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05-25-2008, 06:51 AM
Hi iīm new and this is my first animation on flash.:Smile:
Please can i have tipps , how i can do this better?

http:// img236.imageshack.us/img236/5497/myfirstmp8.gif
I canīt post a url :Cry: , but copy the link and
do http://---><--- img236.imageshack.us/..... together!


05-25-2008, 06:57 AM
Alright, first work on stiffness. That means the whole body moves when he's running. Not just the legs. Look in a mirror or looks at someone else running. Try to imitate that movement.

Use particles for blood and the beam dissapearing. That means you split the beam/blood into smaller and smaller parts as it moves away until they finally dissapear. (See some particle tutorials if you didn't get that.)

And when he's running two lines appeared on the background. Are those intentional?

05-25-2008, 10:11 AM
cant say much more i can say.
look at some tutorials

off subject:i cant see then lines?

05-25-2008, 10:51 AM
Your animation is stiff, but stiffyness is when you don't bend your limbs enough. You have to work on normal movements, like running.
Work on particles and blood aswell.
Not bad for a first, so keep it up!