marrowkai yelled.
"Oh we have tons of those"
"BUT COME LOOK WHERE IT IS NOW!!" He yelled. Medusa quickly went up to the balcony of her castle, pushing her castle deads to the side. "Wha-WHAT IS THIS?!" She yelled. Two speartons, 6 swordwrath, 5 archers, and a ninja was ambushing the runaway giant. They quickly weakened, chained, and equipped him with rocks. "Hey, Whats that in the distance?" Said one of their swordwrath. Medusas miners knew that the swordwrath was talking about them, so they retreated, having lost the will to fight or the freedom to run away. Orders army approached medusas castle. Gold mines with little gold surrounded them. Dead Miners, axes, and body parts also were present. "You fools thought that inamorta belonged to YOU?!?! We have been here all along, biding our power while you all fight for land that actually belongs to me...But now, you've enslaved my babies and i will wait no longer now you will feel the wrath of the Chaos empire, HAHAAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!" Yelled queen medusa. Medusa readied her units. She thought that order was weak, so their would be no need to release any valuable units. She instead released the bombers and giants, hoping that they would be enough. But she had another thing coming....
The Rebels and order have teamed up! Medusa had underestimated them, and unit after unit was slaughtered and killed. This continued, order ripped though the juggerknights, tore through the deads, shot passed the Eclipsors, and broke past the marrowkai, to the point where medusa was pushed back to her main castle. Her main headquarters, her man-eerr....or should i say, Girlcave?
Medusa sent out her last units into the battlefield early as a desperate move to weaken orders army. She had sent out her 2 best juggerknights, her marrokwkai that was her right hand man, and her most ferocious, blood thirsty giant. Order, Having had built early units as well, were not surprised, and they ripped though her army like a tornado rips through a town. "THHAAT IS IT!!!! NO MERCY! NO MERCY!" She yelled. She raged toward the Battlefield. "YOU MUST ALL DIE!!!!" She yelled. She kept this ability for a last resort. With a whip of her hair, She exposed her hideous, red eyed face to all Orders army. Their army had turned to stone. Look right, stone archer, look left, terrified miner, look ahead, statue of a speaton. Everyone was dead.....
THE END

Well, almost

At least that's what MEDUSA Thought.. Order had a hidden army within their walls. Of course, They were fighting the all mighty medusa, the queen that could turn people to stone. They had to come up with a counter attack in case she had a trick up her sleeve (Or, should i say, cape...) "WHAT!! NOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooo..." Medusa yelled . Order had won. They defeated Chaos.....

THHHEEEE EEENNNDDD!!!!!

PS This took me 15 minutes to come up and write, so this better have an honorable mention or first place or something!

kingkickass2013
01-30-2013, 03:30 PM
indeed an honorable story, and i love how the way you used the choice of words to describe whats happening

DragonFrost
01-30-2013, 03:47 PM
Guys, I'm done 1 story, and am planning to do a second one (similar to the first), sometime. Check out the second page for my stories! :D
ETA: Done my second one too! :D
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!/page2
this page. How do you send a link to the actual post?

kingkickass2013
01-30-2013, 04:20 PM
i have an idea for the reward, respect and a trophy made out of text

DragonFrost
01-30-2013, 04:20 PM
Can you do the trophy?

Panki
01-30-2013, 04:20 PM
Weird, on Google translate the electric spell is in Spanish.....

kingkickass2013
01-30-2013, 04:21 PM
wow i spelled it correctly, cool

and heres the best trophy i can make

.TEXT...
...lOl...
...lOl....
...lOl....
...lOl....
.====...

Invincitron
01-30-2013, 04:30 PM
Hi reader,

Rage of Medusa
By Invincitron

One day, in the land of Inamorta.. the Order Empire beats the Rebels and destroys the enemy Monument. They eventually defeat the Giant that was inside the monument. Now Medusa sees what has happened "YOU FOOLS!" she yells, "They think that Inamorta belongs to them!" A quote says "Order always beats Chaos" Medusa now wants to prove it wrong. "I want the rebels of the Swordwrath attacked!" says Medusa. The Marrowkais step into the Crypt "Calling all Crawlers, Bombers, and Jugger Knights!" commands a Marrowkai, "Yes sir," say the Jugger Knights, "We're going to extend our territory in Inamorta.. we have finally grew with enough power!"

They attack the Swordwrath with only 22 casualties, 2 Crawlers, and 20 Bombers. With all the dead Swordwrath and the ones captured they turned them into... well zombie like things. "We've got the Swordwrath like you wanted, now what?" says a Jugger Knight, "We shall turn them into my new creation... Deads!" replies Medusa. "And what shall we do with the Swordwrath who are completes destroyed into ashes?" askes another Jugger Knight, "We shall mutate our bats... into Eclipsors!" yells Medusa, "I think the name Wingadon is better says an Enslaved Miner."

With their new technology the built the graveyard... with all of these units they attacked the Archidons, Speartons, and Magikill's... winning all of them they've got all the territory they wanted! "Now it's time to strike... what?" asks a Marrowkai, "Hmm, maybe lets destroy Order!" says Medusa. Now The Chaos Empire looks at Order and says "Hmm, these guys are very good we need a new technology..." says Medusa's men, "UNLEASH THE GIANT!" exclaims Medusa.

The end (There shall be no continuation).

.:Invincitron:.

FailingAtFailing
01-30-2013, 08:31 PM
Well, I have finished my story. It is about a magikill who finds a source of power, but it changes him.

Conversion

The rebels were doomed. They had been pushed into the western lands by Order and they had now seen a terrible army calling themselves Chaos. The leading Magikill Council knew they were fighting a losing war now. They were fighting two enemies at once.

A lower member in the Council named Ghilm decided to search for more spells for use in the war. He experimented with all kinds of magical words and dusted off old tomes. He brought rebel swordwrath to escort him as he searched through ruins in No Man’s Land.

He came across some giant skeletons in front of a temple adorned with a skull chiselled from marble. Two great pillars of stone rose before him. In between the pillars was a large gate made of steel. The gate was at least three times his height. The swordwrath attempted to push on the gate, but it did not move. Ghilm ordered them to step back. He casted an explosion spell.

The gate blew inwards, but the shockwave rumbled through the desert. The marble skull fell and trapped the group. They were stuck in the temple. Ghilm casted magical light spells for each member of the group. In each of their hands was a small ball that easily fit in each of their palms. It emitted a soft white light. With sight now in their possession they could see the interior of the temple.

On the ground was a large piece of stone made to look like a bone. It was broken in half. The most likely explanation was that it was acting as a door bar. It was possibly keeping giants out. The skeletons outside were most likely giants that starved as they waited for food to come out of the temple, which it eventually didn’t.

The temple had a simple layout. It was a single large open room. The floor was polished stone and was free of any debris. There was a pathway outlined with gold. The path led to a podium at the end of the room. The group walked towards the podium. As they got closer to it, a foul scent became more evident.

When they arrived at the podium, they found rotting corpses. These weren’t human corpses, they were Deads from the Chaos army. Deads have never been seen deceased from anything other than combat, so this was an intriguing discovery. However, something stranger was the existence of a human skeleton with a backpack near it. The backpack was full of tattered, unreadable books and empty food containers. The person must have starved to death.

On the podium itself was a book illuminated by a thin shaft of light, its source unknown. The book was in good condition. Ghilm opened it. It was full of spells, perhaps some of which could be useful to fighting Order and Chaos. The first spell was named “Rise” but it had no further description. Ghilm took the book and they walked back to the entrance.

Soon, they saw some light coming from the blocked entrance. More and more of it came through. Its cause was soon evident. A fully-grown giant had lifted the skull out of the way. Behind it were many other giants about half its size. The swordwrath made an attempt to protect Ghilm, but most of them were slaughtered effortlessly as the leading giant took one swing of its club, which was a 20-foot tree.

“VENOMUM TOXONIUM!!!” was the sound heard after that as Ghilm poisoned them all. He wasn’t sure if the Magikill Minions still existed in the Limbo Realm, but he attempted to summon them, with no result. They really were gone. Ghilm casted a wall of electricity behind the leading giant. Those giants quickly had their heart stopped by the electrical shock, they dropped dead immediately. The lead giant, now angered grabbed one of his comrade’s bodies and used it as a weapon against Ghilm. The ground shook and blood came from the body of the giant as the sickening crunch of its bones breaking echoed through the desert.

Ghilm was running out of energy for spells, he only had enough for a few more. He ran behind one of the marble pillars and opened the book once more. Another spell was labelled “Requiem”, again with no further description other than the words that needed to be uttered for the spell.

Ghilm shouted to the skies, “Fatalitis Risonis!” and the corpses that were still in good shape rose to his bidding. Most of the swordwrath were mangled to the point of no return, but most of the dead giants were in one piece. They rose and looked towards Ghilm, awaiting an answer.

Ghilm whispered, “Defend me” and they complied. They tackled the lead giant to the ground and another jumped on its head with all of its weight. The lead giant’s head was flattened and blood sprayed out in a disc and pieces of brain shot out in directions. Ghilm was impressed at how effective these corpses could still be. He ordered them to carry him back to the Rebel camp in Westwind.

He arrived and told the Magikill council of this book and other potential spells in it that could be used to crush Order and Chaos.

The council members looked at each other before the leading Magikill said, “Ghilm, this book is the embodiment of Chaos. Simply the reviving spells on the first page scream Chaos. I fear the book itself may have a curse on it placed by the King of Chaos, whoever he might be. The revival of the dead is unnatural. Even the instantaneous healing of the Merics breaks nature. We are already treading into risky areas by ignoring the laws of the natural world and substituting them with our own. If you may, hand us the book and we will destroy it, and any curse on it”

A voice in Ghilm’s head told him, “Don’t listen, they are selfish and arrogant. They believe that since you are a lower member, you are useless. Use the book and prove you are not.”

Ghilm left the room. The council was not pleased. Ghilm walked towards the graveyards containing dead rebels. He used the Requiem spell and the dead rebels rose out of their graves. Ghilm would show the council that his word could be trusted. He brought his army of dead rebels and zombie giants to Chaos territory and began a massacre of miners, deads and Juggerknights while he rained destruction with his Magikill spells. A city in ruins was now reduced to a field full of death. Retreating Wingidons were heading west across the water. The giants hurled rubble at them. Some of them feebly attempted to fight back and shot a few volleys of arrows. They had no effect on the zombies who felt no pain.

