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mindgem
05-30-2008, 09:22 PM
This is my latest animation. C&C please.

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crazy flasher27
05-30-2008, 11:41 PM
whoa dude that was great!:heh: :Spiderman:

Blot
05-30-2008, 11:50 PM
quite good how long u been animating?

mindgem
05-31-2008, 11:39 AM
not long i just started again 3 days ago....i feel that the back is a little stiff and there is too much sliding

Fplus
05-31-2008, 01:36 PM
That was pretty good. I'd say your main flaw is stiffness, but the rest wasn't bad.

Automaton
05-31-2008, 03:08 PM
no really, it was bad. there was little to no easing, it wasnt smooth enough and it was unrealistic. for now go to the beginners section and read a few general movement and physics/easing tuts.

mindgem
05-31-2008, 10:27 PM
Thanks, but accually i did use easing. apperantly not enough since you cant tell but i did use some. I cant see how it was unrealistic, because i can do all that stuff except the handstand backflip in real life. Thanks for the C&C.

Blot
05-31-2008, 10:52 PM
i agree with jcrp1, but it is very good for 3 days of pivoting

infoto
06-01-2008, 12:04 AM
good news
whoa 3 days only
man i salute youve definately got alot of potential

bad newz
youve got problems on physics, and easing

ehhhh

mindgem
06-01-2008, 12:14 AM
i cant quite figure them out....and dont tell me to view easing tuts because they helps me none. I havent viewd any physics tuts, i will do that. Thanks for the C&C

Naglfar
06-01-2008, 01:32 AM
You have the same problem as Edward.
Watch the back. Move it..
Yes, more easing, it looked like the stick man had too much caffeine..
Easing..Easing....
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Sherbet
06-01-2008, 05:52 AM
very stiff... he slides a little to far, the punch, dont swing the arm down then up, you need to snap it forward...

plutonium
06-01-2008, 10:09 AM
the combo is very bad, sorry but It's not good..

mindgem
06-01-2008, 12:36 PM
Ok thanks for the comment anyway