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Sans
02-13-2013, 05:00 AM
Did i improve? lol xD

Tell me some tips to get better buddy ! (maybe on the deffense stick)
http://www.fileize.com/view/cf9d2aeb-97b/

a bit rushed
CNC TIME

Nimbus
02-13-2013, 06:50 AM
I'ts good, but a little bit fast and i'ts hard to see. Try to make every move slow and detailed to make shure that the hits and kicks are really visible. By the way i't pretty good! Keep going :D

Sans
02-13-2013, 07:15 AM
thx nimbus ! i take your tips to my brain :D

Samy Ichiro
02-13-2013, 10:01 AM
its rushed but the movements were good try to decrease fps and add more frames

Quik
02-13-2013, 01:53 PM
The movements are way too fast, it's choppy, it's wobbly, it needs more easing, the special effects are too tweened and basic, the blood also needs more detail, and the over all particles need to be more thorough...

Keep working...

Molgera
02-13-2013, 02:54 PM
It looks sloppy and rushed.
Needs to be improved.