However, one got Ghilm in the knee and took him down to the ground. He writhed in pain as he rolled on the ground. An undead meric pulled the arrow out of his knee. He slowly got up and noticed arrows in his zombie army. They were indifferent to the fact that arrows punctured their limbs. Ghilm had an idea.

He opened the book to the second page, where he found a spell called “Evolution”, he casted it. The words “Necrosisium Embodidium” echoed through the skies. Ghilm thought he uttered the spell wrong until a lightning bolt struck him and skin and muscle was torn from his bones. He screamed in pain as his internal organs melted out and his face burned off his skull. Magical energies flowed from the ground and wrapped around his bones to keep them together.

After the horrible ordeal, Ghilm found himself as an undead, however he was sentient with his own thoughts still. He now felt no pain and could use these powers to their fullest now because a simple arrow would not interrupt his spells anymore.

Ultimate power was now in his hands.


Also, I'm editing this into my post on the first page, just so people can see it when they first read the thread.

kingkickass2013
01-30-2013, 08:52 PM
oh my god that story was the best Ive read for a while, but take a looky at my story its in its own thread

it has potential for victory, but im sure there are many others out there that are on the same level as it

_Ai_
01-30-2013, 11:33 PM
Interesting, I shall take part as well.
And all of you people story is awesome

Xate
01-31-2013, 04:40 AM
Mine:
Ugh...Where am I? Damn, have I been asleep or something? Damn, can't remember anything... Let's see... Around me is a big, grassy field with a few houses. I checked them but they were empty. Weird... Then something caught my eye. A tower of some sort? It was taller than me and there seemed to be a small, red, glowing circle beneath. Well this is getting stranger second by second...Wait a second... Footsteps? "THERE'S PEOPLE HERE! HEY OVER HERE! CAN YOU HELP ME??" I shouted. And approaching me are... well cat-like creatures. Two of em. And that marks my cue to RUN AWAY AS IF YOUR LIFE DEPENDS ON IT! Oh wait IT IS! I ran like madman, trying to escape those creatures.But God hates me. I tripped and made the ULTIMATE FACEPALM. And that leaves me a bruise on my head. WHY!! NOT MY BEAUTIFUL FACE!!!! Oh wait, how did I know I was beautiful? AAAAnyway, as I was crawling on the ground trying to get away, some guys carrying swords CHOPPED THEM IN HALF! PWNED BAYBY!(That's what I wanna scream out) They turned around and just stared at me.
-What's he doing here?
-Is he Chaos's enslaved miner?
-Maybe.
-Let's capture him and question him.
I DID NOT LIKE THE SOUND OF THAT! I was trying to get away but... HOW THE HELL CAN YOU MOVE WHEN THEY TRAPPED YOU WITH BIG FREAKIN SWORDS!!!!(Wonder if their "swords" are big...I'm not gay ok?) And then I was dragged back to a big castle with bowmen(?) on top and a cool-looking statue in the front. There were miners working around there. After I was pulled inside, I was trapped in a room-a small, dark room to be exact. And then came out a very cool-looking guy in armor. WHY THE HELL DIDN'T I HAVE IT??? I tried to talk to him but his reply was a spear to throat, it is EXTREMELY near my throat. And that made me so scared that my balls wanna burst into dust. "TELL ME ABOUT YOUR MASTER" the armor dude said. "I have no freakin idea what you're saying, and just who are you?"
To be continued(Maybe)
PS: I suck so critcism needed, but HELPFUL CONSTRUCTIVE REVIEWS ONLY!(Please no flame war)
PSS: oh wait wrong topic...I'M STILL LEAVING THIS HERE!

FailingAtFailing
01-31-2013, 07:14 AM
I just realized that there was a subject that we had to follow. fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

_Ai_
01-31-2013, 07:16 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooo
I didnt realize that. Now my efforts are down the drains T T

FailingAtFailing
01-31-2013, 07:22 AM
Also, did anyone notice a Skyrim reference in my story? : D

_Ai_
01-31-2013, 07:27 AM
Hm..... i didnt. maybe because i dont play skyrim

Triss
01-31-2013, 08:09 AM
The Legendary Warrior Seartan :

Speartons, are warriors of valor,justice,and peace.
But, they are all based from a legendary warrior, called Seartan.
He's the man, who able to kill 300 soldiers on his own.
Here is his story:

Speartan was born in a small mountain village called Rinnen Village.
It was a peaceful village, in the Valley of Verben, surrounded by 2 mountains.
His father name was Spencer Lock the village top blacksmith, and his mother name was Aravan Tarim the traveller.
The Rinnen village, was a strong village, where their infamous shields are compared to hides of dragons.

Seartan was born as a healthy boy, and a quick learner on the village.
He was considered a prodigy and a energetic boy in his village.
By the age of 7, he already learned the how to blacksmith armor of their villages.
However, at the age of 8, his mother gave birth again, to a boy named Gerant.
But after that, his mother passed away because of the strain of giving birth.

Gerant, an even more prodigy than Seartan, he crafted his own weapon at age of 7.
After Gerant is 10 years old and Seartan is 18 years old, the village decided a blacksmithing competetition.
Gerant and Searton was the leader of the blacksmith, and they're both favored.
And after the village leaders judgement, Gerant have the best weapons, while Seartan have the best armor.
But everything have it's own end.....

When Seartan is 20 years old, their village was raided by a group of Giants.
Almost everyone in the village died, including Seartan's father.
However, Searton survived the battle with Gerant to the land of Inamorta, fleeing there.
There, they stay on a village of swordwraths, while keep practising their blacksmithing capabilities.
But, both of them have their own resolve, to beat the giant army who killed their father with their armors.
Both of them resolve their vengeance, by practising all day and night to put their lives to the battle they waiting for.

6 years later......

Seartan was 26 years old, and Gerant was 18 years old, when they hear about stories of giants that fighting the Alliance.
They quickly understand, that this is the time for their vengeance.
They move quickly to the camp of Alliance general, pleading their royalty.
The general was intrigued, since they never seen such armor and weapons that are so strong, that the magikills blast couldn't destroy them.
So, after several days, they are invited to the Alliance army....

The Alliance quickly swept the land...
They purged every rebel's traces, and each win was contributed to two people, the blacksmith brothers.
The brother itself, have shown incredible strength, capable matching their general in 1vs1 combat.

Soon, the faced the corner of Inamorta, the Last Siege of the rebels.
The brothers, now considered as colonels, received a strange vague feeling of dejavu...
The brothers quickly put aside their feelings, and charge the enemy bravely, each of them cutting 10 soldiers, and fatally wounded a giant.
However, after the Alliance faced the statue, a great rumble was heard.....
The statue is coming out ALIVE!!!
The Alliance quickly retreat, to face their enemy last stand, the Great Giant.
The brothers, realized their soldiers are routing, they quickly shouted to the bastards...

"We are here today, for a reason, and a reason only...."
"To face the enemy, we will stand at nothing to stop them...."
"This is their last stand, their last hope...."
"And this is our last battle, the one who decide it all, and so,LET'S TAKE THE FIGHT BACK TO THEM!!!!!"

The soldiers realized the battle was the one who decide it all, and quickly put aside their doubts, and charged at the enemy.
The Great Giant, the rebel leader, was furiously attacking the Alliance army with his mighty army.
Both army clashed each other at great force, and casualities happening on both sides...
But, the Alliance are winning, and the all the enemy are dead, with only exception of the Great Giant.
But, the Great Giant strength are fading, and he fell with a mighty rumble to the ground.....
The Alliance have won, and the peace was restored, thanks to the brothers.
The brothers, realized that the Great Giant was the leader of the giants army who attacked their village, shouted in triumph...
And they realized, that they have been together for too long.....

And so, they both took separate ways.....

End of Part I

That's my story :p

_Ai_
01-31-2013, 08:20 AM
The Legendary Warrior Seartan :

Speartons, are warriors of valor,justice,and peace.
But, they are all based from a legendary warrior, called Seartan.
He's the man, who able to kill 300 soldiers on his own.
Here is his story:

Speartan was born in a small mountain village called Rinnen Village.
It was a peaceful village, in the Valley of Verben, surrounded by 2 mountains.
His father name was Spencer Lock the village top blacksmith, and his mother name was Aravan Tarim the traveller.
The Rinnen village, was a strong village, where their infamous shields are compared to hides of dragons.

Seartan was born as a healthy boy, and a quick learner on the village.
He was considered a prodigy and a energetic boy in his village.
By the age of 7, he already learned the how to blacksmith armor of their villages.
However, at the age of 8, his mother gave birth again, to a boy named Gerant.
But after that, his mother passed away because of the strain of giving birth.

Gerant, an even more prodigy than Seartan, he crafted his own weapon at age of 7.
After Gerant is 10 years old and Seartan is 18 years old, the village decided a blacksmithing competetition.
Gerant and Searton was the leader of the blacksmith, and they're both favored.
And after the village leaders judgement, Gerant have the best weapons, while Seartan have the best armor.
But everything have it's own end.....

When Seartan is 20 years old, their village was raided by a group of Giants.
Almost everyone in the village died, including Seartan's father.
However, Searton survived the battle with Gerant to the land of Inamorta, fleeing there.
There, they stay on a village of swordwraths, while keep practising their blacksmithing capabilities.
But, both of them have their own resolve, to beat the giant army who killed their father with their armors.
Both of them resolve their vengeance, by practising all day and night to put their lives to the battle they waiting for.

6 years later......

Seartan was 26 years old, and Gerant was 18 years old, when they hear about stories of giants that fighting the Alliance.
They quickly understand, that this is the time for their vengeance.
They move quickly to the camp of Alliance general, pleading their royalty.
The general was intrigued, since they never seen such armor and weapons that are so strong, that the magikills blast couldn't destroy them.
So, after several days, they are invited to the Alliance army....

The Alliance quickly swept the land...
They purged every rebel's traces, and each win was contributed to two people, the blacksmith brothers.
The brother itself, have shown incredible strength, capable matching their general in 1vs1 combat.

Soon, the faced the corner of Inamorta, the Last Siege of the rebels.
The brothers, now considered as colonels, received a strange vague feeling of dejavu...
The brothers quickly put aside their feelings, and charge the enemy bravely, each of them cutting 10 soldiers, and fatally wounded a giant.
However, after the Alliance faced the statue, a great rumble was heard.....
The statue is coming out ALIVE!!!
The Alliance quickly retreat, to face their enemy last stand, the Great Giant.
The brothers, realized their soldiers are routing, they quickly shouted to the bastards...

