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Bori
03-01-2013, 06:13 AM
That FlareFX is from Guz!
thank you Guz for share this Flare

swf : http://www.fileize.com/files/e390436a/2c3/Sword_practice.swf

avi : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R7ItT29VfUA

CrewKid
03-01-2013, 01:10 PM
Okay not bad on the wind up but it could use a lot of work.
Here's my cnc.

The flare fx is not needed at all and actually distracts from the animation.
Add more inbetweens and easing because its really choppy after the 1st hit
Dont overuse the black frame it gets annoying and is kinda lazy.
Dont ONLY use blood overlays or pictures, mix in your own and be original. Plus it looks bad as the wall blood in this case, add some of your own to compliment it.

Bori
03-01-2013, 05:35 PM
Okay not bad on the wind up but it could use a lot of work.
Here's my cnc.

The flare fx is not needed at all and actually distracts from the animation.
Add more inbetweens and easing because its really choppy after the 1st hit
Dont overuse the black frame it gets annoying and is kinda lazy.
Dont ONLY use blood overlays or pictures, mix in your own and be original. Plus it looks bad as the wall blood in this case, add some of your own to compliment it.
Oh ok I understand!