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PivotAncient
05-29-2008, 02:47 AM
Key:
1=Low Beginner
2=Med Beginner
3=High Beginner
4=Borderline Inter
5=Inter

C&C please, I will return. Comment other wise on how I can improve on my animations, or what theme I should animate.

Warning: Please see the animation first before reading the summary. The summary contains spoilers.

I would like to thank: Droidz for the sticks, effects, weapons, and backgrounds. All the people that made these sticks, if you come across this thread, I credited you.

Thanks.

NEWEST

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/CliffDeath-1.gif
This guy falls off the cliff, and his friend has these weird kinds of guns that doesn't kill, but it is strong enough to lift up this guy. In the end, the friend decides to kill the guy with a grenade launcher.

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/Assassinepisode1-1.gif
This is episode of one of my future series about a assassin named Tom Sawyer, aka "Sticker" who is a assassin for hire. This animation only gave me the ideas on the story which will be shown next episode.

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/slides.gif
Something random that I came up with, the first scene shows you 2 noobs that are fighting each other(Bad movements on purpose) and a pro(med beginner) comes down and kills them. The second shows the pro fighting another pro who has a sword (failed the slow mo part)

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/bigvssmall-1.gif
A big dude Vs a little dude, who will win? I have to admit, I was lazy that day, so I forgot to move some of the smaller objects like the blood and stick. I made all of the sticks, weapons, and effects in this animation.

Criticism?


OLDEST

Blot
05-29-2008, 03:03 AM
im sorry not good, quite stiff, although somewhat smooth, remember to credit peopleu got those sticks off even if u got them off droidz

Scarecrow
05-29-2008, 03:34 AM
Why does the blood come out of his legs when he got stabbed in the chest, hmm?

PivotAncient
05-29-2008, 04:17 AM
Why does the blood come out of his legs when he got stabbed in the chest, hmm?

Because his blood sprays in a upward position, and he falls fast. Sorry if you didn't catch that.

Edward0-I oversmoothed the flip part a little bit, made it pretty stiff, I need to work on that >.<

bustastks
05-29-2008, 05:43 AM
Hey im in the random collab too. I think the slump was not smooth enough

GhostFace
05-29-2008, 06:30 AM
Edward0-I oversmoothed the flip part a little bit, made it pretty stiff, I need to work on that >.<

WTF you can't oversmooth something and in turn make it stiff.
You just contradicted your self.
Definately work on your stiffness.
Credit the .stks you used from droidz too, which seems like quite alot.

Mcteks
05-29-2008, 06:32 AM
no offence but the random collab must suck <:0
but like ghostface mentioned, really stiff, oversmoothing would mean that it'd have a really smooth look, but yours didnt. dont confuse yourself ;3.

Blot
05-29-2008, 06:37 AM
seee i told ya it was stiff and i told u to cred droidz cheers for back up ghost face

PivotAncient
05-29-2008, 02:11 PM
Um, did you read the post correctly, I did credit them.

Anyways, Sacred excepted it when he heard the audio version so cheers.

Zsdery
05-29-2008, 04:49 PM
Hello Hello, instead of making thread by thread with animations, I will use this thread to keep all of my animations. (Would be a lot more organized if everyone did this)

Here is my final for the "Random Collab" project without the music.

>>>>>>>(Got everything (except line) from Droidz)<<<<<<<

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n173/lordofsaver/Random.gif

Please C&C, Thanks.
so... you got your signatuure from droidz LOLZ
begginers section

GhostFace
05-29-2008, 05:37 PM
Um, did you read the post correctly, I did credit them.

Anyways, Sacred excepted it when he heard the audio version so cheers.

Yeh after editing your first post.
Lol the front of the sword goes through his body.
You REALLY need to practice.
Head on over to DD they have a great collection of tutorials, check the pivot tutorial master list.

ThatGuy
05-29-2008, 06:06 PM
Why does no one in this thread seem to know what they're talking about, it can be smooth and stiff. But it wasn't ever smooth and it was always stiff.

Everything was wrong, make it less bad.

PivotAncient
06-06-2008, 06:15 AM
Why does no one in this thread seem to know what they're talking about, it can be smooth and stiff. But it wasn't ever smooth and it was always stiff.

Everything was wrong, make it less bad.

Thanks for the advice.

Bumping also, added new stuff.

Blot
06-12-2008, 03:05 AM
im sorry pivotancient ur not med beginner....... i am still med beginner and i am pretty sure my anms r better than urs

Spartan1105
06-12-2008, 07:03 PM
Stiffy stiffy :P
2 xD

stickmaneatingicecream
06-13-2008, 11:32 PM
i like the randomness i want more >:(

trauma
06-14-2008, 11:19 PM
very stiff, remember move every joint in every frame.

Squeegy
06-14-2008, 11:22 PM
What's with all the newbs posting in every topic to get posts up?

EDIT: The sticks in the giant vs small one move teleport around and are way too stiff.

Squeegy
06-14-2008, 11:24 PM
Forgot I already had a post. =/

Nebakenezzer
06-15-2008, 03:32 AM
ratings lead to suiside,
so just post in beginner section :D

awsaludares
06-15-2008, 04:52 AM
i don't get it you know.what is it about?

luckyjoe
06-17-2008, 06:04 AM
good, sorta, work on it, your getting there