"We are here today, for a reason, and a reason only...."
"To face the enemy, we will stand at nothing to stop them...."
"This is their last stand, their last hope...."
"And this is our last battle, the one who decide it all, and so,LET'S TAKE THE FIGHT BACK TO THEM!!!!!"
The soldiers realized the battle was the one who decide it all, and quickly put aside their doubts, and charged at the enemy.
The Great Giant, the rebel leader, was furiously attacking the Alliance army with his mighty army.
Both army clashed each other at great force, and casualities happening on both sides...
But, the Alliance are winning, and the all the enemy are dead, with only exception of the Great Giant.
But, the Great Giant strength are fading, and he fell with a mighty rumble to the ground.....
The Alliance have won, and the peace was restored, thanks to the brothers.
The brothers, realized that the Great Giant was the leader of the giants army who attacked their village, shouted in triumph...
And they realized, that they have been together for too long.....

And so, they both took separate ways.....

End of Part I

That's my story :p

This. Is. Epic.
But I guess the Searton and Gerant will fight someday, with Searton in Order and Gerant in Chaos

FailingAtFailing
01-31-2013, 08:39 AM
The Legendary Warrior Seartan :

*story*



This is a cool story, but I have a few questions.

Rinnen Village is a Spearton village, but the way you worded a part of the story implied that it existed outside of Inamorta, outside of the known Stick Empires world, which would also explain dragons. Is this true or just a mistake? If it's true it would be cool if the story returned there.

Also, the word infamous implies bad. Are the shields soft and dragon hides are soft in this story?

Other than those questions, I say it's a nice story that could go to some cool places.

Triss
01-31-2013, 08:48 AM
This is a cool story, but I have a few questions.

Rinnen Village is a Spearton village, but the way you worded a part of the story implied that it existed outside of Inamorta, outside of the known Stick Empires world, which would also explain dragons. Is this true or just a mistake? If it's true it would be cool if the story returned there.

Also, the word infamous implies bad. Are the shields soft and dragon hides are soft in this story?

Other than those questions, I say it's a nice story that could go to some cool places.

Rinnen village was outside of the Inarmota Continent, it was from other continent.
P.S.:I'll explain bout the Great Giant in part II

I think "infamous" is cooler than just "famous"

Also if you like the story, I could make the part II(which will explain more bout the story)

_Ai_
01-31-2013, 09:05 AM
Rinnen village was outside of the Inarmota Continent, it was from other continent.
P.S.:Perhaps the rebel summon the Great Giant using black magic for their support of the war.

I think "infamous" is cooler than just "famous"

Also if you like the story, I could make the part II(which will explain more bout the story)

Please do.

Giz
01-31-2013, 02:01 PM
Man, competition is pretty fierce, mine probably won't stand a chance.....
I'm taking a vote. Who wants me to remake my story?!?

DragonFrost
01-31-2013, 05:14 PM
ME! jk but you can make more than 1 story, you know? Yes, competition is fierce, I'm screwed :p

Triss
01-31-2013, 05:17 PM
You can make more than 1 story Frost?
(btw check my story and give suggestions ok?)

DragonFrost
01-31-2013, 05:24 PM
Ok, yes, I edited the rules so you could make more than 1 story.

Triss
01-31-2013, 05:26 PM
You should make a story yourself, frost.
Also congrats for 1000+ more posts.

DragonFrost
01-31-2013, 05:33 PM
I did :/ And I really love your story! It's really interesting. Check page 2 for my 2 stories.

Luzoto
01-31-2013, 10:26 PM
I don't know if this belongs in Original Literature or here...


Many years had passed since the Liberation, or, as the insurgents would wish to refer to it as, the Invasion. Many still remember the day when the trumpets hailed the king of the empire as he marched his way along with the Commander of Military Decrees back to the hearth of the Liberation, the land where the Order had first begun its days. Millions of his supporters and troops followed in his wake, and the day of victory was marked as an honored holiday, where people would feast and compete in violent sports that re-enacted the turning points of the war. After just two years of magical research by the magikill, it was possible to tame giants using an expensive set of massive chains that would brainwash its wearer. Giants had become an integral part of the Orderanian's lifestyle since then; they worked the fields, served as transportation, and ensured that a revolution would never happen. All was well and perfect...

Or so the history books have told.

Tales speak only of the heroism of the leaders of Order, yet there is a suspicious level of praise within them. Were failures ever mentioned? Moments of corruption, or a conspiracy, perhaps? Why should the Orderanians be concerned anyhow? They were quite content with their lifestyle, so much that not even the wisdom of the Magikill would question their history.

What really happened is still a mystery, even to the rebels, who have hidden themselves away. Their own past experiences, however, contradict greatly against what the Council of Order has told their people. Why does no one remember the animals that populated the world? The Order warriors did not simply walk around the entire continent; many of us remember the ferocious 'crawlers', humanoid mounts who could have easily ripped a man's head off in seconds. They attacked in huge swarms, yet they all suddenly disappeared once the Liberation was complete. Only rare sightings have occurred here and there, but if they prove to be true, then the Crawlers have devolved into a much smaller state. And what of the Magikill's spawns? Summoning magic was also forbidden with the end of the Liberation, but such spawns were inaccurately described as 'little devils', when really, they arose from the unburied remains of fallen soldiers to take revenge upon the living. Eclipsors were all but gone; the gentle 'winged beasts' have actually been in Orderanian history, but they also vanished soon after the Liberation, due to humans using them for archery practice.

Only a few rebels survived the Invasion. They hid within the caves of the land, and a shoddy truce was all that kept them from leaping at each other's throats. Despite the terrible disadvantage they had now against the Order Empire, they continued to populate until every speck of land that was once uninhabited was now otherwise. Not only that, but they had dropped their differences and began to benefit from each other's successes. The shadowrath are an interesting example of this; they originated from a few wise swordswrath who studied the art of magic and the fighting style of speartons to create a soldier who would be able to learn the weak points of his enemies in seconds, improving in the midst of battle.

A secret that no one could have anticipated, however, was the corruption of the animals. The reason for their disappearance was an indirect cause of the death of the King Giant, who was sealed away in a statue because of an abnormal soul that grew within him. After his death, the soul escaped to the outside world, taking the life of an Orderanian to gain the physical form of Medusa. This spirit was not evil at first. It simply wished to take vengeance for the horrible things it witnessed: the hunting of Eclipsors, the enslavement of giants, and the greedy Order Empire. Witnessing these acts began to corrupt it until it used its inherent powers to call the remaining races that were abused by humans. Crawlers were trained to be stealthy, Deads were smart enough to throw their guts, Eclipsors practiced with the bow, and the Giants captured many Orderanians to be used as slaves (in the form of miners, suicide bombers, or a second weapon). Through this training did Medusa find that undead Magikill were different from other deads, in that they could learn magic at the cost of much of their body.

When the rebels finally began the Revolution, it was the perfect time for Medusa and her army to take what had been taken from them. The name of Chaos comes from the fact that their assault in the Chaos of the Revolution nearly doomed the Order Empire, reminding them of what would become if they continued their ways. This also explains why the insurgents formed an alliance with the Empire after Medusa revealed herself.


Do excuse me if I got certain details wrong, it's been nearly 500 posts since I went to this forum.

Triss
02-01-2013, 12:33 AM
Hey Frost, I think that the text trophy, should be changed.
The one who wins get his story posted on stickempireswiki.
Probably that will inspire people to write more.

_Ai_
02-01-2013, 07:53 AM
I don't know if this belongs in Original Literature or here...


Many years had passed since the Liberation, or, as the insurgents would wish to refer to it as, the Invasion. Many still remember the day when the trumpets hailed the king of the empire as he marched his way along with the Commander of Military Decrees back to the hearth of the Liberation, the land where the Order had first begun its days. Millions of his supporters and troops followed in his wake, and the day of victory was marked as an honored holiday, where people would feast and compete in violent sports that re-enacted the turning points of the war. After just two years of magical research by the magikill, it was possible to tame giants using an expensive set of massive chains that would brainwash its wearer. Giants had become an integral part of the Orderanian's lifestyle since then; they worked the fields, served as transportation, and ensured that a revolution would never happen. All was well and perfect...

Or so the history books have told.

Tales speak only of the heroism of the leaders of Order, yet there is a suspicious level of praise within them. Were failures ever mentioned? Moments of corruption, or a conspiracy, perhaps? Why should the Orderanians be concerned anyhow? They were quite content with their lifestyle, so much that not even the wisdom of the Magikill would question their history.

What really happened is still a mystery, even to the rebels, who have hidden themselves away. Their own past experiences, however, contradict greatly against what the Council of Order has told their people. Why does no one remember the animals that populated the world? The Order warriors did not simply walk around the entire continent; many of us remember the ferocious 'crawlers', humanoid mounts who could have easily ripped a man's head off in seconds. They attacked in huge swarms, yet they all suddenly disappeared once the Liberation was complete. Only rare sightings have occurred here and there, but if they prove to be true, then the Crawlers have devolved into a much smaller state. And what of the Magikill's spawns? Summoning magic was also forbidden with the end of the Liberation, but such spawns were inaccurately described as 'little devils', when really, they arose from the unburied remains of fallen soldiers to take revenge upon the living. Eclipsors were all but gone; the gentle 'winged beasts' have actually been in Orderanian history, but they also vanished soon after the Liberation, due to humans using them for archery practice.

Only a few rebels survived the Invasion. They hid within the caves of the land, and a shoddy truce was all that kept them from leaping at each other's throats. Despite the terrible disadvantage they had now against the Order Empire, they continued to populate until every speck of land that was once uninhabited was now otherwise. Not only that, but they had dropped their differences and began to benefit from each other's successes. The shadowrath are an interesting example of this; they originated from a few wise swordswrath who studied the art of magic and the fighting style of speartons to create a soldier who would be able to learn the weak points of his enemies in seconds, improving in the midst of battle.

