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inferno222
05-25-2008, 02:32 PM
i always make 1 punch or something like this, but this time i make a stickman fighting with 4 enemys here is it :P
http://www.*************/open/1211741452
and here the same with a modification
http://www.*************/open/1211741598
i only want to make 2 changes, 1 shoot hit him in the body and don't bleed and another shoot hit him in the feet and don't bleed
c&c plz :D

inferno222
05-26-2008, 10:02 PM
plz say something , i want to make better fight.. , but i want crytics :D

viva la vida
05-26-2008, 10:18 PM
i like it but maybe you can up the frame rate just a little bit
i give it a 4/5

inferno222
05-26-2008, 10:37 PM
you mean fps? now it's with 18fps i always make my animation with 18 fps , but i can post with 22 fps here is it:
http://www.*************/open/1211857126

Drifts
05-27-2008, 03:24 AM
I have to say, what didnt make sense was the end, the gun ran out of ammo and then suddenly without he can shoot without bending down to get the ammo. But it could use some improvement, a bit more evasion dodging the bullets. keep goin you'll get there.

leedon
05-27-2008, 03:42 AM
It's really stiff. The punches and kicks were weak.

Tolin
05-27-2008, 03:56 AM
I have to say, what didnt make sense was the end, the gun ran out of ammo and then suddenly without he can shoot without bending down to get the ammo. But it could use some improvement, a bit more evasion dodging the bullets. keep goin you'll get there.

The stick was actually reloading if you didn't noticed..
The animation was really slow, not meaning too low framerate(=fps), but the stick always had pauses during the fight. Needs more flow.
Also stiff and weak, as someone already said..
Work on gunshots.

inferno222
05-27-2008, 10:37 AM
oh thanks :P i try to fix it :D

Tronika
05-27-2008, 02:59 PM
the animation isn't stiffy?

leedon
05-27-2008, 03:02 PM
Correct, because It made me lose my stiffy.

Tentionmaru
05-27-2008, 03:44 PM
it was very robotic looking. there isnt a good sense of style, and overall it seemed boring.

ravemaster112
05-28-2008, 04:24 AM
gd try but it needs some sounds of him running gunshot sounds would be cool.:Smile: