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Sherbet
05-29-2008, 07:53 AM
credit to edward0 for helpin me do these, he is a good teacher, *lol*




i tried to see if i can puch

try 1

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/41/pucnh1rv5.th.gif (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pucnh1rv5.gif)


next i put a step in

try 2

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9348/puch2kn9.th.gif (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=puch2kn9.gif)

this time, i snapped the arm

try 3

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/6373/puch3wg8.th.gif (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=puch3wg8.gif)

now i improved the fall of the arm

try 4

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/8594/puch4mu5.th.gif (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=puch4mu5.gif)


constructive c&c plz?


EDIT: just in case..... the stk is mine, not available for download yet. sorry.

Blot
05-29-2008, 08:02 AM
yeh its ok just remember let the arm hit the body otherwise it will look stiff

Sherbet
05-29-2008, 08:03 AM
thanks dude, i owe you one, LMAO

Dragonkof
05-29-2008, 08:10 AM
your main problem is stiffness.

i dont like how the arm swings then snaps straight.
Maybe that should be an uppercut?

GhostFace
05-29-2008, 08:16 AM
Yeh like Drag said.. stiffness is your problem.
Your not easing your movements.
You moved the arm back and stopped it, the the forearm was moved.
It all needs to be one motion.

EDIT: check this tut out, read the wholeof it, it helps a damn lot

http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=40319&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

Oh and your .stk is basically a rip of Jon's headchopper Wu, un-original and boring.

Deathwish
05-29-2008, 08:32 AM
You need a better teacher.

They are way to stiff, the easing is pretty bad and you only moved the arms.

Keep practising and get a better teacher, pm Pf0 and tell him i said he has to teach you.

Naglfar
05-29-2008, 10:00 AM
Work majorly on easing, and try to move EVERY limb in an animation.
What DW said.
You need a better mentor..

Sherbet
05-29-2008, 10:51 AM
ok, thanks for all the help guys, and yes..... it was a rip off of wu, BUT, i didnt use his base stk, i made my own.