A secret that no one could have anticipated, however, was the corruption of the animals. The reason for their disappearance was an indirect cause of the death of the King Giant, who was sealed away in a statue because of an abnormal soul that grew within him. After his death, the soul escaped to the outside world, taking the life of an Orderanian to gain the physical form of Medusa. This spirit was not evil at first. It simply wished to take vengeance for the horrible things it witnessed: the hunting of Eclipsors, the enslavement of giants, and the greedy Order Empire. Witnessing these acts began to corrupt it until it used its inherent powers to call the remaining races that were abused by humans. Crawlers were trained to be stealthy, Deads were smart enough to throw their guts, Eclipsors practiced with the bow, and the Giants captured many Orderanians to be used as slaves (in the form of miners, suicide bombers, or a second weapon). Through this training did Medusa find that undead Magikill were different from other deads, in that they could learn magic at the cost of much of their body.

When the rebels finally began the Revolution, it was the perfect time for Medusa and her army to take what had been taken from them. The name of Chaos comes from the fact that their assault in the Chaos of the Revolution nearly doomed the Order Empire, reminding them of what would become if they continued their ways. This also explains why the insurgents formed an alliance with the Empire after Medusa revealed herself.


Do excuse me if I got certain details wrong, it's been nearly 500 posts since I went to this forum.

Not bad, is there a continuation?

Panki
02-01-2013, 11:04 PM
Here's a little preview of my story.

My name is Fuhar Geiss. When I was a lad, I've always had one dream; to be a hero. But as the years passed I began to learn more about myself, and started to doubt that I'd become a hero, much less even being in the army. How can a boy who lived in poverty whose dad was just a poor miner be someone worth remembering? My mother died at child birth. And having such dreams had many consequences. For example, I was teased severely by other kids thinking I could actually be a hero. I was usually known as the socially awkward loner. But the only person who bonded with me was a girl named Amica Guarigone. She was a very close friend who cared about me, and sometimes too much. For example, she would affront any individual who attempted to fight me, and just wouldn't mind her own business. But despite having such a loyal companion, who encouraged me to have a successful career, I still thought that me being a hero was just silly. But I soon realize that anything could happen.

_Ai_
02-01-2013, 11:34 PM
Here's a little preview of my story.

My name is Fuhar Geiss. When I was a lad, I've always had one dream; to be a hero. But as the years passed I began to learn more about myself, and started to doubt that I'd become a hero, much less even being in the army. How can a boy who lived in poverty whose dad was just a poor miner be someone worth remembering? My mother died at child birth. And having such dreams had many consequences. For example, I was teased severely by other kids thinking I could actually be a hero. I was usually known as the socially awkward loner. But the only person who bonded with me was a girl named Amica Guarigone. She was a very close friend who cared about me, and sometimes too much. For example, she would affront any individual who attempted to fight me, and just wouldn't mind her own business. But despite having such a loyal companion, who encouraged me to have a successful career, I still thought that me being a hero was just silly. But I soon realize that anything could happen.

I guess the girl was killed by Chaos's lackeys, and seek revenge. Or, Chaos attacked the village, killing everyone except him in the process

Panki
02-01-2013, 11:50 PM
Neither. You'll find out when I start part 1 tomorrow.

_Ai_
02-01-2013, 11:54 PM
Neither. You'll find out when I start part 1 tomorrow.

Okay. I'll be expecting the story will be good. DO NOT DISSAPOINT.

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 08:43 AM
GO PANKI!

Triss
02-02-2013, 09:29 AM
I wish you goodluck Panki!
I hope your story will beat others in the competition!

@Luzoto that was a good story, perhaps you should started a thread.

Panki
02-02-2013, 09:35 AM
Also, I think the winner should have their story into an animation or something.

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 09:38 AM
Also, I think the winner should have their story into an animation or something.

WTF so long anim it will take months cuz these stories have a good lenght

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 10:13 AM
nobody ever cheered me on when i said i was making a story :(


anyway i worked a little more on the text trophy

'''''''''1
''''''OOO
'''oooooo
...TEXT...
.....lOl.....
..'''(lOl)....
.....lOl......
...llllllllllll.......


all colored parts are part of the trophy, it now has jewels

p.s whats a good name for a new order. like if order splits apart into two empires, what would the second one be called (NOT CHAOS!)

i also made a second place trophy and a third place

...'2
..'''ll
,,,lllll

'''''''3
'''''.O
''''''lllll

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 10:44 AM
nobody ever cheered me on when i said i was making a story :(


anyway i worked a little more on the text trophy

'''''''''1
''''''OOO
'''oooooo
...TEXT...
.....lOl.....
..'''(lOl)....
.....lOl......
...llllllllllll.......


all colored parts are part of the trophy, it now has jewels

p.s whats a good name for a new order. like if order splits apart into two empires, what would the second one be called (NOT CHAOS!)

i also made a second place trophy and a third place

...'2
..'''ll
,,,lllll

'''''''3
'''''.O
''''''lllll

ill try that

,,,, П
,,,,llПll
,,,lllПlll
,,llllПllll

nop im no gud

_Ai_
02-02-2013, 10:55 AM
WTF so long anim it will take months cuz these stories have a good lenght

If it was to be made into a story, I'd choose Triss's one

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 10:55 AM
um ok, i made the three trophies as the reward for 1st 2nd and 3rd place winners in this story competition

jomblox

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 10:57 AM
um ok, i made the three trophies as the reward for 1st 2nd and 3rd place winners in this story competition

jomblox
nvm i was just trying :D

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 11:00 AM
yep and ye tried your best, THAT'S WHAT COUNTS

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:01 AM
Oh you u activated mah feelings jk

its more like a wedding cake XD

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 11:04 AM
HOW DARE YOU INSULT MY TROPHIES, TEARS NOW FALL FROM WHAT IT SUPPOSED TO BE THE NUMBER STATING WHAT PLACE THEY ARE FOR :mad:

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:06 AM
HOW DARE YOU INSULT MY TROPHIES, TEARS NOW FALL FROM WHAT IT SUPPOSED TO BE THE NUMBER STATING WHAT PLACE THEY ARE FOR :mad:

I was talking bout my throphy u dumbass (LOLjk)

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 11:08 AM
and i was joking about you *insulting* my trophies

i mean seriously why would i give anymore about my trophies than what they are already given, almost nothing but being called a reward

trophies: :'(

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:10 AM
and i was joking about you *insulting* my trophies

:D Joking around, spitting seeds on the ground! LOL these cleaners will clean our seeds

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 11:12 AM
How about winner gets to train with WyzDM? :D I'll have to ask him about that if you guys agree...

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:13 AM
How about winner gets to train with WyzDM? :D I'll have to ask him about that if you guys agree...
:O good idea

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 11:14 AM
btw i have a question that should be answered only in private message

what in gerds name is RHG, those two stick figures you have in the spoilers, you say they aren't for stick empires and they are for RHG, what is RHG

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:17 AM
btw i have a question that should be answered only in private message

what in gerds name is RHG, those two stick figures you have in the spoilers, you say they aren't for stick empires and they are for RHG, what is RHG

Challenge completed

_Ai_
02-02-2013, 11:22 AM
btw i have a question that should be answered only in private message

what in gerds name is RHG, those two stick figures you have in the spoilers, you say they aren't for stick empires and they are for RHG, what is RHG

I will not PM, too much work
Instead, read this :
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?47843-How-To-Make-a-Decent-RHG

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 11:23 AM
Hmm, I suck at animating, probably going to make a wRHG someday.

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 11:23 AM
ok btw can we please keep the trophies, i love the idea for WDZMAVLJAWKJEJANBIFDHA9OJSOJVONFIBAHEFBHIOQRU89-BHQUT78934HG9, but i spent a while making those trophies also it would give the person proof he/she won the tournament

combine them?

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:24 AM
Hmm, I suck at animating, probably going to make a wRHG someday.

Just try - u probably dont have Flash 8

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 11:24 AM
What's with that part that is nonsense?No I don't jombloxx :p

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:25 AM
What's with that part that is nonsense?No I don't jombloxx :p

Wut i quoted u and a sentence appared no really

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 11:27 AM
so you need animating skills in order to be in RHG am i correct

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 11:27 AM
SUREEEE. AlSo, this thread has 100 replies! :D but it's mostly useless stuff :/

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:28 AM
so you need animating skills in order to be in RHG am i correct
Yup and...

SUREEEE. AlSo, this thread has 100 replies! :D but it's mostly useless stuff :/
Yup

wanna make it 1000

Luzoto
02-02-2013, 11:40 AM
so you need animating skills in order to be in RHG am i correct

You've been asking quite a number of questions, but in the wrong place. Make sure you've looked at the general rules and the rules for RHG, and you won't need to ask these questions. I don't think any of them really answer what RHG really is, though, so I'll give you the answer here anyways and hopefully you'll be happy with it.

RHG (Rock Hard Gladiator) is a system created to get animators to improve, show their skills, and have fun by creating a character who fights with other characters through animations. Sometimes, RHG might refer to the general system, or it could refer to someone's character. If you want to enter, you'll need an animation program like Flash 8, CS5, Pivot, or Easytoon (which are the most common, but NOT REQUIRED ones. You just need to be able to animate). Then, go to the RHG character page and read the rules CAREFULLY! If you don't follow them when making your character, your thread will be trashed. If you want to try fighting someone else, challenge them and set a due date/other rules you may want through Private Message. Make your fight animation, and then one of you will post both animations along with a public poll, to see who is the better animator. This paragraph is the bare basics of it all, so take a look at other examples in the RHG sub-forum, and good luck.

Oh, and this competition's reward is only enough to catch the attention of writers/Stick Empires fans. If you want more writers, you're going to need something a little better.

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 11:43 AM
You've been asking quite a number of questions, but in the wrong place. Make sure you've looked at the general rules and the rules for RHG, and you won't need to ask these questions. I don't think any of them really answer what RHG really is, though, so I'll give you the answer here anyways and hopefully you'll be happy with it.

RHG (Rock Hard Gladiator) is a system created to get animators to improve, show their skills, and have fun by creating a character who fights with other characters through animations. Sometimes, RHG might refer to the general system, or it could refer to someone's character. If you want to enter, you'll need an animation program like Flash 8, CS5, Pivot, or Easytoon (which are the most common, but NOT REQUIRED ones. You just need to be able to animate). Then, go to the RHG character page and read the rules CAREFULLY! If you don't follow them when making your character, your thread will be trashed. If you want to try fighting someone else, challenge them and set a due date/other rules you may want through Private Message. Make your fight animation, and then one of you will post both animations along with a public poll, to see who is the better animator. This paragraph is the bare basics of it all, so take a look at other examples in the RHG sub-forum, and good luck.

Oh, and this competition's reward is only enough to catch the attention of writers/Stick Empires fans. If you want more writers, you're going to need something a little better.

This is for stick empires fans... I mean, people who don't play SE wouldn't know the campaign story, right? Unless they played the campaign. Still, I can't think of any good reward, any suggestions?

Note: the only reason there are RHGs is thanks to stone (creator of FluidAnims)

Jombloxx
02-02-2013, 11:44 AM
This is for stick empires fans... I mean, people who don't play SE wouldn't know the campaign story, right? Unless they played the campaign. Still, I can't think of any good reward, any suggestions?

Note: the only reason there are RHGs is thanks to stone (creator of FluidAnims)

Wow u know bout stone but not about xiao xiao

_Ai_
02-02-2013, 11:47 AM
Wow u know bout stone but not about xiao xiao

I think with the xiao xiao he was joking.

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 11:48 AM
Yes, because I have never heard of FluidAnims until a while after joining SP Forums. That answer made no sense. Anyways, I'm new to sp and FA, but i've asked a friend (who was on FA) about FA.

_Ai_
02-02-2013, 11:49 AM
Yes, because I have never heard of FluidAnims until a while after joining SP Forums. That answer made no sense. Anyways, I'm new to sp and FA, but i've asked a friend (who was on FA) about FA.

Sure you are new, your post is only 1200+

Luzoto
02-02-2013, 11:51 AM
This is for stick empires fans... I mean, people who don't play SE wouldn't know the campaign story, right? Unless they played the campaign. Still, I can't think of any good reward, any suggestions?

Note: the only reason there are RHGs is thanks to stone (creator of FluidAnims)

Yes, I'm aware stone created the original RHG system on FluidAnims, I just didn't think it was important to add.

As for a reward...a lot of Stick Empires fans would rather be joining a competition about playing the game than a competition about writing a story on it. That takes out a LOT of Stick Empires players (how many people total have posted here?), so your audience is going to have to be writers, like the guys from wRHG. I'm sure a lot of people here have played the first or second one at least once, considering they're the most popular games on Stickpage.

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 12:04 PM
Hmmm, true. But I can't think of a good reward T.T
(aiman my join date was oct 2012...)

_Ai_
02-02-2013, 12:07 PM
Hmmm, true. But I can't think of a good reward T.T
(aiman my join date was oct 2012...)

I do not know of that, but with that number of posts, you shouldn't be called new.

ShadowyWhisper
02-02-2013, 12:20 PM
I joined Jan 2012!

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 12:31 PM
I do not know of that, but with that number of posts, you shouldn't be called new.

Tec says most of my posts are useless ones :p

Giz
02-02-2013, 02:07 PM
OK. i held a vote to see if i should remake my story, and so far DragonFrost says yes. So here you all go, my new, IMPROVED Story

Here it is, my extremely thought out, extremely long story (Be prepared to see some lag on your computer lol)

INTRO: 5000 years into the future, the land that once was called The United States was the most powerful body of land ever. The land shifted, and this caused Canada to become too cold to be habitable. The US Started to test nuclear substances there due to the low population. But something went terribly wrong. The genetic material and animals that were left in Canada became mutated. Cats turned into bizarre, 4 legged beasts (Crawlers), dead skeletons turned to life, (Marrowkai) and Bodies started to come to life again (Deads). A human corpses even combined with a pack of snakes to form a horrible, powerful monster (Medusa). The US declared war with these monsters, but they were too powerful. The us was wiped out, except some natives. These natives were left only to the most basic types of weapons due to the modern weapons being extinct. These weapons included Bows and arrows (archidons), Swords (Swordwrath), etc. They declared that they would not ever mention the realm that is now called CHAOS to their kids, to protect them from going there. So they reproduced, and 100 years passed, and the last person that new of the Chaos realm died. Now no one knows of Chaos. And they created a way to divide the land that they had. This.........is..........the start of our story (HA! You thought i was going to say Sparta, were you?)

QUEEN MEDUSA AND THE DOWNFALL OF THE CHAOS ARMY

"Hmph. That stupid order army is at it again." Mesusa spoke. "Wont they ever learn that they will never reunite their allies?" One juggernuat said next to her. "They are rather stupid" The other juggernkight announced.
"Oh brother, please come." Medusa yelled. "I am here" The marrokai said. The marrowkai is the 2nd in command in the chaos army, and is Medusas brother. "Please do a census on our army."
"Yes, my lady"
".............................we have around 2,000,000 crawlers, 30,000,000 deads, 500,000 marrowkai's, 1,000,000 juggerknights, around 10,000,000 bombers, 50,000 eclipsors, and......2,999,999 giants?
"2,999,999 giants? Wheres the 3,000,000th?" Medusa asked.
"I dont know." He replied
"Well your suppost to."
"well im just 2nd in command. Keeping track of the population is your responsibility, my lady"
"Dont talk to me like that, LITTLE BROTHER" Medusa yelled.
Medusa quickly went up to her tower. She shoved her castle deads to the side and looked down to the miners. "HEY! ROTTEN MINERS! HAVE YOU SEEN ONE GIANT PASS OVER HERE?!" She yelled. "Uummummumm......n-n---..no....my queen. He must've go---g....gone to another exit." One said.
"Another exit? THEIRS ONE EXIT YOU STUPID IDIOT!!!! HOW DO YOU NOT NOTICE A HUGE 500 FOOT MONSTER!!!!!!" She yelled. She then vomited a toxic waste at her worthless miners. Screams of pain flooded the land.
"Wait....Their he is.....WHAT IS HE DOING!!!!" She yelled. Orders army had beaten Medusa to her giant, 10 swordwrath, 2 ninjas, 5 speartons, and a magikil were ambushing it.
The hopeless giant, too stupid to retreat or to call for back up, thrashed around and tried to kill as many as possible. Order overwhelmed, and enslaved the giant. "Whats that over their?" One said. They approached chaos's castle. "H.....He....Help....us......"One prisoner begged. "P....pl...plea...please....i....have....kids....."
Wh--What is this....this terrible place?"
"Looks like my moms house after thanksgiving" One spearon laughed.
"YOU FOOLS THOUGHT INAMORTA BELONGED TO YOU? WEVE BEEN HERE ALL ALONG, BIDING OUR TIME, GROWING WITH POWER AS YOUR ARMIES DESTROY THEMSELVES OVER LAND THAT ACTUALLY BELONGS TO ME. BUT NOW YOUVE INSLAVED MY BABIES AND I WILL WAIT NO LONGER. NOW, YOU WILL FEEL THE WRATH, OF THE CHAOS EMPIRES AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Medusa announced
The next days were filled with disaster, screaming, and fear. Order barely held their own on the rebels. (Who are now on Orders side) "People. People. Please calm down. I know we are dealing with such an immense, such a terrifying army. But we must Fight! Our numbers might be less, our abilities might be inferior, and...in general....we might suck compared to chaos, but were not going to surrender, we are going to fight, were going to win, we are going free the land and extinguish Chaos, ONCE AND FOR ALL!!!" One spearton Announced. "YES WE ARE!!!!" The army replied back.
Gore. violence. And a crap ton of blood. This is what the next days were filled with. But order prospered. They even defeated the marrowkais, juggerknights, and the bombers. They then saw the chaos capital in sight. The Castle seemed like it was covered in blood. They broke the the gates, and prepared for the final, epic, battle.

And this is where the story gets good, and also gory. So if your eating, i suggest stopping or else your going to see your food all over your computer when your done.

Here it goes.

"THIS IS WAR!" One blood covered spearton yelled. "ATTACK!!!"
The archidons shot endless seas of arrows. They quickly shot through the opponents Chest. Dead corpses were everywhere. One swordwrath was brutally beaten. He charged into battle, and accidentally SWALLOWED a body part that a dead threw at him. Down he fell, vomiting, bloodshot, and suffering from infection. One juggerknight, without thinking, threw his ax into the swordwraths leg. He pulled it out, and blood splattered everywhere. He was dead, of course, but the juggerknight still wasnt done. He, being crazy and insane, bit of part of the flesh of the swordwrath and threw it into the air. It landed onto a meric, which pretty much died from suffocation and heart failure after witnessing what happened.
Order finally took the upper hand. They destroyed the last unit and charged on to the heart of the castle, where medusa was waiting for them. "I see i underestimated you. But that wont happen again. I WONT LET IT!!!!" She yelled. "YOU MUST ALL DIE!!!!! Medusa screamed. She quickly whipped back her hair, and a huge shock wave of darkness filled the air. Anyone who touched it, turned to stone. Screams filled the air. Some desperate people surrendered and offered to join and rebuild her army, but she, having no pity or mercy left in her, rejected them. Their, laid on the battlefield, was a series of statues. "HA! I just turned my battle field into a life sized game of Chess!" She laughed. And looks like i won."
"OH no you didnt!" one survivor yelled.
"WHAT?! WHERE DID YOU COME FROM?!?!"
"I was hiding in our castle. NOW ITS TIME TO FINISH YOU OFF!!!"
4 spears, a magikil, and a giant, and some merics charged at medusa. The 4 speartons Pierced her skin and shoved their spears into her stomach, And bashed the crap out of her legs with their Shields. The giant threw huge boulders, breaking her bones while the magikil blows and burns off Medusa's bloody flesh with his Blast and Electric wall spells, and the merics heal and cure the wounded warriors so that medusa couldnt even lay a scratch. Medusa, beaten, tortured, toyed with, and on the verge of destruction, let out one large scream before she disintegrated into the air. "OOOORRRRDDDEERRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!" She yelled. She quickly disintegrated into the air.

Order had won

The end.


This took me 30 minutes to type, but about 2 days to make up. I hope this will be worthy of a 3rd or second or 1st place.

FailingAtFailing
02-02-2013, 05:29 PM
A new story by ME!!!!

Prisoner
How long have I been here? Where have they taken me? I can’t see. I can only feel hunger and thirst. When was the last time food or drink was in my mouth? I am hanging from my hands. I have shackles on my feet. Did they take my clothes? These feel like burlap.

Ugh, I have to get my mind straight. I’m starting from the beginning.

I was mining for Order. It was a nice job. The location was dangerous though. I was mining in No Man’s Land. Although, I did choose to mine there. There was vast riches such as gold, silver, gems and underground ruins. I got paid twenty times what the average miner was paid. It helped how I barely had to share any of these riches. The only other people working there were two middle-aged men I barely knew. They smelt of alcohol and looked like they were drunk half the time. The supervisor was a Magikill that slept through half the day. I can’t blame him, he must be at least a hundred years old. His sleeping also let me smuggle some rough rubies or sapphires out of the mine.

Back home, I was living the good life. In my off time I bought and drank some excellent wines. I wore fancy clothes that made other miners, and even soldiers jealous. I had my own little palace. I had my own master bedroom with a king-sized bed and a rug that took up half the room. The kitchen was filled with spices and herbs that were the best ever.

One day, when I left work, I think I took a wrong turn. There was a skeleton under a dead tree. I’ve never seen skeletons, let alone bodies around the mine. I went near it.

It jumped up and cast some kind of spell on me. I started to walk towards it faster and I couldn’t remember anything after that. I then found myself here for the first time.

Ah yes, now I know what happened. It was a Marrowkai. I have heard of them. They are spell casters for Chaos. I heard about them. About a day before I saw that skeleton, I heard the Magikill mumbling about how Order hasn’t sent any more guards here and how Chaos was going to attack any second since we enslaved a giant and taught it to throw rocks.

The guard was a Juggerknight. The tales I heard about their cruelty are true. He only gave us food because some Marrowkai wanted us alive. Even then, he only gave us crumbs. He dropped them all over our faces, we had to lick them off our faces with our tongues. Every other day he would drip water on our foreheads, and it would trickle down our faces. It was the only water we got.

I don’t know how long I have been here. I had a diamond in my pants pocket. They took off my pants and I think I am wearing burlap. But I can’t see that well. There is dust floating in the darkness and the only light is from the doorway at the other end of the hall. Why am I the farthest from the door?

Wait, I hear bones rattling. It’s the Marrowkai. He’s approaching my cell. The Juggerknight is taking me off the wall! But, where are they taking me? Wait, what’s he doing with his axe? Wait, he’s going to hit me with it!



Where am I now? Am I dead? No wait, this is outside. I can see the sun! All my bindings are gone! I’m free. I can see Order over there. I have some strange staffs in my hands though. They’re about the length of my forearm. Wait, there’s some Chaos soldiers running past me. Am I a ghost then? Or am I in a dream?

I hit myself in the arm with one of the staffs. It hurt, so this is real-life! Why are Chaos soldiers ignoring me though? They must have something else they need to do. It looks like Order is going through Chaos lands.

Well, that must mean Order is putting a stop to Chaos. I must not be a high priority since I am a single person. I must help Order with these staffs or my fists.

I ran towards the swordwrath. They had just finished killing a Juggerknight. They saw me and I saw them. I was smiling for the first time in a long time. I could go home. I could escape! The swordwrath have a look of terror on their faces. Why are they running from me? I ran faster, determined to catch up.

Then, as I was about two or three paces away from them, I heard a hissing. I looked at the staffs. They weren’t staffs.

They were dynamite sticks.


This is also now on the first page with Conversion.

kingkickass2013
02-02-2013, 05:39 PM
i looked at your story thinking "GOD DAMNIT PRISONER JUST THROW THE STICKS OF DYNAMITE AT THE ENEMIES AND RUN!"

Triss
02-02-2013, 05:44 PM
Damn, GamerXD8 stole my hero :mad:
After all I have done for him!

P.S.:
Giz, good story, bad layout.
Failing, bad story, good layout.

FailingAtFailing
02-02-2013, 05:55 PM
i looked at your story thinking "GOD DAMNIT PRISONER JUST THROW THE STICKS OF DYNAMITE AT THE ENEMIES AND RUN!"

I wonder why bombers in-game don't do that. Then again, in my story, maybe the person didn't realize it until they were 2 steps away from the people. Maybe too late to throw the sticks? In fact, what they did after they realized it was dynamite is not shown. Open ending (but not really that open)

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 06:36 PM
WHAT DA FUQ where is my list of competitors?

Triss
02-02-2013, 07:00 PM
Tec combined it with my poll.
Check it yourself.
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50789-Favourite-Story

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 08:08 PM
T.T random combination lol

Triss
02-02-2013, 08:20 PM
Errr.... what is random combination?

Panki
02-02-2013, 08:27 PM
Couldn't finish the story today because my dad was visiting an old friend and I had to go. And probably tomorrow too because of the super bowl.

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 08:32 PM
Errr.... what is random combination?

The list of competitors and your poll..

Triss
02-02-2013, 08:36 PM
The list of competitors and your poll..
But that's actually pretty good you know.
People can read the stories in one time, and select their favourite just in one post.

ShadowyWhisper
02-02-2013, 08:39 PM
Who here even watches the SuperBowl. I have never watched more than 3 minutes of it before I got bored to hell. That's where I'm headed anyways, due to the number of lies and pain and sadness and... well you get the idea.

Anyways, on topic. My story will be finished by March 7th. It will involve Greek Myths because Medusa is a Greek legend. And maybe a legendary Warrior Spearton will cut off her head and use her Stone gaze to...

I'm giving too much away. NO STEALING IDEAS HERE.

Frost, make a copyright law here or whatever. Add that in the rules.

DragonFrost
02-02-2013, 08:44 PM
plagiarism? I already have a similar rule. Try not to copy someone else.

Panki
02-02-2013, 08:46 PM
Who here even watches the SuperBowl. I have never watched more than 3 minutes of it before I got bored to hell. That's where I'm headed anyways, due to the number of lies and pain and sadness and... well you get the idea.

Anyways, on topic. My story will be finished by March 7th. It will involve Greek Myths because Medusa is a Greek legend. And maybe a legendary Warrior Spearton will cut off her head and use her Stone gaze to...

I'm giving too much away. NO STEALING IDEAS HERE.

Frost, make a copyright law here or whatever. Add that in the rules.
I didn't really say I watched it. My dad takes me to one of his friends house and insists in me to watch it with hum, but unfortunately we dint have the same tastes in what to do with free time. In fact, once I'm there, I just take our my kindle and start playing Fruit ninja. That's how bored I get. Probably the only reason I agree to go with him us because if the commercials.Anyways, I expect my story to be completed in a month.

Triss
02-02-2013, 10:52 PM
I didn't really say I watched it. My dad takes me to one of his friends house and insists in me to watch it with hum, but unfortunately we dint have the same tastes in what to do with free time. In fact, once I'm there, I just take our my kindle and start playing Fruit ninja. That's how bored I get. Probably the only reason I agree to go with him us because if the commercials.Anyways, I expect my story to be completed in a month.
A month???
I hope it's better worth the time.

Panki
02-02-2013, 11:12 PM
Only because I'm probably the busiest person in my school. First violin lessons, then piano, then youth at church, etc etc.

Bladed Fire
02-02-2013, 11:16 PM
Only because I'm probably the busiest person in my school. First violin lessons, then piano, then youth at church, etc etc.

Wow, you're a busy guy, I'm only busy in weekdays and holidays.

stickman311
02-03-2013, 12:25 AM
Too bad

Triss
02-03-2013, 04:33 AM
Who here even watches the SuperBowl. I have never watched more than 3 minutes of it before I got bored to hell. That's where I'm headed anyways, due to the number of lies and pain and sadness and... well you get the idea.

Anyways, on topic. My story will be finished by March 7th. It will involve Greek Myths because Medusa is a Greek legend. And maybe a legendary Warrior Spearton will cut off her head and use her Stone gaze to...

I'm giving too much away. NO STEALING IDEAS HERE.

Frost, make a copyright law here or whatever. Add that in the rules.
That looks a lot like my legendary warrior, Seartan.

Jombloxx
02-03-2013, 04:35 AM
That looks a lot like my legendary warrior, Seartan.

:O ppl love ur stuff

Triss
02-03-2013, 04:42 AM
Well currently I'm working on my RHG, probably finished in a month.
The RHG will be Seartan's grandson.
I will not tell you the name, and if someone took my idea, I'm going to sue his ass until it turned to a bloody corpse.

WheresMyCheetos
02-03-2013, 08:09 PM
Frost Im going to post a storie just gimmer time
I have the general idea but imma post tommorrow cause im tired and need to fiinish up some last minute details

DragonFrost
02-03-2013, 08:28 PM
No problem, the deadline is April 1st :D lots of time.
P.s. Wyzdm is going to write a story :D

FailingAtFailing
02-03-2013, 08:29 PM
Hey Frost, why don't you put the competitor list in the OP so that people can find other peoples' stories.

DragonFrost
02-03-2013, 08:31 PM
Mms, good idea. I'll go copy it.

Luzoto
02-03-2013, 08:40 PM
No problem, the deadline is April 1st :D lots of time.
P.s. Wyzdm is going to write a story :D

Wait, the due date is April first...

WHAT IF THERE WAS NO PRIZE. IT'S ALL AN APRIL FOOLS.

DragonFrost
02-03-2013, 08:44 PM
Ikri mentioned that in the deadline XD but... I don't know what's a good reward...

WheresMyCheetos
02-04-2013, 06:14 PM
My storie will be delayed cause it didn't save my draft

DragonFrost
02-04-2013, 06:53 PM
T.T guys make sure to save you stories first >.>

WheresMyCheetos
02-04-2013, 07:12 PM
Frost wait im posting my stoire now so do leave yet XD

DragonFrost
02-04-2013, 07:14 PM
Well I can just add it tomorrow :3

WheresMyCheetos
02-04-2013, 07:39 PM
finsihed a part of it but SP wont let me post it imma try again

I am Trent, leader of the speartons and today I will tell you how we took back immorta (idk how to write) from the evil whitch Medusa!!!!!!!!!
Part 1
I sense a dark rising said a magikill on the way to his merics class. When he entered his pupil Medusa (yep gthats right)
asked if she could learn offensive magic like the magikill. NOOO!!!! Said the magkill in a stern steady voice. Do not ask me again. After hereing this the merics gave up all except medusa she stole a sacred book of dark magic from the libary. She then practiĉed for months wating for the chance to oppose the magikill and create there own race of magic wielders.
But the week before her uprising a magikill caught her. Oh hey teacher I was just returning this to the magi..................... it was too late the magikill burned the book with his blast spell and banned Medusa from entering the magikills territory. Medusa was so angry that she raged off like a swordwrath. She ran into the dark forest not knowing of that. he bumped in the Marrowkai leader of chaos. Why hello meric is there a problem? MONSTER STAY AWAY FROM ME!!!!! yelled Medusa using a dark absorbing spell on the Marrowkai. The marrowkai turned into stone and the meric absorbing alot of power went into transformation. Snakes grew out of here hair and she turned evil a great meric turned into stone. She then went killing her way to the chaos empire. This is where ill makemy stand and then no magikill will ever be able to oppose me. She entered the castle where it was lunch time. Perfect all in one room. I am Medusa your new leader, showing the Chief Marrowkais head to them all to see. They were stunned. Chaos was a nice empire. The chief Marrowkai simply wanted every monster to live in harmony with humans. So he let any creature join. He was nice unlike medusa. I was a Juggerknigh then commander of a squad. A jugger opposed her and said Your not our leader so get out or die raising his axe. Fool! yelled medusa turning him to stone. Now all bow down to your new ruler Medusa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 2
At midnight me and my men left the castle trying to get word of the new threat to the magikill, but we were spoted by another group of juggers on potrol. Hey chief Your early for your shift, or are you doing something stupid again. It went silent. Attack yelled the patrol of juggers. my men startled fell back. He quickly charged out and escaped. But we lozst 4 good men. Hunt, animal, four , food (LOL those r the 4 names). When we reached the magikill we were exausted. We told the magikill about the info and they dicided to...................

To be continued

DragonFrost
02-04-2013, 07:42 PM
Not bad, except at the start it says SPEARTON leader, but at the end it says JUGGERKNIGHT.

ShadowyWhisper
02-04-2013, 07:42 PM
Good story, bad grammar, perhaps don't make simple sentences and better vocab. But overall pretty good.

WheresMyCheetos
02-04-2013, 07:43 PM
Yemme finsih its explains it all in next part

WheresMyCheetos
02-04-2013, 07:44 PM
Good story, bad grammar, perhaps don't make simple sentences and better vocab. But overall pretty good.

oops forgot to excues my bad grammar

Luzoto
02-04-2013, 09:14 PM
I'll add a single chapter to my story whenever I get bored. Someone remember this page number.


Hundreds of years had passed since the Liberation, or, as the insurgents would wish to refer to it as, the Invasion. Many still remember the day when the trumpets hailed the king of the empire as he marched his way along with the Commander of Military Decrees back to the hearth of the Liberation, the land where the Order had first begun its days. Millions of his supporters and troops followed in his wake, and the day of victory was marked as an honored holiday, where people would feast and compete in violent sports that re-enacted the turning points of the war. After just two years of magical research by the magikill, it was possible to tame giants using an expensive set of massive chains that would brainwash its wearer. Giants had become an integral part of the Orderanian's lifestyle since then; they worked the fields, served as transportation, and ensured that a revolution would never happen. All was well and perfect...

Or so the history books have told.

Tales speak only of the heroism of the leaders of Order, yet there is a suspicious level of praise within them. Were failures ever mentioned? Moments of corruption, or a conspiracy, perhaps? Why should the Orderanians be concerned anyhow? They were quite content with their lifestyle, so much that not even the wisdom of the Magikill would question their history.

What really happened is still a mystery, even to the rebels, who have hidden themselves away. Their own past experiences, however, contradict greatly against what the Council of Order has told their people. Why does no one remember the animals that populated the world? The Order warriors did not simply walk around the entire continent; many of us remember the ferocious 'crawlers', humanoid mounts who could have easily ripped a man's head off in seconds. They attacked in huge swarms, yet they all suddenly disappeared once the Liberation was complete. Only rare sightings have occurred here and there, but if they prove to be true, then the Crawlers have devolved into a much smaller state. And what of the Magikill's spawns? Summoning magic was also forbidden with the end of the Liberation, but such spawns were inaccurately described as 'little devils', when really, they arose from the unburied remains of fallen soldiers to take revenge upon the living. Eclipsors were all but gone; the gentle 'winged beasts' have actually been in Orderanian history, but they also vanished soon after the Liberation, due to humans using them for archery practice.

Only a few rebels survived the Invasion. They hid within the caves of the land, and a shoddy truce was all that kept them from leaping at each other's throats. Despite the terrible disadvantage they had now against the Order Empire, they continued to populate until every speck of land that was once uninhabited was now otherwise. Not only that, but they had dropped their differences and began to benefit from each other's successes. The shadowrath are an interesting example of this; they originated from a few wise swordswrath who studied the art of magic and the fighting style of speartons to create a soldier who would be able to learn the weak points of his enemies in seconds, improving in the midst of battle.

A secret that no one could have anticipated, however, was the corruption of the animals. The reason for their disappearance was an indirect cause of the death of the King Giant, who was sealed away in a statue because of an abnormal soul that grew within him. After his death, the soul escaped to the outside world, taking the life of an Orderanian to gain the physical form of Medusa. This spirit was not evil at first. It simply wished to take vengeance for the horrible things it witnessed: the hunting of Eclipsors, the enslavement of giants, and the greedy Order Empire. Witnessing these acts began to corrupt it until it used its inherent powers to call the remaining races that were abused by humans. Crawlers were trained to be stealthy, Deads were smart enough to throw their guts, Eclipsors practiced with the bow, and the Giants captured many Orderanians to be used as slaves (in the form of miners, suicide bombers, or a second weapon). Through this training did Medusa find that undead Magikill were different from other deads, in that they could learn magic at the cost of much of their body.

When the rebels finally began the Revolution, it was the perfect time for Medusa and her army to take what had been taken from them. The name of Chaos comes from the fact that their assault in the Chaos of the Revolution nearly doomed the Order Empire, reminding them of what would become if they continued their ways. This also explains why the insurgents formed an alliance with the Empire after Medusa revealed herself.



"Your honor, the preparations are nearly complete. It would be best for you to lead the parade now."
"Thank you, servant. You may join the crowd once you send the message that everyone is to have the rest of the day off."
Not a single face in the world beamed more than that of the laborer as he excitedly rushed out of the gigantic tent as the bearer of great news. The king couldn't help but sigh with relief. The years of turmoil between Order and the Four Kingdoms have finally ended, and the massive feast that was to begin today was the final resting point of the war, starting with the public executions of all four rebel leaders.
"Men, prepare the march! Arm those fireworks and ready your trumpets! Today, we make HISTORY."
The flaps of the tent were set ablaze by two torchbearers, and light flooded into the structure. Why settle for anything less than the most dramatic of entrances?
"And so, from this day forth, Order shall reign with a fist of justice and a flag of peace! ONWARDS, MEN!"
Despite the blinding sunlight, thousands of the best veterans of the war followed the king as their presence split a path in the colossal crowd waiting outside. The children couldn't help but squeal at their fathers, who remained dignified with each perfectly timed step. One could not help but feel a sense of pride in their all-powerful ruler...

"Damn them."
Lysander the Spearton banged his fist against the cold, unforgiving cell wall. Beside him sat Thybault the Swordswrath, and in the opposite cell, Ford the archidon and Epicurus the Magikill. All were stripped of their weapons and their power, left to rot in their makeshift prison cells until their ceremonial purification.
"A.K.A. our beheadings..."
"What the hell is wrong with these guys?! Oh, sure, just hand over your technology and way of life OR WE'LL SLAUGHTER ALL OF YOUR CITIZENS!" Lysander bellowed in rage.
Ford replied in a war-wearied voice, "Calm down, tough guy. I thought your kind were not afraid of death?"
"I WOULD RATHER DIE IN BATTLE THAN BY AN UNJUST AXE!!!"
"Will you shut up?" It was Thybault's turn to react. "We were the idiots who kept on thinking our way was the only way, we were bound to lose without the support of our people."
"WHO ARE YOU TO TALK?!"
"Me? Oh, I'm just the guy who could instantly convince twenty people to join my army in seconds without having to pay a fortune."
"Your nation lost to a bunch of morons wielding CLUBS."
"Hey, YOUR nation lost to ONE guy with a club."
Silence pervaded the two cells as fireworks interrupted their little conversation. A series of trumpets blared out traditional songs, and servants could be heard dashing to and fro outside of their stone cold prisons. A guard walked up to the space in-between both cells before stating,
"Your day of judgement has come. Come quietly and we won't have to make this painful. At least, not too painful."

Epicurus was now standing in the front of a line of chained people who were all soon to be martyrs. The collective crowd on the platform below theirs boo'ed and threw pebbles and sticks at the four. Even amidst the noise of ten thousand people, everyone could hear Lysander growling in anger. It was the first time any of these four commanders had seen the face of that despicable statue that represented their falls.
"People of Order! Today is a festive day for celebrating the end of the struggle for our namesake! Yet, it shall also be the day that the gavel of justice will fall. These four sickening dictators shall pay for the torture of their people and ours with their lives!"
The crowd couldn't help but fall into an uproar of bloodthirsty cheering.
"The first to be punished here shall be Epicurus, leader of the violent and unpredictable Magikill! May the end of his days compensate for his crime!"
The old man was pushed onto the stand by a lance, and he tilted his head to glimpse his executioner; a cloaked, hulking man with a sword stolen from Thybault's designs. It was surprising to hear such a gentle voice from him speak,
"Sorry, but the law is the law. I'm surprised a geezer like you could stand up to such terrible stress..."
Epicurus remained silent.
"Well, say your last prayers fast. These people won't be happy if I take my time..."
A strange gleam shone on the wizard's eyes, but the executioner took no heed to it. He raised his sword, now oblivious to the screams in the crowd; he tried his hardest to focus on happier days, when he wasn't a Spearton slave to the Order.
He raised his sword high up, and closed his eyes...
...and was pulled into the air by one of an army of giants.

Another flash of light blasted from the magikill's eyes in the chaos that ensued, and all four leaders were suddenly freed of their binding chains. Epicurus doesn't remember too much from then on; at one point did Lysander grab a fallen spear and stab his way out of the crowd, while Ford tried to get away, only to be swept by a giant's club. Thybault was nowhere to be found, and the mage does not even remember how he escaped. All he knows is that not a single Orderanian remembers this daring escape, and that he would have to find a younger magikill to pass his wisdom onto quickly, before his time came...



"A giant has no feelings. They are the representation of monsters, beasts capable of death and destruction with no civilization. For years, the collective human race has regarded them as the bane of society: they kidnap our families, rip apart our land, and give no thought to stealing our weapons. For years, we have driven them back to the brink of extinction, and struck down fifty for every casualty they have given us. For YEARS have we remained sworn enemies, ready to leap at each other's throats."

"Today, this will all change."

The locked-up giant had the ability to comprehend this hurtful speech, but it had no voice of its own. A young, beaming Orderanian Magikill continued to rant about the power of the chains that now held him down in front of a massive crowd of warriors and officials. They would never realize the horrors that brought about their race, the tragic tale passed down from generation to generation through a mental communication that seemed to open for all manner of living things except humans. Two souls abused by a Magikill, whom had possessed their once-human leaders and repopulated into an entirely new, half-human, half-beast population of peace. The humans, frightened by these 'monstrosities', struck them down one by one in packs, and the Queen had fallen to one of these very packs. In its anger, the soul that possessed the King grew violent, and his barbarism spread to the rest of the giant race like a virus.

"And now, I present to you twenty years worth of magic research! Denmius, activate the chains."

Suddenly, the nameless titan fell to the ground, shrieking in pain. Dozens of royals stepped back to avoid the rest of its nightmarish suffering. The shock from his chains continued for a few seconds, and the beast no longer felt his body.

"With these massive shackles, I can now entirely control the giant with just the snap of my thoughts. Not only that, but a little magic and money investment allows your new slave to grow in size, until no one dares to attempt to invade your home! They may come at a costly price, but you'll never have to defend yourself or work the fields again!"

...and such were the last words the giant heard before it lost consciousness.

Panki
02-04-2013, 10:37 PM
Finished Part 1 but nothing big really happens in it. It's like an introduction to how the characters interact.

Triss
02-05-2013, 06:17 AM
Frost, I have put all my stories in one thread!
It's here:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?51015-The-Legendary-Warrior-Seartan-Trilogy

DragonFrost
02-05-2013, 07:12 AM
Yep, added. I'll add luzoto now.

Giz
02-06-2013, 02:30 PM
well its kinda obvious that Triss is gunna win...

Tecness2
02-06-2013, 02:33 PM
well its kinda obvious that Triss is gunna win...
I don't know....I can write a mean story.

DragonFrost
02-06-2013, 02:55 PM
You don't seem like an author type ^^

Luzoto
02-06-2013, 03:00 PM
well its kinda obvious that Triss is gunna win...

W-What about me? D:

That Other Guy
02-06-2013, 06:22 PM
So, I'm bored a lot, and I find I read the stories on the forums to ease my boredom. I thought, why not make stories for Stick Empires? So here is the FIRST EVER Stick Empires Story Competition! Basically, write a story about stick empires (I'll think of a subject), and post it in this thread. I suppose I'll make another thread with all of the stories' titles and make a poll after the competition is done.

RULES
1. Must have sexy grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.
2. Must be related to the SPONGEBOB.
3. Must be posted before the deadline (posts after the deadline don't count).
4. Must be at most 20 words (I want to see a sentence as a story :D and even so, 20 words is hard, SO TRY TO WRITE LESS THAN THAT).
5. You may have more than 1 story entry.
6. Try to copy someone else.

http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=866272&viewfull=1#post866272
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Triss (5+info):
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?51015-The-Legendary-Warrior-Seartan-Trilogy
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FailingAtFailing (2):
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=865809&viewfull=1#post865809
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Aiman:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50638-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition-The-Story-Of-Order
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Kingkickass2012:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=866583&viewfull=1#post866583
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GizmoGamer2012:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=870722&viewfull=1#post870722
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WheresmyCheetos:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=873319&viewfull=1#post873319
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Luzoto:
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?50471-Stick-Empires-Story-Competition!&p=873404&viewfull=1#post873404[/spoiler]
I'm excited to see your great stories! Good luck everyone! I'll write a story too. :D

It's called the ugly barnacle. Once there was an ugly barnacle, he was so ugly that everyone died.

The End

_Ai_
02-07-2013, 01:29 AM
W-What about me? D:

Uh...Maybe?

That Other Guy
02-07-2013, 05:50 PM
It's called the ugly barnacle. Once there was an ugly barnacle, he was so ugly that everyone died.

The End

I hope my story wins

ShadowyWhisper
02-07-2013, 06:11 PM
This should count as spam.

isgood
02-07-2013, 06:42 PM
It's called the ugly barnacle. Once there was an ugly barnacle, he was so ugly that everyone died.

The End

LOL!!!!

That Other Guy
02-07-2013, 08:15 PM
This should count as spam.

In what way does this count as spam?

ShadowyWhisper
02-07-2013, 08:16 PM
You made a story that was 2 sentences, then quoted your own story with a 2 word reply...

Luzoto
02-07-2013, 08:18 PM
You made a story that was 2 sentences, then quoted your own story with a 2 word reply...

It's a joke, and I doubt many people here think it's worthy of an infraction. If you think it's troublesome, feel free to use the 'Report Post' button at the bottom left corner.

Oh, and that's a five word reply =P

_Ai_
02-08-2013, 01:46 AM
Yes, agreed, it's not worthy of infraction. However, if you think that should be reported, I'll dig some of yours, and report them.

That Other Guy
02-09-2013, 09:17 AM
You made a story that was 2 sentences, then quoted your own story with a 2 word reply...

Anyway, I didn't actually want the story to win, it was merely a joke. I have no intentions of spamming people on here anyway, there's no point in spamming, but it doesn't hurt to mess around every so often.

Panki
02-12-2013, 08:49 PM
Well Damn typing this is gonna be pretty hard. I'm gonna do this on Friday since I have no school. Part 1 drags on, rarely any fights, but it carries important details, so I recommend to read it anyway.

DragonFrost
02-13-2013, 07:28 AM
Panki, do you have your story ready? If so, please send me the link

Triss
02-13-2013, 07:30 AM
lol, I'm started to think that this page was never made(I totally forgot about it)
Does this event have a text trophy?

DragonFrost
02-13-2013, 07:32 AM
Should have. I think kingkickass2013 is making it.

Triss
02-17-2013, 07:53 AM
I bump dis.
Panki have you finished your story?

Panki
02-17-2013, 07:58 AM
I started it yesterday and I regret making these Parts so long.

DragonFrost
02-17-2013, 07:58 AM
I started it yesterday and I regret making these Parts so long.

Panki, so slow :(

Triss
02-17-2013, 08:07 AM
I started it yesterday and I regret making these Parts so long.
So you made it or not?

That Other Guy
02-17-2013, 12:37 PM
Someone should make a live action film.

ShadowyWhisper
02-17-2013, 04:22 PM
I made one!

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Cinderella. She was very poor and was being mistreated by her sisters. She got a magic shoe and married a prince

THE END.

That Other Guy
02-17-2013, 05:53 PM
I made one!

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Cinderella. She was very poor and was being mistreated by her sisters. She got a magic shoe and married a prince

THE END.

You forgot the part where she died. That's the most important part too.

Panki
02-17-2013, 06:32 PM
Working on the post. included the prologue too.



Edit: Aaaaaaaand..... I'm forced to put a pause on it for tonight.

Triss
02-22-2013, 05:27 AM
2nd Bump!
Panki have you finished yet?

Ninjareviver
02-22-2013, 01:56 PM
It’s not that long, I wrote this in like in hour. It’s just a story about the Elemental empire, not as good as Searton’s Trilogy though (which should be a freaking movie)

Three years after the defeat of the Rebellion and the victory of Order, a group of four Magikill became obsessed with a new type of power, a stronger power. Spending months of trial and error they’ve finally found the solution they’ve been looking for... Elements.

The four elements were: Fire, Water, Air and Earth. The idea that the four Magikill had, was that after you drank one of the four different elemental potions, you would
genetically be able to produce that certain element at will. The four Magikill went to present their invention at town square, where their idea was laughed at and considered pointless.

The Magikill, angry at the fact that months work that could solve Inamorta’s drougth and a better source of fuel for fire was rejected, gathered together with their families and went rogue on an island south of Inamorta, vowing for redemption while they slowly start their secret civilisation.

5 years past and the secret civilisation now known as Wonders Island has become a full breed of a new type of human called, Elementerians. The people of Wonders Island, who are still not aware of the War of Chaos and the unity of the other clans, have figured that combining the potions will give more powerful elements. Managing to figure out 6 more useful combinations for war, which encourages the 4 leaders of Wonder Island to plan a full scale invasion of South Inamorta.

Thus becoming The Elemental Era.

kingkickass2013
02-22-2013, 02:10 PM
nice story tell tecness this it may be put into the actual game (im pretty damn sure tecness has contacts with the big man himself, the creator of all stick empires)

Panki
02-22-2013, 03:50 PM
2nd Bump!
Panki have you finished yet?

I'm forced to work on it only on weekends -_-.
Why are you so worried? It's not as good as yours.

Triss
02-22-2013, 10:34 PM
I'm forced to work on it only on weekends -_-.
Why are you so worried? It's not as good as yours.
Don't be so pessimistic -_-
Now where's you story?

Xate
02-23-2013, 08:58 AM
My story... Gotta finish it...

_Ai_
02-23-2013, 08:59 AM
My story... Gotta finish it...

Gamer, where have you been all this time?
I already kicked you from the tournament...

Xate
02-23-2013, 09:22 AM
I know... Lunar New Year's holiday was too awesome...

Xate
02-23-2013, 09:23 AM
But I was fighting daemon right? Or is it a different one? Anyway, I'm back in business now...

_Ai_
02-23-2013, 09:43 AM
But I was fighting daemon right? Or is it a different one? Anyway, I'm back in business now...

Good for you.

Panki
02-24-2013, 01:15 AM
Noe that I released the story, I can finally breathe.

_Ai_
02-24-2013, 01:17 AM
Noe that I released the story, I can finally breathe.

Good. Dont die on me!

Triss
03-07-2013, 05:33 AM
Epic Bump! (3 pages across lol)
Frost, could I make another story?
I just need something to do.

DragonFrost
03-07-2013, 06:50 AM
If you want. The rules state that you may create more than 1 story.

That Other Guy
03-14-2013, 04:24 PM
Are the results in?

DragonFrost
03-14-2013, 07:34 PM
Nope. I'm going to do the poll on April 1st. Refer to the first page for entrants.

ShadowyWhisper
03-14-2013, 07:41 PM
So this poll and the whole competition is an April Fool's joke.

Panki
03-14-2013, 07:54 PM
Yeah fuck that shit. My journal got ruined and I lost like half my story.

Triss
03-15-2013, 06:50 PM
Actually, I agree.
We're trolled by Frost by making long-ass story @.@